March 26, 2025
Hot Spring
Tonight, I was eating my dinner while watching YouTube.
The Japanese YouTuber I followed had a three-day trip to enjoy the hot spring in Gunma prefecture, Japan.
This is one of the three famous hot spring spots in Japan. In the city, there is a hot spring field called "Kusatsu Onsen Yuda" in the open air.
Since the temperature of the Kusatu spring source is quite high, the hot spring can only be used by cooling down a bit through the hot spring field.
Even though there are hot springs in China, I haven't seen such a big scale.
I tried hot springs when I traveled to Japan. At that time, I noticed that you must be naked when you go into the hot spring pools.
In the beginning, I felt a little bit embarrassed. But I felt comfortable when I adapted.
I hope next time when I go to Japan, I can have a chance to enjoy the Kusatsu Onsen.
温泉
今晚一边吃饭，一边看youtube。
我关注的一个日本youtuber 去了日本群马县的草津温泉，进行了三天两夜的旅行。
这里是日本三大著名的温泉地之一，在城市里有一个露天的温泉田叫做“草津温泉汤田”。
由于草津温泉的源泉温度很高，要先经过这个温泉田稍微冷却一下才能使用。
虽然，在中国也有温泉。但这么大规模的温泉我还没见过。
之前去日本的时候，有机会泡过日本的温泉。不过，日本的温泉池要全裸才能进入。
刚开始这一点让我有点不太适应，但后来适应了就感觉很舒服。
希望下次去日本的时候，有机会到草津泡一下温泉。
Hot Springs
I'm not sure why, but Hot Springs is always plural in English.
Tonight, I was eating my dinner while watching YouTube.
The Japanese YouTuber I am followed hading took a three-day trip to enjoy the hot springs in Gunma prefecture, Japan.
Since this happened tonight, we can reasonably assume that you are still following the youtuber...
This is one of the three famous hot spring spots in Japan.
Here, Hot Spring is used as an adjective, so you can keep it singular
In the city, there is a hot spring field called "Kusatsu Onsen Yuda" in the open air.
It would sound better to say "In the city, there is an open-air hot spring field called "Kusatsu Onsen Yuda".
Since the temperature of the Kusatu spring source is quite high, the hot springs can only be used by cooling the water down a bit through the hot spring field.
Even though there are hot springs in China, I haven't seen any on such a big scale.
I tried hot springs when I traveled to Japan.
At that time, I noticed that you must be naked when you go into the hot spring pools.
In the beginning, I felt a little bit embarrassed.
But I felt comfortable when I adaptedonce I got used to it.
I hope next time when I go to Japan, I can have a chance to enjoy the Kusatsu Onsen.
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Very well done!
March 30, 2025
I appreciate your help; it's helpful.
Tonight, I was eating my dinner while watching YouTube.
The Japanese YouTuber I followed had a three-day trip to enjoy the hot spring in Gunma prefecture, Japan.
To say, "I followed," implies you no longer follow this YouTuber and this story is from the distant past. But since you started by saying, "Tonight, I was eating my dinner," it implies you are still actively following the YouTuber.
This is one of the three famous hot spring spots in Japan.
In the city, there is a hot spring field called "Kusatsu Onsen Yuda" in the open air.
Since the temperature of the Kusatu spring source is quite high, the hot spring can only be used by cooling down a bit through the hot spring field.
Even though there are hot springs in China, I haven't seen such a big scalone this large.
"Such a big scale," is awkward wording and does not make sense in this context.
I trivisited hot springs when I traveled to Japan.
"I tried," implies you tasted or ate something in this context.
At thate time, I noticed that you must be naked when you go into the hot spring pools.
If you say, "At that time," it implies continuity, so you will follow up your statement, but now I learned..." Since this happened only once, you write, "At the time".
In the beginning, I felt a little bit embarrassed.
But I felt comfortable when I adapted.
I hope next time when I go to Japan, I can have a chance to enjoy the Kusatsu Onsen.
You do not need to say when in this case.
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Very good work! Very minor mistakes. Great job :)
March 30, 2025
I appreciate your help; it's helpful.
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