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Some people in SH(city name) protested against some policies imposed by the government. But do you know how horrible, easy, and most efficient way is the government to get even with it?
Anyone whose mobile phone signal once appeared in the protesting place, their residential area will be in lockdown and the reason is coronavirus. Then they will do the next step.
We know we cannot live without a mobile phone, modern technology let us enjoy more fun life than before, but if they are monopoly by a dictator government, I really prefer an agricultural life instead.

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Some people in SH(city name) protested against some policies imposed by the government.

Then they will do the next step.

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Thanks for your correction! I add "retaliate" as a new vocabulary to my learning list. :)

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Some people in SH(city name) protested against some policies imposed by the government.


Some people in SH (city name) protested against some policies imposed by the government. Some people in SH (city name) protested against some policies imposed by the government.

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Some people in SH(city name) protested against some (the covid) policies imposed by the government. Some people in SH(city name) protested against some (the covid) policies imposed by the government.

If this was the covid policies, I'd say "against the covid/coronavirus policies" as it sounds more natural to me :)

But do you know how horrible, easy, and most efficient way is the government to get even with it?


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Anyone whose mobile phone signal once appeared in the protesting place, their residential area will be in lockdown and the reason is coronavirus.


AThe residential area of anyone whose mobile phone signal once appeared in the protesting place, their residential area will be put in lockdown and the reason is due to "coronavirus." The residential area of anyone whose mobile phone signal once appeared in the protesting place will be put in lockdown due to "coronavirus."

I put "coronavirus" in quotation marks because that probably isn't the real reason for the lockdown.

Anyone whose mobile phone signal once appeared ins at the protesting place, their residential area will be in lockdown and the reason iswill be coronavirus. Anyone whose mobile phone signal appears at the protesting place, their residential area will be in lockdown and the reason will be coronavirus.

AFor anyone whose mobile phone signal once appeared in the protesting place, their residential area willcan now be in locked down and the reason isbecause of the coronavirus rules. For anyone whose mobile phone signal appeared in the protesting place, their residential area can now be locked down because of the coronavirus rules.

Then they will do the next step.


Then they will dotake the next step. Then they will take the next step.

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We know we cannot live without a mobile phone, modern technology let us enjoy more fun life than before, but if they are monopoly by a dictator government, I really prefer an agricultural life instead.


We know we cannot live without a mobile phone, m. Modern technology lets us enjoy a more fun life than before, but if they areit is monopolyized by a dictatorial government, I really prefer an agricultural life instead. We know we cannot live without a mobile phone. Modern technology lets us enjoy a more fun life than before, but if it is monopolized by a dictatorial government, I really prefer an agricultural life instead.

We know we cannot live without aour mobile phones, modern technology lets us enjoy more fun lifein our lives than before, but if they are a monopoly ruled by a dictator government, I would really prefer an agricultural life instead. We know we cannot live without our mobile phones, modern technology lets us enjoy more fun in our lives than before, but if they are a monopoly ruled by a dictator government, I would really prefer an agricultural life instead.

We know we cannot live without a mobile phone, ms. Modern technology lets us enjoy a more fun life than before, but if they are used in a monopoly by a dictator government, I would really prefer an agricultural life instead. We know we cannot live without mobile phones. Modern technology lets us enjoy a more fun life than before, but if they are used in a monopoly by a dictator government, I would really prefer an agricultural life instead.

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