Aug. 29, 2020
Holidays!
Today I've finished my semester in the university, I complete all my subjects, my grades weren't as good as I expected but I'm happy with them.
The first thing I began to do in my holidays was take my languages studies, English and German, I've tried to make an immersion in the language but is a little difficult for me.
now it's time to go to bed, later i'll go to the bathroom and i'll clean my teeth (or I brush my teeth?) anyway, I have to sleep, tomorrow I'm going to travel and see my girlfriend.
Holidays!
Today I've finished my semester inat the university,. I've completed all my subjects, m. My grades weren't as good as I expected, but I'm happy with them.
The first thing I began to do in my holidays was takedid in my break was my languages studies, English and German,. I've tried to make anbe immersioned in those languages, but it is a little difficult for me.
"Break" is American English, "holiday" is British, but it also requires some different prepositions.
nNow it's time to go to bed, l. Later iI'll go to the bathroom, and iI'll clean my teeth (or I brush my teeth?) a. Anyway, I have to sleep, as tomorrow I'm going to travel and see my girlfriend.
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Nice job with compound sentences. You could improve a bit on punctuation and prepositions, though.
April 1, 2021
Thanks for your help!
Holidays!
Today I've finished my semester in the uat University, I and I have completed all of my subjects, m. My grades weren't as good as I expected but I'm happy with them.
The first thing I began to do during my holidays was take my languages studies, English and German, I've tried to make an immersionstudy German and English. I've tried to immerse myself in the languages but is a little difficult for me.
nNow it's time to go to bed, later i'I’ll go to the bathroom and i'll clean my teeth (or I brush my teeth?) a. Anyway, I have to sleep, as tomorrow I'm going to travel and see my girlfriend.
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Really good job, keep it up!
April 1, 2021
Thanks for your comments!
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The first thing I began to do in my holidays was take my languages studies, English and German, I've tried to make an immersion in the language but is a little difficult for me. The first thing I began to do during my holidays was The first thing I "Break" is American English, "holiday" is British, but it also requires some different prepositions. |
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now it's time to go to bed, later i'll go to the bathroom and i'll clean my teeth (or I brush my teeth?) anyway, I have to sleep, tomorrow I'm going to travel and see my girlfriend.
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