July 14, 2025
Homestay four day
Today was special day！
I went to olympic sport center by bike. There is two people ride on the bikes.
I ride back seat.( front of ride my host family mother)
When we came back home way, we found some plum trees.
There were a lot of plums. We picked some plums.
Sometime we waved trees, because fell down some plums.
My host family made plum’s compote.
We had it after dinner. It was a little bit sour, but it’s very delicious.
It’s a cherished memories.
I had another stories, but it wrote next time.
Homestay fourth day
Today was special day！
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I went to an olympic sport center by bike.
There is two people ride on th-able bikes.
I ridode in the back seat.( (the front of ride was my host family's mother)
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When we came back home way, we found some plum trees.
Past tense since this happened in the past. "ride" can be used as a verb and a noun so make sure you know when you use it effectively
There were a lot of plums.
We picked some plums.
Sometime we waved trees, because fell down some plums and some plums fell down.
Clarity mistake, make it clearer that the reason for shaking the trees was to make the plums fall
My host's family made plum’s compote.
We had it after dinner.
It was a little bit sour, but it’ was very delicious.
Past tense, the first part of the sentence was correct but for some reason you switched the tenses in the seconds part of the sentence.
It’s a cherished memoriesy.
When using "a" you talk about a single object so instead of "memories" it would "memory"
I had anve other stories, but it wroteI will write them next time.
Past, present and future tense mix. Here using the word "had" means that you have stories but then you forgot it, use "have" instead since you still remember it. "Wrote" is the past tense but since you about to do the action, it should be future tense and should be "to write"
Feedback
Not too bad, there are some mistakes in the tenses and grammar but it is still very well written. Good job!
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Homestay four day Homestay fourth day |
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Today was special day！ I went to olympic sport center by bike. Today was special day |
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There is two people ride on the bikes. There is two people ride |
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I ride back seat.( front of ride my host family mother) When we came back home way, we found some plum trees. I r Past tense since this happened in the past. "ride" can be used as a verb and a noun so make sure you know when you use it effectively |
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There were a lot of plums. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We picked some plums. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Sometime we waved trees, because fell down some plums. Sometime we waved trees Clarity mistake, make it clearer that the reason for shaking the trees was to make the plums fall |
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My host family made plum’s compote. My host's family |
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We had it after dinner. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was a little bit sour, but it’s very delicious. It was a little bit sour, but it Past tense, the first part of the sentence was correct but for some reason you switched the tenses in the seconds part of the sentence. |
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It’s a cherished memories. It’s a cherished memor When using "a" you talk about a single object so instead of "memories" it would "memory" |
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I had another stories, but it wrote next time. I ha Past, present and future tense mix. Here using the word "had" means that you have stories but then you forgot it, use "have" instead since you still remember it. "Wrote" is the past tense but since you about to do the action, it should be future tense and should be "to write" |
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