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BlackGlasses

Oct. 21, 2022

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Hello, I hope you're doing well :) thank you for decide correcting me.

This is my homework, It's in one month but I want to have free time so I'm doing it earlier.

Please see the image at the end for better understanding.


A) ¿Which way is the best to go from the bus station to your house?

Walk to the north, following the Queen's avenue for two apples, then turn to the right and walk one apple.

B) Your friend wants to go to the bank because he need some money. Explain him how he can go from your house to the bank.

Go down, walking in the High street for one apple and then turn to the left and walk 2 apples. The bank is in the opposite side of the pub.

C) After he get the money, wants to visit the museum. Explain him wich is the easy from the bank to the museum.

The easiest way is to go to the right taking the Oxford street and after you pass the cinema go down for one apple, following Queen's avenue after that turn to the left and finally, walk one apple.

D) In the afternoon you and he are going out to eat at a restaurant. Explain him how he can go from the restaurant to the pub.

Pass the car park, when you are in football pitch go down walking one apple in the Queen's avenue, you will see a bookstore at your right, then turn to the left and walk until reaching to the pub.

Thank you so much for correcting this :).

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Hello, I hope you're doing well :) tThank you for decideing to correcting me.

This is my homework, Iit's due in one month but I want to have free time so I'm doing it earlier.

A) ¿Which way is the best to go from the bus station to your house?

Walk to the nNorth, following the Queen's aAvenue for two apples, then turn to the right and walk one apple.

I'm not sure if "apples" is a part of your homework or if you want to say kilometres, miles, etc.

B) Your friend wants to go to the bank because he needs some money.

Explain to him how he can go from your house to the bank.

Go down, walking in the through High sStreet for one apple and t. Then turn to the left and walk 2 apples.

The bank is ion the opposite side of the pub.

C) After he gets the money, he wants to visit the museum.

Explain him which is the easiest way from the bank to the museum.

The easiest way is to go to the right, taking the Oxford sStreet and a. After you pass the cinema, go down for one apple, following Queen's aAvenue a. After that turn to the left and finally, walk one apple.

D) In the afternoon you and he arere both going out to eat at a restaurant.

Explain to him how he can goet from the restaurant to the pub.

Pass the car park, when you are ion the football pitch, go down walking one apple in theto Queen's aAvenue, y. You will see a bookstore aton your right, then turn to the left and walk until you reaching to the pub.

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BlackGlasses

Oct. 22, 2022

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Thank you!
Have a beautiful day :)

Homework

Hello, I hope you're doing well. :) tThank you for decide correcting me.

This is my homework,. It's in one month, but I wantprefer to have free time later so I'm doing ithis earlier.

Please see the attached image at the end of this writing for a better understanding of my journal post.

A) ¿Which way is the best way to go from the bus station to your house?

Walk to the nNorth, following the Queen's avenue for two apples, then turn to theurn right, and then walk one apple.

I don't know what you mean by "apples". Do you mean "blocks"?

B) Your friend wants to go to the bank because he need some money.

Explain to him how he canto go from your house to the bank.

Go down, walking in the High street for one apple and then turn to the, turn left, and then walk 2 apples.

The bank is ion the opposite side of the pub.

C) After he geot the money, wants tohe visits the museum.

Explain him wich is the easto him an easy way from the bank to the museum.

The easiest way is to go to the right, taking the Oxford street and after you, pass the cinema by goingo down for one apple, following Queen's avenue after that, turn to the left, and finally, walk one apple.

D) In the afternoon, you and he are goingim will go out toand eat at a restaurant.

Explain to him how he canto go from the restaurant to the pub.

Pass the car park, when you are in football pitch and go down and walking one apple ion the Queen's aAvenue, y when you are at the football field. You will see a bookstore aton your right, then turn to the. Turn left and walk until you reaching to the pub.

Thank you so much for correcting this :).

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BlackGlasses

Oct. 22, 2022

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Walk to the nNorth, following the Queen's avenue for two apples, then turn to theurn right, and then walk one apple.

Yes, I didn't knew how to express that.
I used apples because I read it somewhere but now I see that it's not clear enough to natives.

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BlackGlasses

Oct. 22, 2022

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Thank you so much!!
This is really useful, I'll try it again following your advices.
It was fun to see that my highschool instructions have mistakes too hahaha.
You're the best :) thank you again.
Have a nice day.

Hello, I hope you're doing well :) thank you for decideing to correcting me.

This is my homework,. It's due in one month but I want to have more free time later so I'm doing it earlier.

Please see the image at the end for better understandingmore context.

A) ¿Which way is the best to goway from the bus station to your house?

In English, we don't use upside down question marks.

Walk to the north, following the Queen's avenue for two apples, then turn to the right and walk one apple.

What do you mean by "two apples" and "one apple?" These are not common direction words.

B) Your friend wants to go to the bank because he needs some money.

Explain to him how he can go from your house to the bank.

Go down, walking in the through High street for one apple and then turn to the left and walk 2 apples.

The bank is ion the opposite side of the pub.

C) After he get the money, he wants to visit the museum.

Explain him which is the easyiest route from the bank to the museum.

The easiest way is to go to the right takingafter going on the Oxford street and a. After you pass the cinema, go down for one apple, following Queen's avenue after that. Finally, turn to the left and finally, walk one apple.

I cut down on the number of "afters" because it is best to vary word choice for readability. This sentence was a run on sentence, I suggest you read a handout about what those are and how to avoid them.

D) In the afternoon, you and he are going out to eat at a restaurant with him.

No need to say you're going out, that's implied.

