July 4, 2022
holiday
We travel in this year in this summer in paris to the capital of France . A holyday is great and relax . But it cost a lot of money and time . Depends on if take the airplane or the car. You can have a holiday when do free day have to hard work or when you stress have . But I think no all peopel can I have much peopel make night layer .I thought important peopel how doctors police firemans and lawyer need more holydays . Because they need more freetime for his self and his children . I see peopel all the with this personals and they are to stress and to serious the need really a hollyday and I hope the get someone.
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July 5, 2022
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holiday
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We travel in this year in this summer in paris to the capital of France . We travel |
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A holyday is great and relax . A hol |
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But it cost a lot of money and time . But it costs a lot of money and time |
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Depends on if take the airplane or the car.
'The airplane' sounds like you own the airplane |
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You can have a holiday when do free day have to hard work or when you stress have . You can have a holiday when |
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But I think no all peopel can I have much peopel make night layer .I thought important peopel how doctors police firemans and lawyer need more holydays . But I think not all peop |
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Because they need more freetime for his self and his children . Because they need more free time for |
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I see peopel all the with this personals and they are to stress and to serious the need really a hollyday and I hope the get someone. I see peop |
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