June 16, 2022
holiday
It is finally summer. I and my family go to finally to all the atraction in england .We got to the we fly with the airplane there we and go to the biggest hotel in the town .Our we get than two a douple room I with my sisters my brothers together and my parents. Firtst we came on in the night also we go first to the bed and then we eat in the dining breakfast watch tv eat elso to lunch then we see everything .Big ben the giant wheel and we drive with the bus and we participate on the tour. We drive to throught the whole town and we see everything until dinner we are back
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It is finally summer.
I and mMy family and I are goingo to finally tosee all the attractions in eEngland .We got to the we fly with the airplane. We flew there we and gowent to the biggest hotel in the town .Our we get. We thaen rented two a doupble rooms. I with my sisters and my brothers together in one and my parents in the other.
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Feedback
Over all you expressed your ideas well. I think the best thing to work on is your use of past tense. I'd also watch some English tv or read English to learn some of the stylistic aspects of the langauge.
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I and my family go to finally to all the atraction in england .We got to the we fly with the airplane there we and go to the biggest hotel in the town .Our we get than two a douple room I with my sisters my brothers together and my parents.
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Firtst we came on in the night also we go first to the bed and then we eat in the dining breakfast watch tv eat elso to lunch then we see everything .Big ben the giant wheel and we drive with the bus and we participate on the tour.
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We drive to throught the whole town and we see everything until dinner we are back We dr We will drive |
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