July 12, 2025
Homestay three days
I went to theater today. It’s near the Elephant &Castle station.
My friend’s work in this theater, because I invitation the show.
I’m lucky.
Show was very fun.
It was about family history but I often don’t understand actor speak English.
I really want to speak fluently English, because I need to hardly study it every day!
After dinner, we talked about this show and drank.
It had good time.
I went to theater theatre today.
Spelling mistake and grammatical issue, use "the" when referring to a place.
It’s near the Elephant &Castle station.
My friend’s works in this theatere, because I was invitationed to the show.
Not sure what you meant, you either meant that you're "friend's work is in the theatre now" or that your "friend works in the theatre". Grammar mistake with "invitation", invitation is a noun, "invited" is the verb as you came to the show because of your friend. You need to fix your past and present tense.
I’m lucky.
Show was very fun.
It was about family history but I often doidn’t understand when the actor speakoke English.
You already watched the show and reflecting on how it was, the actor has already spoken in the show so instead of "speak" it would be "spoke". "Didn't" would be correct here instead of "Don't" since didn't is used to talk about the past.
I really want to speak fluently English, because I need to hardly study it hard every day!
"Hardly" means "not that much", "hard" means "a lot". This can change the meaning of the sentence.
After dinner, we talked about thise show and drank.
Past Tense
It had good time.
That doesn't make sense as the show is not the one having a good time, it is you!
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Very nice journal, keep going! There are some minor problems with past and present tenses and some wrong uses of words, but those can be fixed with the more you read and write English.
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Show was very fun. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was about family history but I often don’t understand actor speak English. It was about family history but I often d You already watched the show and reflecting on how it was, the actor has already spoken in the show so instead of "speak" it would be "spoke". "Didn't" would be correct here instead of "Don't" since didn't is used to talk about the past. |
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I really want to speak fluently English, because I need to hardly study it every day! I really want to speak fluently English, because I need to "Hardly" means "not that much", "hard" means "a lot". This can change the meaning of the sentence. |
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After dinner, we talked about this show and drank. After dinner, we talked about th Past Tense |
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It had good time. I That doesn't make sense as the show is not the one having a good time, it is you! |
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Homestay three days |
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I went to theater today. I went to the Spelling mistake and grammatical issue, use "the" when referring to a place. |
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It’s near the Elephant &Castle station. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My friend’s work in this theater, because I invitation the show. My friend Not sure what you meant, you either meant that you're "friend's work is in the theatre now" or that your "friend works in the theatre". Grammar mistake with "invitation", invitation is a noun, "invited" is the verb as you came to the show because of your friend. You need to fix your past and present tense. |
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I’m lucky. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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