May 11, 2024
Honolulu
When I visited Hawaii for the first time, I had a strange experience.
After visiting Los Angeles and San Francisco for work, I stopped in Honolulu. I stayed at the Hilton Hotel, and my room was on a high floor with a magnificent view of the ocean.
I didn't have much time to rest, but I must have fallen asleep as soon as I lay down on the bed due to fatigue.
At that moment, I heard a screeching sound in my ear.
At the same time, I was struggling deesperately to break free from sleep paralysis. I regained my senses once, but the paralysis recurred, and the same phenomenon occurred in my ear. It was a somewhat frightening experience that couldn't be explained logically.
I should note that I didn't have an ear infection at that time.
初めてハワイに行った時に不思議な体験をした。仕事でロスとサンフランシスコを訪れた後、ホノルルに寄った。宿泊先はヒルトンホテルで、部屋は高層階で海の眺めが実に素晴らしかった。休む間もなかったが、疲労でベットの上に横たわったらそのまま寝っちゃったのだろう。その時に、耳元でスクーリュー音が鳴り響いた。同時に金縛りにかかっていた。必死にもがいて金縛りを解こうとした。正気に戻った。しかし、また金縛りにかかり、耳元で同じ現象が起こった。まったく理屈では説明できないすこし怖い体験だった。なおその時は中耳炎にはかかっていなかった。
When I visited Hawaii for the first time, I had a strange experience.
After visiting Los Angeles and San Francisco for work, I stopped in Honolulu.
I stayed at the Hilton Hotel, and my room was on a high floor with a magnificent view of the ocean.
I didn't have much time to rest, but I must have fallen asleep as soon as I lay down on the bed due to fatigue.
At that moment, I heard a screeching sound in my ear.
At the same time, I wasThen I began struggling deesperately to break free from sleep paralysis.
I regained my senses once, but the paralysis recurred, and the same phenomenon occurred in my ear.
It was a somewhat frightening experience that couldn't be explained logically.
I should note that I didn't have an ear infection at that time.
Honolulu
When I visited Hawaii for the first time, I had a strange experience.
After visiting Los Angeles and San Francisco for work, I stopped in Honolulu.
I stayed at the Hilton Hotel, and my room was on a high floor with a magnificent view of the ocean.
I didn't have much time to rest, but I must have fallen asleep as soon as I lay down on the bed due to fatigue.
At that moment, I heard a screeching sound in my ear.
At the same time, I was struggling deesperately to break free from what I assumed to be sleep paralysis.
Having "at the same time" here kinda feels awkward, and breaks the immersion of the experience you were trying to recount
I regained my senses once more, but the paralysis had recurred, and the same phenomenon occurred in my ear.in my ear had occurred
Simply a stylistic change
It was a somewhat frightening experience that couldn't be explained logically.
I should note that I didn't have an ear infection at that time.
Honolulu
When I visited Hawaii for the first time, I had a strange experience.
AfterI had visitinged Los Angeles and San Francisco for work, so I stopped inby Honolulu before going home.
I stayed at the Hilton Hotel, and my room was on a high floor with a magnificent view of the ocean.
I didn't have much time to rest, but I was exhausted and must have fallen asleep as soon as I lay down on the bed due to fatigue.
A more natural way to say it is: "...must have fallen asleep as soon as my head hit the pillow."
At that moment, I heard a screeching sound in my ear.
At the same time, I was struggling deesperately to break free from my sleep paralysis.
I've had this before. It was really scary!
I regained my senses once, but the paralysis recame back (or "reoccurred"), and the same phenomenon occurrsound screeching sounded in my ear.
It was a somewhat frightening experience that couldn't be explained logicallyI can't really explain.
I should note that I didn't have an ear infection at that time.
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Really scary story. I remember having sleep paralysis in the middle of a nightmare. My brain was active, but my body was asleep.
Well written!
When I visited Hawaii for the first time, I had a strange experience.
After visiting Los Angeles and San Francisco for work, I stopped in Honolulu.
I stayed at the Hilton Hotel, and my room was on a high floor with a magnificent view of the ocean.
I didn't have much time to rest, but I must have fallen asleep as soon as I lay down on the bed due to fatigue.
At that moment, I heard a screeching sound in my ear.
At the same time, I was struggling deesperately to break free from sleep paralysis.
I regained my senses at once, but the paralysis reoccurred, and the same phenomenon occurred in my ear.
To me, recur means to happen again, on a somewhat fixed or regular or predictable interval. Something simply happening again without noticing anything predictable would simply be described as reoccurring.
It was a somewhat frightening experience that couldn't be explained logically.
I should note that I didn't have an ear infection at that time.
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Good job and very interesting story. There is an associated syndrome with sleep paralysis. In English, it is called "Exploding Head Syndrome". I wonder if this is what happened to you.
May 11, 2024
Thank you for your rapid corrections. It is my good strange memory!
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