Sept. 25, 2020
I've engaged with different English learning materials for quite some time and have seen many things. I wish I had discovered Hot English Magazine earlier. Due to its fun, engaging, and very often educational content this magazine is now at the top of my learning list materials.
Today, I've opened the issue number 196 and read about Sylvester Stallone and was surprised to find out that the script for Rocky for written by him personally. The article was full of interesting vocabulary and very from being dull to read.
I enjoyed it very much.
How about you? I understand that you are a native and probably don't engage with ESL learning materials, yet, I guess that you have had enough communication with people from other cultures who shared with you their findings. If that's the case, do you care to share?
Please, drop a comment it would be very interesting to know.
Hot English Magazine as a resource to learn English
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The article was full of interesting vocabulary and very from being dull to readbut was far from dull.
I understand that since you are a native and, you probably don't engage with ESL learning materials, yet, I guess that you have had enough. Nevertheless, you might have communicationed with people from other cultures who shared with you. And they might've shared their findings with you.
If that's the case, doso, would you care to share?
Please, drop a comment i. It would be very interesting to know.
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All in all, it was good. A few suggestions:
- Keep the shortenings like "I've", "you're" consistent throughout the text. If you start shortening them, then keep at it.
- The overall tone seemed "bookish". Try to write in a more conversational tone. Especially since this is a very light-hearted topic.
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I've engaged with different English learning materials for quite some time and have seen many things.
I wish I had discovered Hot English Magazine earlier.
Due to its fun, engaging, and very often educational content, this magazine is now at the top of my list of learning list materials.
Today, I've opened the issue number 196 and read about Sylvester Stallone and. I was surprised to fiwhen I found out that he wrote the script for Rocky for written by him personally.
The article was full of interesting vocabulary and very from being dullengaging to read.
I enjoyed it very much.
HowWhat about you?
I understand that you are a native English speaker and probably don't engage with ESL learning materials, y. Yet, I would guess that you have had enough communicationed with people from other cultures who shared with you their findings with you.
If that's the case, do you care to share?
This sentence works, but I might write: "If that's the case, would you like to share?" This is because "do you care to" seems a little more forceful and possibly negative than "would you like to."
Please, drop a comment i. It would be very interesting to know.
Or: "Please drop a comment; It would be very interesting to know."
Feedback
I'm glad you found a resource you like! From what I've heard from others and encountered in my studies, usually reading materials made expressly for second language learners are not very engaging or interesting. (I'm not talking about grammar resources, but "guided/graded readers" and things along those lines.) When I read in Spanish or Japanese I read content that younger native speakers of those languages would read like picture books, easy novels, and comic books.
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