Nowadays, technology has becaome indispensable for everyone either them being children or old people. Nowadays, technology has become indispensable for everyone either them being children or old people.

Nowadays, technology has becaome indispensable for everyone ei, whether child or oeld peopleerly. Nowadays, technology has become indispensable for everyone, whether child or elderly.

Nowadays, technology has becaome indispensable for everyone either child or old people, from children to the elderly. Nowadays, technology has become indispensable for everyone, from children to the elderly.

"from X to Y" is a common grammatical structure used to show that something encompasses a wide range of elements.

Nowadays, technology has becaome indispensable for everyone, eitherven child or old peopleren and the elderly. Nowadays, technology has become indispensable for everyone, even children and the elderly.

Nowadays, technology has becaome indispensable for everyone either child or old people-young and old. Nowadays, technology has become indispensable for everyone-young and old.

To connect with the world today is high, it is really easy and can be quickly done with the help of technology. To connect with the world today, it is really easy and can be quickly done with the help of technology.

To connect with the world today is highlvery easily and quickly done with the help of technology. To connect with the world today is very easily and quickly done with the help of technology.

highly is unnatural here, but maybe not 'definitely' wrong. easy is adjective, easily is adverb

To cConnecting with the rest of the world today is highextremely easy and can be quickly done with the help of technology. Connecting with the rest of the world today is extremely easy and can be quickly done with the help of technology.

To connect with the world today is highly easvery quickly and quickeasily done with the help of technology. To connect with the world today is very quickly and easily done with the help of technology.

The standard order here is "quick and easy" or since we're doing adverbs here, "quickly and easily".

To cConnecting with world today is highextremely easy and can be done quickly done with the help of technology. Connecting with world today is extremely easy and can be done quickly with the help of technology.

Alternately ". . . with the aid of technology."

Of course, mobile phones, computers and others technology help to build a great connectionnetwork between people around the world. Of course, mobile phones, computers and other technology help to build a great network between people around the world.

"network" is a collection of connections. It might be the better choice here.

Of course, mobile phones, computers and otherssimilar help to build a great connection between people around the world. Of course, mobile phones, computers and similar help to build a great connection between people around the world.

Others is more natural when used for people rather than things.

Of course, mobile phones, computers and other devices help to build a great[meaningful] connections between people around the world. Of course, mobile phones, computers and other devices help build [meaningful] connections between people around the world.

Also, technology makes many things easyier, even though some times, its can becaome a source of entertainment m. Moreover, when we use toe use technology to entertain ourselves. Also, technology makes many things easier, even though some times, it can become a source of entertainment. Moreover, we use technology to entertain ourselves.

Also, technology makes many things easy even though some times its can becaome a source of entertainment moreover, especially when we use to use technology to entertain ourselves. Also, technology makes many things easy even though some times it can become a source of entertainment, especially when we use to use technology to entertain ourselves.

Not exactly sure what you mean with this sentence, but moreover is isn't used that way

Also, technology makes many things easy even though. Morever, it can some times its can becaome a source of entertainment moreover when we use to use technology to entertain ourselves. Also, technology makes many things easy. Morever, it can sometimes become a source of entertainment.

The use of "even though" seems inappropriate here. "even though" serves to introduce a contrasting idea, but I don't see how technology making things easy and being a source of entertainment are necessarily contrasting. Perhaps you meant that technology can be a distraction when used for entertainment, in which case you must make mention of the fact. I also omitted "when we use ... technology to entertain ourselves" because it is redundant. You'd already mentioned that technology can become a source of entertainment. Of course, this only happens when we use it for entertainment.

Also, technology makes many things easy even though some times its can became more of a source of entertainment moreover when we use to use technology to entertain ourselves. Also, technology makes many things easy even though sometimes it can became more of a source of entertainment when we use to use technology to entertain ourselves.

Also, technology makes many things easy even though some times. Moreover, its can became a source of entertainment moreover when we use to use itechnology to entertain ourselves. Also, technology makes many things easy. Moreover, it can be a source of entertainment when we use to use it to entertain ourselves.

This sentence is a bit confusing in what it's trying to convey. "Even though" is used to contrast two things, but it's not obvious what is being contrasted. I assume that you want to convey that technology makes things fast and easy to do, but it can also be distracting which can lower productivity. In that case, I would phrase it to say: Even though technology makes our lives more convenient and easier, it can also be distracting especially when we use it to entertain ourselves.

In summary, technology makes easy many things, previously that were once hard to complete easy to do. In summary, technology makes many things that were once hard to complete easy to do.

InTo summarize, technology makes easy many things, easier that were previously hard to complete. To summarize, technology makes many things easier that were previously hard to complete.

In sum, technology makes easy many things, which were previously hard to complete. In sum, technology makes easy many things which were previously hard to complete.

In sum, technology makes easy many things, that were previously hard to complete. In sum, technology makes easy many things that were previously hard to complete.

"makes easy many things" is perfectly correct, but is a rather advanced grammatical structure because it changes the typical subject-verb-object order. If you meant to use it, great job! It's a cool structure for sure. Alternatively, you can write "technology makes many things easy", as you have done before.

In sum, technology makes easy many things, easy that were previously hard to complete. In sum, technology makes many things easy that were previously hard to complete.