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666coolboy

April 5, 2022

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How do you become yourself in people?

Every time we are the real ourselves. I don‘t think sometimes we show fake emotion to people and we think we are not ourselves at this time. All of the emotions we express and produce are parts of us which include vanity, cruelty, hypocrisy, kindness, and innocent.

Maybe you mean how to accept yourself when you are expressing bad emotions. Personally, I love every part of myself. No one is perfect, I love this saying. Learn to how to accept yourself is important. There are three days that can help you:


1. Smiling in front of the mirror every morning. Your confidence will be built in the behavior step by step and you will be more positive day by day.

2. Treating people around you kindly and honestly. People often will reciprocate whatever it is you do to them. You will get more and more positive loops if you follow this rule.

3. Making more and more money based on the standard you can keep your health and love. Money can’t do everything but you can’t do everything if you don’t have it.


Let’s love life, make the money, treat people around us well, and enjoy inner peace.

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How do you become yourself inwith people?

Every time we are thour real ourselves -- ¶

W
e are al ourways our real selves.

This is a sentence fragment. What happens when you are your real self?

Maybe you meant the second suggestion.

I don‘t think sometimes we show fake emotions to people and we thinkbelieve we are not ourselves at this time.

Thinking and believing can be used interchangeably, but there are differences in connotation. Thinking is a process to decide or determine truth, while believing is accepting something as true whether you thought about it or not. So, if the conclusion is more likely to be false use the word believe, unless you literally thought incorrectly.

All of the emotions we express and produce are parts of us which, includeing vanity, cruelty, hypocrisy, kindness, and innocentce.

These are personality traits. Emotions are happiness, sadness, anger and contentment.

Maybe you meanthe trick is how to accept yourself when you are expressing badfalse emotions.

I added a colloquial phrase 'the trick'. The word bad doesn't work in this context. False is a better choice.

Personally, I love every part of myself.

NEven though no one is perfect, I love this saying.

Personally, I love every part of myself, even though I'm not perfect. I love that saying, 'No one is perfect'.

LSo, learning to how to accept yourself is important.

There are three dways that cano help yourself

Your confidence will be built in the behavior step by step The behavior will increase your confidence gradually and you will be more positive day byeach day.

People will often will reciprocate whatever it is you do tohow you treat them.

I moved often, it sounds more natural to me there, in front of the 'main' verb.

Money can’t do everything but you can’t do everanything if you don’t have it.

Let’s love life, make the money, treat people around us well, and enjoy our inner peace together.

Removed the, because it was incorrect. I also deleted some words and added some words because it was too wordy in the middle. Sounds more natural, positive and enlightening this way.

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666coolboy's avatar
666coolboy

April 6, 2022

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Thank you for your encouragement, I am really appreciated it.

How do you become yourself inwhen you are around other people?

Not sure what exactly your title means - this is a guess!

Every time wWe are the our "real ourselves" all of the time.

again, this is a guess in terms of your meaning.

I don‘t think sSometimes we show fake emotions to people and we think we are not ourselves at this time.

Not clear what "I don't think" refers to. "At this time" is correct but awkward. I'm also not sure whether you want to use "self" or "selves" throughout.

All of the emotions we express and produce are parts of us which include vanity, cruelty, hypocrisy, kindness, and innocentce.

Maybe you mean how tohave problems accepting yourself when you are expressing bad emotions.

No one is perfect, I love this saying.I love the saying, "No one is perfect."

Learn to howing to accept yourself is important.

There are three daythings that can help you:

could also be "techniques"

1. Smiling in front of the mirror every morning.

YStep by step your confidence will be built inwith theis behavior step by step and you will be more positive day by day.

Moving "step by step" is style, not grammar. "In" is primarily used for location; here "with" means "because of" or "as a result of"

People will often will reciprocate whatever it is you do tofor them.

You will get more and more positive loopresponses if you follow this rule.

"loops" doesn't fit here

3. Making more and more money based onin order to reach the standard where you can keep your health and love.

Money can’t do everything but you can’t do everyany thing if you don’t have it.

Your original sentence is grammatically correct but the meaning isn't quite right; my correction isn't quite right either. Best which be "much" (vs. every thing / any thing)

Let’s love life, make the money, treat the people around us well, and enjoy inner peace.

anna_f's avatar
anna_f

April 5, 2022

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Because you are talking about abstract concepts, it's probably harder than usual to get the correct meaning and vocabulary. Keep writing!