Explain to him how he can go from the restaurant to the pub.

Pass the car park, and when you are in the football pitch go down, walking one apple ion the Queen's avenue, you will until you see a bookstore at your right, then turn to the left and walk until you reaching to the pub.

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BlackGlasses

Oct. 22, 2022

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Thank you so much! Your feedback means a lot for me.
You're awesome.
I'll do my best to improve.
Hahaha I just copied the instructions, it's funny to see how my highschool make mistakes too.
Have a nice day.

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Hello, I hope you're doing well :) thank you for decide correcting me.


Hello, I hope you're doing well :) thank you for decideing to correcting me.

Hello, I hope you're doing well. :) tThank you for decide correcting me.

Hello, I hope you're doing well :) tThank you for decideing to correcting me.

This is my homework, It's in one month but I want to have free time so I'm doing it earlier.


This is my homework,. It's due in one month but I want to have more free time later so I'm doing it earlier.

This is my homework,. It's in one month, but I wantprefer to have free time later so I'm doing ithis earlier.

This is my homework, Iit's due in one month but I want to have free time so I'm doing it earlier.

Please see the image at the end for better understanding.


Please see the image at the end for better understandingmore context.

Please see the attached image at the end of this writing for a better understanding of my journal post.

A) ¿Which way is the best to go from the bus station to your house?


A) ¿Which way is the best to goway from the bus station to your house?

In English, we don't use upside down question marks.

A) ¿Which way is the best way to go from the bus station to your house?

A) ¿Which way is the best to go from the bus station to your house?

Walk to the north, following the Queen's avenue for two apples, then turn to the right and walk one apple.


Walk to the north, following the Queen's avenue for two apples, then turn to the right and walk one apple.

What do you mean by "two apples" and "one apple?" These are not common direction words.

Walk to the nNorth, following the Queen's avenue for two apples, then turn to theurn right, and then walk one apple.

I don't know what you mean by "apples". Do you mean "blocks"?

Walk to the nNorth, following the Queen's aAvenue for two apples, then turn to the right and walk one apple.

I'm not sure if "apples" is a part of your homework or if you want to say kilometres, miles, etc.

B) Your friend wants to go to the bank because he need some money.


B) Your friend wants to go to the bank because he needs some money.

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B) Your friend wants to go to the bank because he needs some money.

Explain him how he can go from your house to the bank.


Explain to him how he can go from your house to the bank.

Explain to him how he canto go from your house to the bank.

Explain to him how he can go from your house to the bank.

Go down, walking in the High street for one apple and then turn to the left and walk 2 apples.


Go down, walking in the through High street for one apple and then turn to the left and walk 2 apples.

Go down, walking in the High street for one apple and then turn to the, turn left, and then walk 2 apples.

Go down, walking in the through High sStreet for one apple and t. Then turn to the left and walk 2 apples.

The bank is in the opposite side of the pub.


The bank is ion the opposite side of the pub.

The bank is ion the opposite side of the pub.

The bank is ion the opposite side of the pub.

C) After he get the money, wants to visit the museum.


C) After he get the money, he wants to visit the museum.

C) After he geot the money, wants tohe visits the museum.

C) After he gets the money, he wants to visit the museum.

Explain him wich is the easy from the bank to the museum.


Explain him which is the easyiest route from the bank to the museum.

Explain him wich is the easto him an easy way from the bank to the museum.

Explain him which is the easiest way from the bank to the museum.

The easiest way is to go to the right taking the Oxford street and after you pass the cinema go down for one apple, following Queen's avenue after that turn to the left and finally, walk one apple.


The easiest way is to go to the right takingafter going on the Oxford street and a. After you pass the cinema, go down for one apple, following Queen's avenue after that. Finally, turn to the left and finally, walk one apple.

I cut down on the number of "afters" because it is best to vary word choice for readability. This sentence was a run on sentence, I suggest you read a handout about what those are and how to avoid them.

The easiest way is to go to the right, taking the Oxford street and after you, pass the cinema by goingo down for one apple, following Queen's avenue after that, turn to the left, and finally, walk one apple.

The easiest way is to go to the right, taking the Oxford sStreet and a. After you pass the cinema, go down for one apple, following Queen's aAvenue a. After that turn to the left and finally, walk one apple.

D) In the afternoon you and he are going out to eat at a restaurant.


D) In the afternoon, you and he are going out to eat at a restaurant with him.

No need to say you're going out, that's implied.

D) In the afternoon, you and he are goingim will go out toand eat at a restaurant.

D) In the afternoon you and he arere both going out to eat at a restaurant.

Explain him how he can go from the restaurant to the pub.


Explain to him how he can go from the restaurant to the pub.

Explain to him how he canto go from the restaurant to the pub.

Explain to him how he can goet from the restaurant to the pub.

Pass the car park, when you are in football pitch go down walking one apple in the Queen's avenue, you will see a bookstore at your right, then turn to the left and walk until reaching to the pub.


Pass the car park, and when you are in the football pitch go down, walking one apple ion the Queen's avenue, you will until you see a bookstore at your right, then turn to the left and walk until you reaching to the pub.

Pass the car park, when you are in football pitch and go down and walking one apple ion the Queen's aAvenue, y when you are at the football field. You will see a bookstore aton your right, then turn to the. Turn left and walk until you reaching to the pub.

Pass the car park, when you are ion the football pitch, go down walking one apple in theto Queen's aAvenue, y. You will see a bookstore aton your right, then turn to the left and walk until you reaching to the pub.

Thank you so much for correcting this :).


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