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BlackGlasses

Dec. 5, 2022

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Homework: Finding a Roommate

Hello! I hope you're well. :)

Today I'm attempting to this homework.

I'm aiming for a formal written American English.
Please correct me if I use contractions because it's a bad habit.

Write 10 questions and answers to know the routine of your possible new roommate.
Example: What time does he/she have lunch?, does he/she exercise regularly?

What time does she get up? At 5:00 am

Does she go to work? Yes, she does.

What is her work? Police office.

Does she cook? or she would rather to order takeaway food? She would rather to cook.

What time does she go to work? At 7:00 am.

What does she do after making her bed? She says to herself 'today is going to be an awesome day.'

Does she travel regularly? No, she does not.

Does she shing when she takes a shower? Yes, regularly.

What kind of food does she like? She likes Chinese food.

How often does she exercise? She exercises every day.

Write five sentences where you explain the routine of your possible roommate. Remember that you will use the structure of the third person. Use the adverbs of time: first, after, then, finally.

This is my possible new roommate Samantha and this is her routine: first, she gets up at 5:00 am, she makes her bed, she repeat the statement 'today is going to be an awesome day.' After that, she takes a hot shower and she often sings while she is taking the shower, makes her lunch, puts on her uniform and she goes to work at a police station at 7:00 am. In her breaks, she reads and eats her lunch.
She uses her bike to come home. After coming home, she exercises.
Finally, she cooks Chinese food for dinner and she goes to bed early.

Thanks for reading!

Corrections

I'm aiming for a formal writtento write formal American English.

AShe gets up at 5:00 amAM.

Yes, she dgoes. to work?

What is her workjob?

PShe is a police officer.

Does she cook?

Added to sentence below

or she would she rather to order takeawayout food?

She would rathperfers to cook.

AShe goes to work at 7:00 am.

She says to herself 'tToday is going to be an awesome day'.

Make sure you put the closing exclamation mark

No, she does non't.

This change is optional

Does she shing whilen she takes a shower?

Yes, she sings regularly.

Remember that you will use the structure of the third personird person sentence structure.

This is mySamantha is possibley my new roommate Samantha and this is her routine: first, she gets up at 5:00 am, she makes her bed, and she repeats the statement 'tToday is going to be an awesome day.'

After that, she takes a hot shower and she often sings while she is taking ther shower, she then makes her lunch, puts on her uniform and she goes to work at athe police station at 7:00 am.

InDuring her breaks, she reads and eats her lunch.

After comingshe comes home, she exercises.

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BlackGlasses

Dec. 7, 2022

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Thank you so much!
Have a nice day.

Homework: Finding a Roommate

Hello!

I hope you're doing well.

Fine as is, but more commonly heard (for me at least) is "doing well"

Today I'm attempting to do this homework assignment.

Because you say "this" it makes more sense to say "homework assignment.

I'm aiming for a formal written American English feel.

Please correct me if I use contractions because it' is a bad habit.

lol you had one in this sentence

Write 10 questions and answers to know the routine of your possible new roommate.

What idoes she do for work?

or she would she rather to order takeaway foodout?

She would rather to cook.

She says to herself 't, "Today is going to be an awesome day."

Does she shing when she takes a shower?

Remember that you will use the structure of the third -person.

This is my possibletential new roommate Samantha and this is her routine: first, she gets up at 5:00 am, she makes her bed, she repeats the statement 'today is going to be an awesome day.'

After that, she takes a hot shower and she often sings while she is taking the shower, makes her lunch, puts on her uniform and she goes to work at athe police station at 7:00 am.

InDuring her breaks, she reads and eats her lunch.

She usrides her bike to come home.

Feedback

Wow, great work!

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motte

Dec. 6, 2022

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since this site doesn't have a voting system, just view my comment as a +1 to all of these corrections, Lii

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BlackGlasses

Dec. 7, 2022

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Thank you so much!
Have a nice day.

