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June 4, 2022

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Dear Madam

I would like reserve a booking douple room with sea view and bathroom in june for three weeks please I prefer a room there big and spacious is with a soft bed
It must blue the whole room with a desk and a wardrobe . My forward are also enough air and place



We have a room in 28 floor with all this we tell him when he is free but we have a bigger too with sea view in 25 floor and a in the 30 floor we say you when is a free ok but we have also better than this with sea view there better is

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I would like reserve a booking for a doupble room with a sea view and a bathroom in jJune for three weeks, please . I prefer a room thereat is big and spacious is, with a soft bed.

It must blue the whole room with a desk and a wardrobe .

Can you clarify the meaning of 'blue' in this sentence? I think this might be a mistake.

We have a room ion 28the 28th floor with all this weeverything that was asked for. We will tell him when he is free , but we also have a bign even larger troom with a sea view ion 25the 25th floor, and a in the 30 floor we say you when is a free ok but we have also better than this with sea view there better isnother one on the 30th floor.

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Not bad, but try to add more commas. Keep up the good work!

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Dear Madam

I would like to reserve a booking doupble room with a sea view and a bathroom in jJune for three weeks, please . I prefer a room thereat is big and spacious is with a soft bed.

"To book" and "to reserve" can mean the same thing here. "I would like to book a double room..." is also correct.

It must blue the whole room with a desk and a wardrobe .

I don't understand, können Sie schreiben, was Sie wollen zu sagen auf Deutsch bitte? Dann ich kann Sie besser helfen (:

My forward are also enough air and place

I don't understand, can you tell me what you want to say in German again, please?

We have a room ion 28the 28th floor with all this we. We will tell him when heit is free available, but we have a bigger room too with sea view ion 25the 25th floor and a ione on the 30th floor we say you when is a free ok but we have also. We will tell you when it is available, ok? But we also have better rooms than this with sea view there better isa better sea view.

"Free" is not incorrect here, but "available" sounds a lot more natural.

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Keep up the good work!

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Dear Madam


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I would like reserve a booking douple room with sea view and bathroom in june for three weeks please I prefer a room there big and spacious is with a soft bed


I would like to reserve a booking doupble room with a sea view and a bathroom in jJune for three weeks, please . I prefer a room thereat is big and spacious is with a soft bed.

"To book" and "to reserve" can mean the same thing here. "I would like to book a double room..." is also correct.

I would like reserve a booking for a doupble room with a sea view and a bathroom in jJune for three weeks, please . I prefer a room thereat is big and spacious is, with a soft bed.

It must blue the whole room with a desk and a wardrobe .


It must blue the whole room with a desk and a wardrobe .

I don't understand, können Sie schreiben, was Sie wollen zu sagen auf Deutsch bitte? Dann ich kann Sie besser helfen (:

It must blue the whole room with a desk and a wardrobe .

Can you clarify the meaning of 'blue' in this sentence? I think this might be a mistake.

My forward are also enough air and place


My forward are also enough air and place

I don't understand, can you tell me what you want to say in German again, please?

We have a room in 28 floor with all this we tell him when he is free but we have a bigger too with sea view in 25 floor and a in the 30 floor we say you when is a free ok but we have also better than this with sea view there better is


We have a room ion 28the 28th floor with all this we. We will tell him when heit is free available, but we have a bigger room too with sea view ion 25the 25th floor and a ione on the 30th floor we say you when is a free ok but we have also. We will tell you when it is available, ok? But we also have better rooms than this with sea view there better isa better sea view.

"Free" is not incorrect here, but "available" sounds a lot more natural.

We have a room ion 28the 28th floor with all this weeverything that was asked for. We will tell him when he is free , but we also have a bign even larger troom with a sea view ion 25the 25th floor, and a in the 30 floor we say you when is a free ok but we have also better than this with sea view there better isnother one on the 30th floor.

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