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May 10, 2022

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Hong Kong – A Paradise for Birdwatching

Thanks to my best lang-8 friend, last night we talk about the birds in Hong Kong and Japan.

That reminds me Hong Kong is also a place popular for birds.

Why are there so many bird species in Hong Kong?

Good Location: one of the main water-bird migration routes.

Many birds pass through Hong Kong on the way between northern Asia and wintering grounds well to the south.

A wide diversity of habitats which cover some 40% of the land.

These habitats include wetlands, open country, streams, woodland and urban area.

In addition, typhoons occasionally bring truly oceanic species into Hong Kong waters.

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Hong Kong – A Paradise for Birdwatching

Thanks to my best lang-8 friend, last night we talked about the birds in Hong Kong and Japan.

That reminds me that Hong Kong ihas also a place popular for ton of species of birds.

Why are there so many bird species in Hong Kong?

GIt's a good Llocation:; it's located on one of the main water-bird migration routes.

Many birds pass through Hong Kong on the way between northern Asia and the wintering grounds well to the south.

AHong Kong has a wide diversity of habitats whichthat cover some 40% of the land.

These habitats include wetlands, open country, streams, woodlands, and urban areas.

In addition, typhoons occasionally bring truly oceanic species into Hong Kong's waters.

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Hong Kong – A Paradise for Birdwatching


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Thanks to my best lang-8 friend, last night we talk about the birds in Hong Kong and Japan.


Thanks to my best lang-8 friend, last night we talked about the birds in Hong Kong and Japan.

That reminds me Hong Kong is also a place popular for birds.


That reminds me that Hong Kong ihas also a place popular for ton of species of birds.

Why are there so many bird species in Hong Kong?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Good Location: one of the main water-bird migration routes.


GIt's a good Llocation:; it's located on one of the main water-bird migration routes.

Many birds pass through Hong Kong on the way between northern Asia and wintering grounds well to the south.


Many birds pass through Hong Kong on the way between northern Asia and the wintering grounds well to the south.

A wide diversity of habitats which cover some 40% of the land.


AHong Kong has a wide diversity of habitats whichthat cover some 40% of the land.

These habitats include wetlands, open country, streams, woodland and urban area.


These habitats include wetlands, open country, streams, woodlands, and urban areas.

In addition, typhoons occasionally bring truly oceanic species into Hong Kong waters.


In addition, typhoons occasionally bring truly oceanic species into Hong Kong's waters.

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