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prisci

June 4, 2022

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hotel reserve

Dear Madam

I would like reserve a booking douple room with sea view and bathroom in june for three weeks please I prefer a room there big and spacious is with a soft bed
It must blue the whole room with a desk and a wardrobe . My forward are also enough air and place



We have a room in 28 floor with all this we tell him when he is free

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hHotel rReserveation

Capitalize first letters of a title

Dear Madam,

If you're writing a letter use a comma ',' after addressing the person. E.g. Dear Adam, - Dear Julia, etc.

I would like to reserve a booking doupble room with a sea view and a bathroom in jJune for three weeks, please . I would prefer a room thereat is big and spacious is, with a soft bed.

Use an infinite verb 'to reserve', 'to do', 'to eat', etc. After "I would like". E.g. I would like TO go to the cinema
Don't forget to use definite/indefinite articles - a/the


It must blue tThe whole room must be blue with a desk and a wardrobe .

Just a more natural way to say it. Be careful with punctuation and spaces in your text

My forward are also enough air and place

I'm not sure what you're trying to portray here

We have a room ion 28the 28th floor with all this weof these things. We can tell himyou when he iit's free.

Not sure about the second half of the sentence of what you're trying to say

okOkay.

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hotel reserve


hHotel rReserveation

Capitalize first letters of a title

Dear Madam


Dear Madam,

If you're writing a letter use a comma ',' after addressing the person. E.g. Dear Adam, - Dear Julia, etc.

I would like reserve a booking douple room with sea view and bathroom in june for three weeks please I prefer a room there big and spacious is with a soft bed


I would like to reserve a booking doupble room with a sea view and a bathroom in jJune for three weeks, please . I would prefer a room thereat is big and spacious is, with a soft bed.

Use an infinite verb 'to reserve', 'to do', 'to eat', etc. After "I would like". E.g. I would like TO go to the cinema Don't forget to use definite/indefinite articles - a/the

It must blue the whole room with a desk and a wardrobe .


It must blue tThe whole room must be blue with a desk and a wardrobe .

Just a more natural way to say it. Be careful with punctuation and spaces in your text

My forward are also enough air and place


My forward are also enough air and place

I'm not sure what you're trying to portray here

We have a room in 28 floor with all this we tell him when he is free


We have a room ion 28the 28th floor with all this weof these things. We can tell himyou when he iit's free.

Not sure about the second half of the sentence of what you're trying to say

ok


okOkay.

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