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BlackGlasses

Dec. 13, 2022

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Homework

Hello! I hope you're well.
For today's journal I'll be attempting to a homework assignment.
Note: I'm aiming for the American English dialect, in particular, I wish to have a formal style.

Coyoacán is one of the most interesting places located in Mexico City. There is a museum in Coyoacán called "Blue House" where Frida Kahlo and Diego Rivera were used to live.

Greetings, Azucena.
I would like to ask you some questions:
Have you ever traveled to another country?
What is your favorite song?
What do you do on weekends?
Do you like reading books?
Do you play an instrument?

Corrections

Homework

For today's journal I'll be attempting to do a homework assignment.

More natural

Note: I'm aiming for the American English dialect, in particular, I wish to have a formal style.

Coyoacán is one of the most interesting places located in Mexico City.

There is a museum in Coyoacán called "Blue House" where Frida Kahlo and Diego Rivera were used to live.

I would like to ask you some questions:

Have you ever traveled to another country?

What is your favorite song?

What do you do on weekends?

Do you play an instrument?

Feedback

Nice job! Your writing feels formal and American. Keep it up.

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BlackGlasses

Dec. 15, 2022

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Thank you! I'm happy to hear that. :)

For today's journal I'll be attempting to do a homework assignment.

Coyoacán is one of the most interesting places located in Mexico City.

Natural ! Located becomes redundant, we never use it in this context !

There is a museum in Coyoacán called the "Blue House" where Frida Kahlo and Diego Rivera were used to live.

What do you (like to/usually) do on weekends?

Feedback

Very nice 😆👌

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BlackGlasses

Dec. 14, 2022

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Thank you so much! I really appreciate your corrections.

Homework

Hello!

I hope you're well.

For today's journal I'll be attempting to a homework assignment.

Note: I'm aiming for the American English dialect, in particular,. I wish to havewrite in a formal style.

Coyoacán is one of the most interesting places located in Mexico City.

There is a museum in Coyoacán called "Blue House" where Frida Kahlo and Diego Rivera were used to live.

Greetings, Azucena.

I would like to ask you some questions:

Have you ever traveled to another country?

What is your favorite song?

What do you do on weekends?

Do you like reading books?

Do you play an instrument?

Feedback

Terrific work!

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BlackGlasses

Dec. 13, 2022

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Thank you so much!

Homework


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Hello!


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I hope you're well.


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For today's journal I'll be attempting to a homework assignment.


For today's journal I'll be attempting to a homework assignment.

For today's journal I'll be attempting to do a homework assignment.

For today's journal I'll be attempting to do a homework assignment.

More natural

Note: I'm aimign for the American English dialect, specifically, for a formal written text.


Coyoacán is one of the most interesting places located in Mexico City.


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Coyoacán is one of the most interesting places located in Mexico City.

Natural ! Located becomes redundant, we never use it in this context !

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There is a museum in Coyoacán called "Blue House" where Frida Kahlo and Diego Rivera were used to live.


There is a museum in Coyoacán called "Blue House" where Frida Kahlo and Diego Rivera were used to live.

There is a museum in Coyoacán called the "Blue House" where Frida Kahlo and Diego Rivera were used to live.

There is a museum in Coyoacán called "Blue House" where Frida Kahlo and Diego Rivera were used to live.

Greetings, Azucena.


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I would like to ask you some questions:


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Have you ever traveled to another country?


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Note: I'm aiming for the American English dialect, in particular, I wish to have a formal style.


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