Feb. 5, 2024
Honny factory
I had one day trip by bus yesterday with Japanese class students coming from different countries. They are students but already adult, thouh.
The purpose is to deepen our friendship. The weather wasn't good because of the cold rain. If it were good weather, we would take a walk with fresh air. But the bus toure was quite good. The distination were bread factory and honny factory.
There, I drank "mead" first time in my life.It is a kind of alcohol made by honny. It's nice tast. Tasting various kind of honny was interesting activity. The taste of the honny was decided by which flower were choosen by the bees.
I bought a botle of honny!
はちみつ工場
私は昨日、日本語教室の生徒さんと日帰りバスの旅へ行ってきました。生徒といってももう大人で、さまざまな国から来ている人たちです。
その目的は私達の親睦を深める事です。天気は冷たい雨のため、良くありませんでした。もし良いお天気だったら、新鮮な空気の中で散歩ができたので残念。
でもバスツアーは良かったです。パン工場とはちみつ工場へ行きました。そこで、私は初めてミードというはちみつで出来たお酒を飲みました。美味しかったです。はちみつの味くらべは面白かったです。はちみつの味は蜂がどの花を選ぶかで違ってくるのだそうです。
私は蜂蜜をひと瓶買いました！
Honney factory
I had a one day trip by bus yesterday with my Japanese class students coming from different countries.
if you write Japanese students, followed by "coming from different countries" makes no sense because all your students are from Japan
They are adult students but already adult, thouh.
If it were good weatherthe weather was good, we would have taken a walk within fresh open air.
But the bus toure was quite good.
The diestinations were a bread factory and a honney factory.
There, I drank "mead" for the first time in my life. It is a kind of alcohol made byfrom honney.
It's has a nice taste.
Tasting various kinds of honney was an interesting activity.
The taste of the honney was decided by which flower were choosen bys the bees. chose
I bought a bottle of honney!
Feb. 6, 2024
Thank you so much!
Honney fFactory
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But the bus toure was quite good.
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It's has a nice taste.
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Tasting various kinds of honney was an interesting activity.
The taste of the honney was decidtermined by which flower wereas choosen by the bees.
I bought a bottle of honney!
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Good job. That sounds like a lot of fun!
Feb. 6, 2024
Thank you for making corrections!
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