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Feb. 4, 2020

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Advantages and Disadvantages of The Cities

First I begin this post with the advantages. So the advantages of the cities are you can buy easily food on every corner unlike in a countryside. You get more informations of the world because in a big city there are lots of school and you can get easily newspapers. You can go everywhere because in a big city the public transport is better than in a village. And you can get job more easily than in a village. The disadavantages are the smogs because it's unhealthy. The cities are usually loud and dirty. In a crowded city the number of the crimes are higher than in a village and crimes usually happen every day.

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The cities are usually loud and dirty.


The cCities are usually loud and dirty. Cities are usually loud and dirty.

The cCities are usually loud and dirty. Cities are usually loud and dirty.

In a crowded city the number of the crimes are higher than in a village and crimes usually happen every day.


In a crowded city, the number of the crimes are higher than incrime rate is generally higher than that in (of?) a village, and crimes usually happen every day. In a crowded city, the crime rate is generally higher than that in (of?) a village, and crimes usually happen every day.

And you can get job more easily than in a village.


And you can get a job more easily than in a village. And you can get a job more easily than in a village.

And you can get a job more easily than you can in a village. And you can get a job more easily than you can in a village.

The disadavantages are the smogs because it's unhealthy.


ThOne disadavantages are is the smogs, because it's unhealthy. One disadvantage is the smog, because it's unhealthy.

ThOne disadavantages are is the smogs because it's unhealthy. One disadvantage is the smog because it's unhealthy.

Advantages and Disadvantages of The Cities


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I've changed your title because your post is about advantages of living in a city, not advantages of the cities themselves. For example, an advantages of cities might be concentrating human populations to leave more spaces undeveloped wildlife.

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Advantages and disadvantages is good, pros and cons is another common expression that means the same thing.

First I begin this post with the advantages.


First Ily, I will begin this post with the advantages. Firstly, I will begin this post with the advantages.

First I'll begin (this post) with the advantages. First I'll begin (this post) with the advantages.

First, I begin this pos'll start with the advantages. First, I'll start with the advantages.

So the advantages of the cities are you can buy easily food on every corner unlike in a countryside.


So tThe advantages of the cities are you can buy easily food onat every corner unlike in athe countryside. The advantages of cities are you can buy easily food at every corner unlike in the countryside.

"So' would be used if you were carrying over from another point, and it sounds more informal. Best to drop it here. "The" is not used with general statements in English

So thOne advantages of the cities areliving in a city is that you can buy easily buy food on every corner unlikewhich you can't do in athe countryside. One advantage of living in a city is that you can easily buy food on every corner which you can't do in the countryside.

"unlike in a countryside" This sounds like a faulty comparison to me. I'm about 90% sure that it is.

So the advantages of the cities are yYou can buy easily food onat every corner unlike in athe countryside. You can buy easily food at every corner unlike in the countryside.

You get more informations of the world because in a big city there are lots of school and you can get easily newspapers.


You can get more informations of about the world because in a big city there are lots of schools and you can get easily get newspapers. You can get more information about the world because in a big city there are lots of schools and you can easily get newspapers.

You get morecan have better access to informations of about the world because in a big city there are lots of schools and you can get easily newspapers. You can have better access to information about the world because in a big city there are lots of schools and newspapers.

Your sentence makes sense but is not parallel. Also, in my opinion, the word "get" is overly used by many people. "You can get more information" is not incorrect, but my revision is more precise.

You can get more informations of about the world, because in a big city there are lots of schools, and you can get easily newspapersnewspapers are easier to get. You can get more information about the world, because in a big city there are lots of schools, and newspapers are easier to get.

You can go everywhere because in a big city the public transport is better than in a village.


You can go everywhere because in a big city the public transportation is better than that in a village. You can go everywhere because in a big city public transportation is better than that in a village.

"better than THAT.." The "that" is necessary here to correct the faulty comparison. You've compared transportation to a village not transportation in a city to transportation in a village.

You can go everywhere because in a big city thwithin the city because public transportation is better than in a village. You can go everywhere within the city because public transportation is better than in a village.

Transport of people is transportation

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