666coolboy's avatar
666coolboy

April 6, 2022

1

Because you are talking about abstract concepts, it's probably harder than usual to get the correct meaning and vocabulary. Keep writing!

Thanks for your encouragement and have a nice day!

How do you become yourself in people?


How do you become yourself inwhen you are around other people?

Not sure what exactly your title means - this is a guess!

How do you become yourself inwith people?

Every time we are the real ourselves.


Every time wWe are the our "real ourselves" all of the time.

again, this is a guess in terms of your meaning.

Every time we are thour real ourselves -- ¶

W
e are al ourways our real selves.

This is a sentence fragment. What happens when you are your real self? Maybe you meant the second suggestion.

I don‘t think sometimes we show fake emotion to people and we think we are not ourselves at this time.


I don‘t think sSometimes we show fake emotions to people and we think we are not ourselves at this time.

Not clear what "I don't think" refers to. "At this time" is correct but awkward. I'm also not sure whether you want to use "self" or "selves" throughout.

I don‘t think sometimes we show fake emotions to people and we thinkbelieve we are not ourselves at this time.

Thinking and believing can be used interchangeably, but there are differences in connotation. Thinking is a process to decide or determine truth, while believing is accepting something as true whether you thought about it or not. So, if the conclusion is more likely to be false use the word believe, unless you literally thought incorrectly.

All of the emotions we express and produce are parts of us which include vanity, cruelty, hypocrisy, kindness, and innocent.


All of the emotions we express and produce are parts of us which include vanity, cruelty, hypocrisy, kindness, and innocentce.

All of the emotions we express and produce are parts of us which, includeing vanity, cruelty, hypocrisy, kindness, and innocentce.

These are personality traits. Emotions are happiness, sadness, anger and contentment.

Maybe you mean how to accept yourself when you are expressing bad emotions.


Maybe you mean how tohave problems accepting yourself when you are expressing bad emotions.

Maybe you meanthe trick is how to accept yourself when you are expressing badfalse emotions.

I added a colloquial phrase 'the trick'. The word bad doesn't work in this context. False is a better choice.

Personally, I love every part of myself.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

No one is perfect, I love this saying.


No one is perfect, I love this saying.I love the saying, "No one is perfect."

NEven though no one is perfect, I love this saying.

Personally, I love every part of myself, even though I'm not perfect. I love that saying, 'No one is perfect'.

Learn to how to accept yourself is important.


Learn to howing to accept yourself is important.

LSo, learning to how to accept yourself is important.

There are three days that can help you:


There are three daythings that can help you:

could also be "techniques"

There are three dways that cano help yourself

1. Smiling in front of the mirror every morning.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Your confidence will be built in the behavior step by step and you will be more positive day by day.


YStep by step your confidence will be built inwith theis behavior step by step and you will be more positive day by day.

Moving "step by step" is style, not grammar. "In" is primarily used for location; here "with" means "because of" or "as a result of"

Your confidence will be built in the behavior step by step The behavior will increase your confidence gradually and you will be more positive day byeach day.

2. Treating people around you kindly and honestly.


People often will reciprocate whatever it is you do to them.


People will often will reciprocate whatever it is you do tofor them.

People will often will reciprocate whatever it is you do tohow you treat them.

I moved often, it sounds more natural to me there, in front of the 'main' verb.

You will get more and more positive loops if you follow this rule.


You will get more and more positive loopresponses if you follow this rule.

"loops" doesn't fit here

3. Making more and more money based on the standard you can keep your health and love.


3. Making more and more money based onin order to reach the standard where you can keep your health and love.

Money can’t do everything but you can’t do everything if you don’t have it.


Money can’t do everything but you can’t do everyany thing if you don’t have it.

Your original sentence is grammatically correct but the meaning isn't quite right; my correction isn't quite right either. Best which be "much" (vs. every thing / any thing)

Money can’t do everything but you can’t do everanything if you don’t have it.

Let’s love life, make the money, treat people around us well, and enjoy inner peace.


Let’s love life, make the money, treat the people around us well, and enjoy inner peace.

Let’s love life, make the money, treat people around us well, and enjoy our inner peace together.

Removed the, because it was incorrect. I also deleted some words and added some words because it was too wordy in the middle. Sounds more natural, positive and enlightening this way.

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