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BlackGlasses

Dec. 7, 2022

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since this site doesn't have a voting system, just view my comment as a +1 to all of these corrections, Lii

It's a good idea! You should suggest a voting system as an improvement of this website.

Homework: Finding a Roommate

Hello!

I hope you're well.

:)

Today I'mFor today’s journal I’ll be attempting to thisa homework task.

I'm aiming for a formal writtenthe American English dialect, in particular, I wish to have a formal style.

Please correct me if I use contractions because it's; this is particularly a bad habit. of mine.

Write 10 questions and answers to knowbetter learn the routine of your possible new roommate.

Example: What time does he/she have lunch?, does he/she exercise regularly?

What time does she get up?

At 5:00 am

Does she go to work?

Yes, she does.

What idoes she do for work?

PShe is a police officer.

Does she cook?

or she would rathdoes she prefer to order takeaway food?

She would rather to cook.

What time does she go to work?

At 7:00 am.

What does she do after making her bed?

She says to herself ': ‘today is going to be an awesome day!’.

Stylistic exclamation for characterisation.

'

Does she travel regularly?

No, she does not.

Does she shing when she takes a shower?

Yes, regularly.

What kind of food does she like?

She likes Chinese food.

How often does she exercise?

She exercises every day.

Write five sentences where you explain the routine of your possible roommate.

Use the adverbs of time: first, after, then, finally.

This is my possible new roommate Samantha and this is her routine: first, she gets up at 5:00 am, she makes her bed, she repeatthen says the statement 'today is going to be an awesome day.'

After that, she takes a hot shower and she often sings while she is taking the shower, makst doing so, afterwards she prepares her lunch, puts on her uniform and she goes to work at athe local police station at 7:00 am.

InDuring her breaks, she reads and eats her lunch.

She uses her bike to come homrides to and from work on her bicycle.

After coming home, she exercises.

Finally, she cooks Chinese food for dinner and she goes to bed early.

Thanks for reading!

Feedback

Nice !!

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BlackGlasses

Dec. 5, 2022

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Thank you so much! This sounds so sophisticated, I loved it.

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frannie_

Dec. 6, 2022

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If you want to write very formally as well, I would recommend reading books from the Victorian era (Frankenstein, Jane Austen books, etc.) as these books myself also helped me develop a formal voice and extended my vocabulary in this direction !

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BlackGlasses

Dec. 7, 2022

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If you want to write very formally as well, I would recommend reading books from the Victorian era (Frankenstein, Jane Austen books, etc.) as these books myself also helped me develop a formal voice and extended my vocabulary in this direction !

Ok, I'll read them. Thanks for your advice!

Homework: Finding a Roommate


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Please correct me if I use contractions because it's a bad habit.


Please correct me if I use contractions because it's; this is particularly a bad habit. of mine.

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lol you had one in this sentence

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Write five sentences where you explain the routine of your possible roommate.


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Remember that you will use the structure of the third person.


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Remember that you will use the structure of the third personird person sentence structure.

Use the adverbs of time: first, after, then, finally.


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This is my possible new roommate Samantha and this is her routine: first, she gets up at 5:00 am, she makes her bed, she repeat the statement 'today is going to be an awesome day.'


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This is mySamantha is possibley my new roommate Samantha and this is her routine: first, she gets up at 5:00 am, she makes her bed, and she repeats the statement 'tToday is going to be an awesome day.'

After that, she takes a hot shower and she often sings while she is taking the shower, makes her lunch, puts on her uniform and she goes to work at a police station at 7:00 am.


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In her breaks, she reads and eats her lunch.


InDuring her breaks, she reads and eats her lunch.

InDuring her breaks, she reads and eats her lunch.

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She uses her bike to come home.


She uses her bike to come homrides to and from work on her bicycle.

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After coming home, she exercises.


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After comingshe comes home, she exercises.

Finally, she cooks Chinese food for dinner and she goes to bed early.


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