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lari123

Dec. 11, 2020

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Hobbies

Growing up, I’ve seen myself being interested in quite a lot of hobbies. I’ve always liked to learn new things. I would imagine doing those things, which would made me even more motivated to start something new. I wondered what it felt like, how was the process of certain thing, how they come up with that incredible final product. Back then I was more into artisanal stuff, hand crafted things such as origami.However my first hobby if I do remember correctly, was drawing.I started when I was 12 years old and I carry this passion with me until today. Seeing where I am now, makes me feel very grateful and proud of my achievements related to drawing.
I remember as well, trying to learn how to braid trough YouTube videos. I would learn at home and then as soon as I arrived at school I would ask my friend who had a pretty long hair, if I could braid them. When I was done with the braid, feeling very proud of my work, I would take a picture and then show it to her.She had loved it!
A couple years ago I started learning languages and I keep doing it since I liked it very much. For now my mains hobbies are drawing and learning languages, even though I’ve tried many other hobbies, I didn’t stick with any of them. I hope to continue discovering new things to keep me busy during the day, that way I don’t spend too much time in social media.

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Hobbies

Growing up, I’ve seen myself being was always interested in quite a lot of hobbies.

I’ve always liked to learn new things.

I would imagine myself doing those things, which would made me even more motivated to start something new.

I wondered what it felt like, how was the process of certain thingsuch and such, how they come up with that incredible final product.

Back then I was more into artisanal stuff,sy-stuff, and example being hand crafted things, such as origami. However, my first hobby, if I do remember correctly, was drawing. I started when I was 12 years old, and I continue carry this passion with me until today.

Seeing where I am now, makes me feel very grateful and proud of my achievements related to drawingthat are drawing-related.

I remember as well, trying to learn how to braid through YouTube videos as well.

I would learn at home, and then as soon as I arrived at school I would ask my friend, who had a pretty long hair, if I could braid ithem.

"Them" is plural, unless it's someones preferred pronouns.

When I was done with the braiding, feeling very proud of my work, I would take a picture and then show it to her. She had loved it!

You don't need to put "then" here.

A couple years ago, I started learning languages and I've keep doing it, since I liked it veryso much.

For now, my mains hobbies are drawing and learning languages, eanguage learning. Even though I’ve tried many other hobbies, I didn’on't stick with any of them.

I hope to continue discovering new things to keep me busy during the day, t. That way, I dwon't spend too much time ion social media.

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Great Job! Just a few corrections! Everything was really clear and concise!

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lari123

Dec. 11, 2020

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Thank you !

Hobbies


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Growing up, I’ve seen myself being interested in quite a lot of hobbies.


Growing up, I’ve seen myself being was always interested in quite a lot of hobbies.

I’ve always liked to learn new things.


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I would imagine doing those things, which would made me even more motivated to start something new.


I would imagine myself doing those things, which would made me even more motivated to start something new.

I wondered what it felt like, how was the process of certain thing, how they come up with that incredible final product.


I wondered what it felt like, how was the process of certain thingsuch and such, how they come up with that incredible final product.

Back then I was more into artisanal stuff, hand crafted things such as origami.However my first hobby if I do remember correctly, was drawing.I started when I was 12 years old and I carry this passion with me until today.


Back then I was more into artisanal stuff,sy-stuff, and example being hand crafted things, such as origami. However, my first hobby, if I do remember correctly, was drawing. I started when I was 12 years old, and I continue carry this passion with me until today.

Seeing where I am now, makes me feel very grateful and proud of my achievements related to drawing.


Seeing where I am now, makes me feel very grateful and proud of my achievements related to drawingthat are drawing-related.

I remember as well, trying to learn how to braid trough YouTube videos.


I remember as well, trying to learn how to braid through YouTube videos as well.

I would learn at home and then as soon as I arrived at school I would ask my friend who had a pretty long hair, if I could braid them.


I would learn at home, and then as soon as I arrived at school I would ask my friend, who had a pretty long hair, if I could braid ithem.

"Them" is plural, unless it's someones preferred pronouns.

When I was done with the braid, feeling very proud of my work, I would take a picture and then show it to her.She had loved it!


When I was done with the braiding, feeling very proud of my work, I would take a picture and then show it to her. She had loved it!

You don't need to put "then" here.

A couple years ago I started learning languages and I keep doing it since I liked it very much.


A couple years ago, I started learning languages and I've keep doing it, since I liked it veryso much.

For now my mains hobbies are drawing and learning languages, even though I’ve tried many other hobbies, I didn’t stick with any of them.


For now, my mains hobbies are drawing and learning languages, eanguage learning. Even though I’ve tried many other hobbies, I didn’on't stick with any of them.

I hope to continue discovering new things to keep me busy during the day, that way I don’t spend too much time in social media.


I hope to continue discovering new things to keep me busy during the day, t. That way, I dwon't spend too much time ion social media.

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