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Scarlett_Father

Nov. 30, 2022

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Some people in SH(city name) protested against some policies imposed by the government. But do you know how horrible, easy, and most efficient way is the government to get even with it?
Anyone whose mobile phone signal once appeared in the protesting place, their residential area will be in lockdown and the reason is coronavirus. Then they will do the next step.
We know we cannot live without a mobile phone, modern technology let us enjoy more fun life than before, but if they are monopoly by a dictator government, I really prefer an agricultural life instead.

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Some people in SH(city name) protested against some (the covid) policies imposed by the government.

If this was the covid policies, I'd say "against the covid/coronavirus policies" as it sounds more natural to me :)

But do you know how horrible, easy, and most efficient way isly the government tocan get evenaway with it?

AFor anyone whose mobile phone signal once appeared in the protesting place, their residential area willcan now be in locked down and the reason isbecause of the coronavirus rules.

We know we cannot live without a mobile phone, ms. Modern technology lets us enjoy a more fun life than before, but if they are used in a monopoly by a dictator government, I would really prefer an agricultural life instead.

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Great writing! Please stay safe :) I hope your area is okay.

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Some people in SH(city name) protested against some policies imposed by the government.

But do you know how horrible, easy, and most efficient way isit is for the government to gret even with italiate?

Anyone whose mobile phone signal once appeared ins at the protesting place, their residential area will be in lockdown and the reason iswill be coronavirus.

Then they will do the next step.

We know we cannot live without aour mobile phones, modern technology lets us enjoy more fun lifein our lives than before, but if they are a monopoly ruled by a dictator government, I would really prefer an agricultural life instead.

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Wow, I'm sorry to hear this. Thank you for letting us know. Very good work!

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Scarlett_Father

Nov. 30, 2022

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Thanks for your correction! I add "retaliate" as a new vocabulary to my learning list. :)

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mari

Nov. 30, 2022

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Thanks for your correction! I add "retaliate" as a new vocabulary to my learning list. :)

Yay! :)

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Some people in SH (city name) protested against some policies imposed by the government.

Add a space before the left parenthesis mark.

But do you know howin what horrible, easy, and most efficient way is the government tois getting even with it?

AThe residential area of anyone whose mobile phone signal once appeared in the protesting place, their residential area will be put in lockdown and the reason is due to "coronavirus."

I put "coronavirus" in quotation marks because that probably isn't the real reason for the lockdown.

Then they will dotake the next step.

We know we cannot live without a mobile phone, m. Modern technology lets us enjoy a more fun life than before, but if they areit is monopolyized by a dictatorial government, I really prefer an agricultural life instead.

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I wonder why people didn't turn off their phones before going to the protest sites.

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Scarlett_Father

Nov. 30, 2022

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Thank you! Yes, it's better to put a quotation to the word "coronavirus" here.
Why even some onlookers didn't turn off their phones, they thought they would be safe, but they were wrong this time. They couldn't believe they are implement a policy like "Rather to get 1000 killed than to get one missed."

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Some people in SH(city name) protested against some policies imposed by the government.


Some people in SH (city name) protested against some policies imposed by the government.

Add a space before the left parenthesis mark.

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Some people in SH(city name) protested against some (the covid) policies imposed by the government.

If this was the covid policies, I'd say "against the covid/coronavirus policies" as it sounds more natural to me :)

But do you know how horrible, easy, and most efficient way is the government to get even with it?


But do you know howin what horrible, easy, and most efficient way is the government tois getting even with it?

But do you know how horrible, easy, and most efficient way isit is for the government to gret even with italiate?

But do you know how horrible, easy, and most efficient way isly the government tocan get evenaway with it?

Anyone whose mobile phone signal once appeared in the protesting place, their residential area will be in lockdown and the reason is coronavirus.


AThe residential area of anyone whose mobile phone signal once appeared in the protesting place, their residential area will be put in lockdown and the reason is due to "coronavirus."

I put "coronavirus" in quotation marks because that probably isn't the real reason for the lockdown.

Anyone whose mobile phone signal once appeared ins at the protesting place, their residential area will be in lockdown and the reason iswill be coronavirus.

AFor anyone whose mobile phone signal once appeared in the protesting place, their residential area willcan now be in locked down and the reason isbecause of the coronavirus rules.

Then they will do the next step.


Then they will dotake the next step.

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We know we cannot live without a mobile phone, modern technology let us enjoy more fun life than before, but if they are monopoly by a dictator government, I really prefer an agricultural life instead.


We know we cannot live without a mobile phone, m. Modern technology lets us enjoy a more fun life than before, but if they areit is monopolyized by a dictatorial government, I really prefer an agricultural life instead.

We know we cannot live without aour mobile phones, modern technology lets us enjoy more fun lifein our lives than before, but if they are a monopoly ruled by a dictator government, I would really prefer an agricultural life instead.

We know we cannot live without a mobile phone, ms. Modern technology lets us enjoy a more fun life than before, but if they are used in a monopoly by a dictator government, I would really prefer an agricultural life instead.

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