July 11, 2025
How did you find Langcurret
There are subject named information.
In information class, I searched about effects that smartphone give us.
In the process of searching in English to want many information, I pressed advertisement or url.
As a result, I found Langcorrect.
In this time, Engligh was interesting for me.
Video made by person who interact foreign people influenced me.
So I decided to write Langcorecct
日本には情報の科目があります。
情報の授業中、私はスマートフォンが私達に与える影響について調べていました。
沢山の情報が欲しいため英語で調べている途中、広告かurlを推しました
そしてlangcorrectにたどり着いたのです。
私はこの頃、英語に興味を持っていました。
youtubeで海外の人と交流する人の動画を見て影響を受けたのです。
なので、私はlangcorrectに書き込みをすることを決めました。
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There are class subject nams called i"Information."
Corrected this for the most basic, but you might be trying to say this instead: "There are school (or college) classes for information systems."
In informationDuring this class, I searched about effects that smartphone give us.for information about the influence of smartphones on people. (or society)
In the process of searching in English to want many information, I pressedWhile I was searching for information in English, I clicked on an advertisement or url..
As a result, I found Langcorrect.
In this time, Engligh was interesting for me.Recently, I have become interested in English.
more natural
Video made by person who interact foreign people influenced me.I was influenced by videos on YouTube of foreigners interacting with other people.
I think this is what you mean. It still sounds a little unnatural using "interacting" - sounds a little cold. Depending on what you wanted to focus on, might consider what types of interactions; classroom, shopping, traveling, interviews....etc. For example, I was influenced by YouTube videos of foreigners being interviewed about _______. (could use: "the soaring cost of rice", "the newest cat cafe", "what they thought about their visit to Japan" ) Hope this helps.
SoTherefore, I decided to writuse LangcoCorrecct.
There areis a subject namcalled information.
Tricky subject/verb here, but I understood exactly what you meant. Good work!
In information class, I searched about effects that smartphones give us.
It might be more natural to say "I looked up the effects that smartphones have on us," but this is just a stylistic choice.
In the process of searching in English to want manyget more information, I pressedclicked on an advertisement or url.
"There was an advertisement when I was searching in English to get more results, so I clicked on that" might make this sentence sound more native.
InAt this time, Engligsh wais interesting forto me.
VA video made by a person who interacts with foreign people influenced me.
So I decided to write on Langcorrecct
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You have a good grasp of basic English and I understood everything you wrote. Really excellent work! Keep refining your articles and prepositions, and keep writing to get stylistic feedback. I'm excited to read more of your work!
July 11, 2025
Thank you so much!I am not good at English so I’m glad to watched that.
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There are subject named information. There Tricky subject/verb here, but I understood exactly what you meant. Good work! There are class subject Corrected this for the most basic, but you might be trying to say this instead: "There are school (or college) classes for information systems." |
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In information class, I searched about effects that smartphone give us. In information class, I searched about effects that smartphones give us. It might be more natural to say "I looked up the effects that smartphones have on us," but this is just a stylistic choice.
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In the process of searching in English to want many information, I pressed advertisement or url. In the process of searching in English to "There was an advertisement when I was searching in English to get more results, so I clicked on that" might make this sentence sound more native.
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As a result, I found Langcorrect. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In this time, Engligh was interesting for me.
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Video made by person who interact foreign people influenced me.
I think this is what you mean. It still sounds a little unnatural using "interacting" - sounds a little cold. Depending on what you wanted to focus on, might consider what types of interactions; classroom, shopping, traveling, interviews....etc. For example, I was influenced by YouTube videos of foreigners being interviewed about _______. (could use: "the soaring cost of rice", "the newest cat cafe", "what they thought about their visit to Japan" ) Hope this helps. |
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