My First review My First review

I will soon take the TOEFL test. I will soon take the TOEFL.

"test" is redundant, as the T in TOEFL stands for "test" :-)

I expect to getting good results. I expect to get good results.

I expect getting good results. I expect getting good results.

"I expect to get good results" "I'm expecting good results" For both, you can add "and" to the beginning of the sentences - "I will soon take the TOEFL test (and) I expect to get good results)

I expect to be getting good results. I expect to be getting good results.

I expect to getting good results. I expect to get good results.

I expect gettingto achieve good results. I expect to achieve good results.

Everyday, I will write about a somen interesting informationtopic that I read about. Everyday, I will write about an interesting topic that I read about.

Everyday I will write about a some interesting information I read about. Everyday I will write about a some interesting information I read about.

"write about some a interesting information I read about" --> "write about some interesting information I read about" You do not need to put an "a" before "some interesting information"

Everyday I will write about a some interesting information I read about. Everyday I will write about some interesting information I read about.

Everyday I will write about a some interesting information Ithat I've read about. Everyday I will write about a some interesting information that I've read about.

Everyday I will write about a some interesting information I read about. Everyday I will write about some interesting information I read about.

Hopefully, practicing my writing skills everyday will get me the results I'm striveing for. Hopefully, practicing my writing skills everyday will get me the results I'm striving for.

Feel free to correct me as much as you'd like. Feel free to correct me as much as you'd like.

I am excited abouto improveing my writing skills. I am excited about improving my writing skills.

The world is still suffering the aftermath caused by Covid-19. The world is still suffering the aftermath caused by Covid-19.

"The world is still suffering the aftermath caused by Covid-19" --> "The world is still suffering from the aftermath caused by Covid-19"

The world is still suffering the aftermath caused byof Covid-19. The world is still suffering the aftermath of Covid-19.

Now that everything seems to being headingo in the right way, there is a new menace ion the horizon: Monkeypox. Now that everything seems to being heading in the right way, there is a new menace on the horizon: Monkeypox.

Now that everything seems to be go ing the right way, there is a new menace in the horizon: Monkeypox. Now that everything seems to be going the right way, there is a new menace in the horizon: Monkeypox.

Now that everything seems to be headingo in the right waydirection, there is a new menace in the horizon: Monkeypox. Now that everything seems to be heading in the right direction, there is a new menace in the horizon: Monkeypox.

"heading in the right direction" is the figure of speech you were going for, I think

Now that everything seems to go in the right wayJust when things are starting to go back to normal, there is a new menace in the horizon: Monkeypox. Just when things are starting to go back to normal, there is a new menace in the horizon: Monkeypox.

This is much more natural

WHO stated that Monkeypox poses a moderate risk for global health since andue to the latest outbreak that has spread all overcross the world. WHO stated that Monkeypox poses a moderate risk for global health due to the latest outbreak that has spread across the world.

WHO stated that Monkeypox poses a moderate risk for global health since an outbreak spread all over the world. WHO stated that Monkeypox poses a moderate risk for global health since an outbreak spread all over the world.

The grammar and spelling seem to be alright, but you are introducing a subject that has not been introduced. When you are going to introduce a subject for the first time (WHO, the World Health Organization), be sure to include that in your sentence. "The WHO (World Health Organization) stated that Monkeypox poses a moderate risk for global health since an outbreak spread all over the world"

The WHO stated that Monkeypox poses a moderate risk for global health since an outbreak spread all over the world. The WHO stated that Monkeypox poses a moderate risk for global health since an outbreak spread all over the world.

A good habit is to write out acronyms when they're first mentioned: The World Health Organization (WHO) stated that...

WHOThe WHO has stated that Monkeypox poses a moderate risk for global health, since an outbreak spread all over the world. The WHO has stated that Monkeypox poses a moderate risk for global health, since an outbreak spread all over the world.

I firmly believe humanity must stop Monkepox from advacing and taking many more lives. I firmly believe humanity must stop Monkepox from advacing and taking many more lives.

Monkeypox* Advancing*

In recent years, we have seen how Covid-19 took the life of a huge partves of humanity. In recent years, we have seen how Covid-19 took the lives of many.

"a huge part of humanity" sounds strange to me.

In recent years we have seen how Covid-19 took the life of a huge partves of humanity. In recent years we have seen how Covid-19 took the lives of many.

In recent years we have seen how Covid-19 took the life of a huge part of humanitymany people's lives. In recent years we have seen how Covid-19 took many people's lives.

Humanity doesn't really have a life, individual humans do, so this strikes me as a little off. There are many ways you could say this, so I chose one.

Had the world known earlier about Covid-19 earlier, we could have done something about it. Had the world known about Covid-19 earlier, we could have done something about it.