Oct. 15, 2021
Hotter In summer by global warming
In Korea, the weather in Summer is hotter and hotter these days.
When I was young, the average temperature in Summer was early 30 degrees Celsius.
So it was able to hold on.
But these days, the average temperature is more than 35 degrees Celsius.
The hottest day in this year was 42 degree Celsius.
It was the hottest record in Korea.
I think, it is caused by the global warming effect.
If we do not stop the global warming, we will face hotter weather that we can’t make through the unbearable heat.
So we need to keep considering the global warming to protect our environment.
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I'm not really sure why I think so, but the original title sounds strange to a native speaker. I think usually if you use a noun as the title, you cannot go wrong.
In Korea, the weather in Summer is becoming hotter and hotter these days.
When I was young, the average temperature in Summer was early 30 degreesin the low 30s, Celsius.
This way of writing it is a little more informal. If we were speaking we would not say "Celsius" unless we have to clarify.
So itI was able to hold on.stand this temperature
But these days, the average temperature is more than 35 degrees Celsius.
The hottest day in this year was 42 degree Celsius.
ItThis was the hottest recordday in Korea on record.
On record since forever? If you want to specify, you can add "since..." and then the time.
I think, it is caused by the global warming effect.
If we do not stop the global warming, we will face hotter weatherthe weather will become so hot that we can’t make through the unbearable heat.
SoTherefor, we need to keep considering thworking to reduce global warming toand protect our environment.
I think this is what you mean by "considering" ~ when you use considering here it makes it sound more like we are pondering it, this way makes it more clear.
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It is written very well, I just corrected small details that will come naturally with more practice
Oct. 16, 2021
Thank you for the corrections. I can learn more.
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Hotter In summer by global warming
I'm not really sure why I think so, but the original title sounds strange to a native speaker. I think usually if you use a noun as the title, you cannot go wrong. |
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Hotter and hotter |
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Average early 30 degree Celsius |
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So it was able to hold on.
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But these days, average temperature is more than 35 degree celsius |
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The hottest day this year was 42 degree Celsius. |
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It was the hottest record in korea. |
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Global warming effect. |
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If we do not stop the global warming, we will face more hotter weather that we can’t make through the unbearable hot. |
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So we need to keep considering the global warming to protect our environment |
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In Korea, the weather in Summer is hotter and hotter these days. In Korea, the weather in Summer is becoming hotter and hotter these days. |
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When I was young, the average temperature in Summer was early 30 degrees Celsius. When I was young, the average temperature in Summer was This way of writing it is a little more informal. If we were speaking we would not say "Celsius" unless we have to clarify. |
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But these days, the average temperature is more than 35 degrees Celsius. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The hottest day in this year was 42 degree Celsius. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was the hottest record in Korea.
On record since forever? If you want to specify, you can add "since..." and then the time. |
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I think, it is caused by the global warming effect. I think |
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If we do not stop the global warming, we will face hotter weather that we can’t make through the unbearable heat. If we do not stop |
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So we need to keep considering the global warming to protect our environment.
I think this is what you mean by "considering" ~ when you use considering here it makes it sound more like we are pondering it, this way makes it more clear. |
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