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666coolboy

May 3, 2022

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How do we know we fell in love?

You fell in love when you cannot stop missing a girl and want to get a touch with her. This is a truth!

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You fellknow you have fallen in love when you cannot stop missing a girl and want to get ain touch with her.


You Would not say you want to get a touch with her because that would sound ridiculous he would have to say you would like to kiss her or hold her hand or something

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666coolboy

May 5, 2022

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Thank you. I am appreciated.

How do we know we fell[if/when] we've fallen in love?

You fell in love when you cannot stop missing a girl and want to get a touch withave fallen in love with a girl if you constantly miss her and want to touch her.

There are a variety of ways to express this, depending on the nuances of what you intended. Another alternative would be "if you cannot stop thinking about her"

This is athe truth!

How do we know we fellhave fallen in love?

It's either "How do we know we have fallen in love?" or "How did we know we fell in love?" It depends on whether you want to use the present tense or the past tense. Given the explanation below, it sounds like you wanted to use the present tense.

You fellhave fallen in love when you cannot stop missing a girl and want to get a touch wittouch her.

The present tense is "You have fallen in love..." Also, at the end of the sentence, I'm not sure whether you mean you want to touch her (like you want to put your hands on her body) or you want to get in touch with her (like you want to call her, text her, etc.).

This is athe truth!

In this context, you would say "This is the truth" or "This is a fact," but American's rarely say "This is a truth."

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I hope these edits help. Overall, great job! I was just fine tuning your grammar. Good luck!

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666coolboy

May 5, 2022

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Thank you so much for editing and patient! Have a lovely day!

You fell in love when you cannot stop missing a girl and want to get a touch with her.

You know you fell in love when you cannot stop missing a girl and want to get in touch with her.
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You know you fell in love when you cannot stop missing a girl and want to touch her.

There are more ways you could say that, depending on your intended verb tense. If the person is still currently in love, the beginning part would be edited from "you fell in love" to "you've fallen in love". You've or you have are the same thing, but in very formal writing you would use you have. If the past tense is intended, then it sounds better to say "you know you fell in love". It sounds more natural, and it relates better to the title.

The last part of the sentence needs to be changed depending on what you are trying to say. If you know you've fallen in love partly because you want to contact her or talk to her, then the correct ending would be "want to get in touch with her". That's just how the saying goes, so change "a touch" to "in touch". If you wanted to say, you know because you want to touch her, then you would end the sentence with "want to touch her", like in the example above. I wanted to cover a lot of possibilities in this correction, I hope it was helpful.

If anything I said was confusing or unclear, let me know and I'll explain. Good work!!

This is a truth!

Change "a" to "the". It sounds more natural!

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666coolboy

May 5, 2022

1

Thank you so much for editing and patient! Have a lovely day!

How do we know we fell in love?


How do we know we fellhave fallen in love?

It's either "How do we know we have fallen in love?" or "How did we know we fell in love?" It depends on whether you want to use the present tense or the past tense. Given the explanation below, it sounds like you wanted to use the present tense.

How do we know we fell[if/when] we've fallen in love?

You fell in love when you cannot stop missing a girl and want to get a touch with her.


You fell in love when you cannot stop missing a girl and want to get a touch with her.

You know you fell in love when you cannot stop missing a girl and want to get in touch with her. or You know you fell in love when you cannot stop missing a girl and want to touch her. There are more ways you could say that, depending on your intended verb tense. If the person is still currently in love, the beginning part would be edited from "you fell in love" to "you've fallen in love". You've or you have are the same thing, but in very formal writing you would use you have. If the past tense is intended, then it sounds better to say "you know you fell in love". It sounds more natural, and it relates better to the title. The last part of the sentence needs to be changed depending on what you are trying to say. If you know you've fallen in love partly because you want to contact her or talk to her, then the correct ending would be "want to get in touch with her". That's just how the saying goes, so change "a touch" to "in touch". If you wanted to say, you know because you want to touch her, then you would end the sentence with "want to touch her", like in the example above. I wanted to cover a lot of possibilities in this correction, I hope it was helpful. If anything I said was confusing or unclear, let me know and I'll explain. Good work!!

You fellhave fallen in love when you cannot stop missing a girl and want to get a touch wittouch her.

The present tense is "You have fallen in love..." Also, at the end of the sentence, I'm not sure whether you mean you want to touch her (like you want to put your hands on her body) or you want to get in touch with her (like you want to call her, text her, etc.).

You fell in love when you cannot stop missing a girl and want to get a touch withave fallen in love with a girl if you constantly miss her and want to touch her.

There are a variety of ways to express this, depending on the nuances of what you intended. Another alternative would be "if you cannot stop thinking about her"

You fellknow you have fallen in love when you cannot stop missing a girl and want to get ain touch with her.

You Would not say you want to get a touch with her because that would sound ridiculous he would have to say you would like to kiss her or hold her hand or something

This is a truth!


This is a truth!

Change "a" to "the". It sounds more natural!

This is athe truth!

In this context, you would say "This is the truth" or "This is a fact," but American's rarely say "This is a truth."

This is athe truth!

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