I hope you haveare having a nice day :)

"I hope you have a nice day" is better to say when you are ending a conversation. It can be part of a goodbye.
"I hope you are having a nice day" is better to use when starting a conversation. It can be part of a greeting.

Today I'm repeaattempting this homework because themy first was.. weird and confusing.attempt confused some people.

After you hadve seen the map, answer the questions.

First, go straight ahead for two blocks on Queen's aAvenue.

From this, it isn't clear which direction I should walk (north or south?). If you include "towards", you can tell your reader more information about direction.

Eg. "Go straight ahead for two blocks on Queen's Avenue, towards King's Way."

After that, turn to the right and then walk until you pass the football pitch.

Use "and" to connect actions that happen at the same time.
Use "and then" if you cannot do the second action at the same time as the first action.
I cannot turn right and pass the football pitch at the same time, so you should use "and then" to describe the order of events.

Alternatively, split this into two sentences: "After that, turn right. Then walk until you pass the football pitch."

Explain to him how he can go,et from your house to the bank.

After that walk 1one blocks straight ahead to the due south.

Write out numbers if they are less than ten (10).

Then walk passt the cinema and the post office, y. You will see the bank next to the post office.

After he gets the money, he wants to visit the museum.

Explain to him, which is the wayway to go from the bank to the museum.

First walk 1one block to the east along Oxford Street .

After that walk 1one block south along Queen's Avenue.

Then turn to the lefright and you will see the school.

Would it be on the left if he was walking south? I might be wrong, but I think it would be on his right.

Finally pass 2, walk past two buildings and you will then find the museum.

In the afternoon, you and heboth are going out to eat at a restaurant.

Explain to him, which way is the wayrestaurant from the museum to the restaurant.

First walk 1one block along Prince's Road.

After that walk 2two blocks north along Queen's Avenue.

Then turn to the left and walk 1one block, y. You will see the restaurant, which is in front of the camping site.

Explain to him, how he can goet from the restaurant to the pub.

First 1walk one block to the east.

After that you will see the Ffootball Ppitch.

Cross the football Ppitch, then turn to the left and walk 1one block.

Today I'm repeaattempting this week’s homework again because the first was..one, people found it to be weird and confusing.

After you hadve seen the map, answer the questions.

This is a very nuanced correction:
Changing ‘had’ to ‘have’ implies a future action that will be taking place, “after x has happened, do y”.

It is true that I have seen ‘had’ used in this context before, but it is extremely rare and it has become more of a colloquial kind of mistake rather than correct grammar, so I would recommend you to not use it in this context !

First go straight ahead until you’ve gotten two blocks inton Queen's avenue.

We will always say ‘until’ to imply a change in direction or action:
“Keep looking at me until I tell you to stop”
“Keep going right until you reach the pond, and then…”

After that, turn to the right and passwalk until you reach the end of the football pitch.

Explain to him how he can go, from your house to the bank.

After that walk 1 blocks straight ahead to the due south.

Then make your way passt the cinema and the post office, you will then see the bank next to the post office.

After he gets the money, he decides that he wants to visit the museum.

Explain to him, which is the way from the bank to the museum.

First walk 1 block to the east on Oxford Street .

Then turn to the left and you will see the school.

Finally pass 2 buildings and you will then find the museum.

Explain to him, which is the way from the museum to the restaurant.

Then turn to the left and walk 1 block, you will then see the restaurant, it is in front of/it is opposite to the camping site.

Explain to him, how he can go from the restaurant to the pub.

First walk 1 block to the east.

After that you will see the Football Pitch.

Cross the football Pitch, turn to the left and walk 1a block.