Aug. 22, 2025
How do you spend your time during a long-haul flight?
If the plane I'm on has an entertainment system, I usually play games or watch movies on it. However, the size of screen is generally small, so I can't see it for long time because of tired eyes. I think sleeping might be the best way to spend too much time.
However, the size of the screen is generally small, so I can't seewatch it for a long time because ofmy eyes get tired eyes.
"see" is passive. It's more like 見える . "watch" is active, and better to use in this situation.
I think sleeping might be the best way to spend time when I have too much time.
Just more natural phrasing.
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I wish I could sleep on planes, but I can't. So usually I bring a bunch of electronic devices and a book. Usually for long flights I finish the book and use up all the batteries though...
Aug. 23, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
It must be difficult to remember the nuances of different vocabulary expressions.
How do you spend your time during a long-haul flight?
If the plane I'm on has an entertainment system, I usually play games or watch movies on it.
However, the size of screen is generally small, so I can't usee it for too long time because ofit tireds my eyes.
I think sleeping might be the best way to spend too muchmost of my time.
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Good job!
I've been on 17 hour long flights before when I was a kid. I'd probably would've enjoyed it if there was a video game entertainment system. I just watched whatever movie(s) were available for in-flight entertainment. I remember watching the first of Michael Bay's "Transformers" movies, "Ratatouille", and "Harry Potter and the Half Blood Prince" on those flights. Because I was a kid, I also remember occasionally flipping it to a channel that had information about the flight. There was a real time map of where the plane was, the plane's speed, and also the weather. For some reason I found that entertaining as a child. Other than that, I slept, talked to my family, and ate the food they provided.
Aug. 23, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful correction.
It's so nice to have Disney and Pixar movies.
Until now, I've often flown alone, so I basically spent the whole flight sleeping.
How do you spend your time during a long-haul flight?
If the plane I'm on has an entertainment system, I usually play games or watch movies on it.
However, the size of screen is generally small, so I can't usee it for long time because of tired eyes.
When talking about something a physical item / real thing, you wouldn't say you "can't see" something unless you physically cannot see it. For example, "I can't see the screen because it is blocked by a person" or "I can't see because I am blind".
I think sleeping might be the best way to spend too muchmost of my time.
"Too much" is normally a negative thing. You would use it to say something is negatively too much most of the time. For example: "There is too much rain", "Don't add too much sugar", "I can't do too much to help". There are some exceptions but you wouldn't use it in the way you have typically.
Aug. 22, 2025
A very good job overall though!
素晴らしい！
Aug. 22, 2025
I missed this but I see someone else has commented on it already! But:
`size of screen` should be `size of the screen`.
Aug. 23, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
It must be difficult to remember the nuances of different vocabulary expressions.
Aug. 23, 2025
You're already doing great. Those small nuances you'll pick up with practice and don't need to force yourself to memorise.
How do you spend your time during a long- haul flight?
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Aug. 23, 2025
Thank you very much for the careful correction.
Aug. 23, 2025
You're welcome.
If the plane I'm on has an entertainment system, I usually play games or watch movies on it.
However, the size of screen is generally small, so I can't see it for long time because of tired eyes.
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なんか違うけど、どう直せばいいのか分からない。
I think sleeping might be the best way to spend too muchkill the time.
つぶすと言いたいですよね
Aug. 23, 2025
Thank you very much for the careful correction.
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