Feb. 7, 2023
Homework: My Struggle
When I was 12 years old, I used to play too much videogames.
Now I only play videogames that help me to be a better person and of course, I have control of my time playing them.
I will learn more about games and use their benefitits to improve some areas of my life.
Homework: My Struggle
When I was 12 years old, I used to play too muchany video games.
Now I only play video games that help me to be a better person and of course, I have control ofver my time when playing them.
I will learn more about games and use their benefitits to improve some areas of my life.
Feb. 7, 2023
Thank you so much!
Homework: My Struggle
When I was 12 years old, I used to play too muchany videogames.
Now I only play videogames that help me to be a better person and, of course, I have better control of my time playing them.
I will learn more about games and use their benefitits to improve some areas of my life.
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Good work!
Feb. 7, 2023
Thank you so much!
Homework: My Sstruggle
When I was 12 years old, I used to play too muchany videogames.
Now, I only play videogames that help me to be a better person and of course, I have control of my time playing them.
I will learn more about games and use their benefitits to improve some areas of my life.
Feb. 7, 2023
Thank you so much
Homework: My Struggle
When I was 12 years old, I used to play too muchany video games. / I played video games. too much.
Now I only play videogames that help me to be a better person and of course, that make me feel that I have control of my time when playing them.
“I have control…” it is an unnatural thing to put like this, we never “have” control, we’ll usually justify it as just being a feeling of control, if that makes sense
“Talking to you makes me feel like I have control of my future.”
“I have to take control or else.”
“I feel like I don’t have control.”
I will learn more about games and use their benefitits to improve some areas of my life.
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Nice, I used to play them a lot too, then I got bored (Sims, Stardew Valley, Minecraft, Terraria) I guess that’s just growing out of things though!
Feb. 7, 2023
Thank you so much!
I see, I used to Sims and Minecraft too, for a long time haha.
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