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Roccober01

July 10, 2025

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holiday in london with a friend

I gift to my friend a trip in london for his graduation, we both love tennis so we went in the wimbledon queue, we arrive 25 hours before the frist match. We arrived without any tecnical things like (tents, some pillows, a blanket and also any mattres) so we just living the adventure. We check on internet if was a shop in the wimbledon zone and we went to buy the most important things,after we coming back a the queue. We open the tents, we infilate the air mattres and we relax inside the tent...


Ho regalato a un amico un viaggio a Londra per la sua laurea. Amiamo entrambi il tennis, quindi ci siamo messi in coda per Wimbledon, arrivando 25 ore prima della prima partita. Siamo arrivati ​​senza alcun equipaggiamento tecnico (tende, cuscini, una coperta e anche qualche materasso), quindi ci siamo semplicemente goduti l'avventura. Abbiamo controllato su internet se c'era un negozio nella zona di Wimbledon e siamo andati a comprare le cose più importanti, dopo essere tornati in coda. Abbiamo aperto le tende, abbiamo gonfiato i materassini e ci siamo rilassati dentro...

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hHoliday in lLondon with a fFriend

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I gift toed my friend a trip into lLondon for his graduation, we both love tennis so we went in the wimbledon queue, wto Wimbledon. We arrived 25 hours before the frirst match.

We arrived without any tecnical things like (some important items, such as tents, some pillows, a blanket and also any mattres) so ws, or mattresses. We were just living thean adventure.

We checked on the internet if was a shopto see if a shop was open in the wWimbledon zone and w. We went to buy the most important things,after we coming then came back ato the queue.

My sentence makes sense if you left the line (queue), then came back after buying things.

We opened the tents, we infilated the air mattress, and we relaxed inside the tent...

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Overall really good! I understood all of your sentences, but there were some grammatical mistakes. Keep it up, I hope Wimbledon was fun!

holiday in london with a friend


hHoliday in lLondon with a fFriend

Title rules

We open the tents, we infilate the air mattres and we relax inside the tent...


We opened the tents, we infilated the air mattress, and we relaxed inside the tent...

I gift to my friend a trip in london for his graduation, we both love tennis so we went in the wimbledon queue, we arrive 25 hours before the frist match.


I gift toed my friend a trip into lLondon for his graduation, we both love tennis so we went in the wimbledon queue, wto Wimbledon. We arrived 25 hours before the frirst match.

We arrived without any tecnical things like (tents, some pillows, a blanket and also any mattres) so we just living the adventure.


We arrived without any tecnical things like (some important items, such as tents, some pillows, a blanket and also any mattres) so ws, or mattresses. We were just living thean adventure.

We check on internet if was a shop in the wimbledon zone and we went to buy the most important things,after we coming back a the queue.


We checked on the internet if was a shopto see if a shop was open in the wWimbledon zone and w. We went to buy the most important things,after we coming then came back ato the queue.

My sentence makes sense if you left the line (queue), then came back after buying things.

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