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Jack

June 19, 2022

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“Honey Sweet”

It may be the first year when I was in middle school that a few young people came to my home township from my county city.

I thought they might be doing their practicum or something and their career should be in communication technology.

In the south of the middle school there was the big playground of my school. They often carried some electrical devices there and practiced sending and receiving telegrams. (I was not sure, but just guessed).

Every time they did this, they also carried a modern magnetic tape recorder and played some New Age music.

They were in their twenties. Fashionable, energetic and handsome. I admired them a lot.

One song that they repeated playing was very nice. Every time they played the song, I always tried to listen to it longer.

That was the first time I had heard that kind of sweet song after the reform and opening up of China. Before, songs in China were all the so-called revolutionary songs.

I enjoyed hearing it every day and I remember it was also in the spring. I would feel lazy and sleepy while listening to it.

After listening to it for a while, I learned that the name of the song was "honey sweet" and it was a song by Chinese female singer Teresa Teng.

That was the first time I knew of Teresa Teng and the first time I knew that there were some nicer songs than the revolutionary songs.

Since then, I have listened to many songs by Teresa Teng and I like any of her songs.

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“Honey Sweet”

It may behave been the first year when I was inof middle school thatwhen a few young people came to my home township from my county city.

I thought that they might be doing their practicum or something and that their career should be in communication technology.

In the south of the middle school there was thea big playground of my school.

They often carried some electrical devices there and practiced sending and receiving telegrams.

(I was not sure, but just guessed).

Every time they did this, they also carried a modern magnetic tape recorder and played some New Age music.

They were in their twenties.

Fashionable, energetic and handsome.

I admired them a lot.

One song that they often repeated playing was very nice.

Every time they played the song, I always tried to listen to it (longer/ intently).

That was the first time I had heard that kind of sweet song after the reform and opening up of China.

Before, songs in China were all the so-called revolutionary songs.

I enjoyed hearinglistening to it every day and I remember that it was also in the spring.

"it" is a little unclear here

I would feel lazy and sleepy while listening to it.

After listening to it for a while, I learned that the name of the song was "honey sweet" and it was a song by Chinese female singer Teresa Teng.

That was the first time I knew of Teresa Teng and the first time I knew that there were some nicer songssongs nicer than the revolutionary songs.

Since then, I have listened to many songs by Teresa Teng and I like many of ther songsm.

Jack's avatar
Jack

June 19, 2022

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Thank you very much.

It may have been the first year of middle school when a few young people came to my home township from my county city.

I thought that they might be doing their practicum or something and that their career should be in communication technology.

In the south of the school there was a big playground. They often carried some electrical devices there and practiced sending and receiving telegrams. (I was not sure, but just guessed).

Every time they did this, they also carried a modern magnetic tape recorder and played some New Age music.

They were in their twenties. Fashionable, energetic and handsome. I admired them a lot.

One song that they often repeated was very nice. Every time they played the song, I always tried to listen to it intently.

That was the first time I had heard that kind of sweet song after the reform and opening up of China. Before, songs in China were all so-called revolutionary songs.

I enjoyed listening to the song every day and I remember that it was spring time. I would feel lazy and sleepy while listening to it.

After listening to it for a while, I learned that the name of the song was "honey sweet" and it was a song by Chinese female singer Teresa Teng.

That was the first time I knew of Teresa Teng and the first time I knew that there were some songs nicer than the revolutionary songs.

Since then, I have listened to many songs by Teresa Teng and I like all of her songs.

“Honey Sweet”


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It may be the first year when I was in middle school that a few young people came to my home township from my county city.


It may behave been the first year when I was inof middle school thatwhen a few young people came to my home township from my county city.

I thought they might be doing their practicum or something and their career should be in communication technology.


I thought that they might be doing their practicum or something and that their career should be in communication technology.

In the south of the middle school there was the big playground of my school.


In the south of the middle school there was thea big playground of my school.

They often carried some electrical devices there and practiced sending and receiving telegrams.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

(I was not sure, but just guessed).


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Every time they did this, they also carried a modern magnetic tape recorder and played some New Age music.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

They were in their twenties.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Fashionable, energetic and handsome.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I admired them a lot.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

One song that they repeated playing was very nice.


One song that they often repeated playing was very nice.

Every time they played the song, I always tried to listen to it longer.


Every time they played the song, I always tried to listen to it (longer/ intently).

That was the first time I had heard that kind of sweet song after the reform and opening up of China.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Before, songs in China were all the so-called revolutionary songs.


Before, songs in China were all the so-called revolutionary songs.

I enjoyed hearing it every day and I remember it was also in the spring.


I enjoyed hearinglistening to it every day and I remember that it was also in the spring.

"it" is a little unclear here

I would feel lazy and sleepy while listening to it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

After listening to it for a while, I learned that the name of the song was "honey sweet" and it was a song by Chinese female singer Teresa Teng.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

That was the first time I knew of Teresa Teng and the first time I knew that there were some nicer songs than the revolutionary songs.


That was the first time I knew of Teresa Teng and the first time I knew that there were some nicer songssongs nicer than the revolutionary songs.

Since then, I have listened to many songs by Teresa Teng and I like any of her songs.


Since then, I have listened to many songs by Teresa Teng and I like many of ther songsm.

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