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History Classes

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.

When asked abut whether or not students should take history courses whatever they are major in, some people completely support that students have to take history lessons. While others oppose that the history courses are not required. There are some advantages and disadvantages, but, I am more in favor of students should not be required to take history classes.

To begin with, if students are able to take courses they have a passion for, it will increase their career options. More to the point, students explore their interests by taking courses they like, not are forced to take lessons they dislike, which can broaden their horizons. They will have some distinct viewpoints which are able to enrich their integrated abilities, meanwhile, augment the opportunity of career . For instance, students who are in the field of English, they are also greatly interested in Science field. They take several related courses in order to enhance their knowledge and self-ability. After, graduated, they will have higher chance of working oversea, since they have strong fundamental in both English and Science.

In addition, what if students can focus on the field they are major in, they can put their whole energy on it and make efforts to become experts. To be more concise, if students have to take some courses which they are not interested, it is wasting time. Students can spare their time to study the field they chose and so their best on it. In the future, they probably become experts who are able to contribute our society. Case in point, most students who are excellent at computer, but not history. If they can use their time on computer studies, not taking history classes, they will have more knowledge and concept about computer, so. that students are able to invent something which is benefit to our society, By focusing on the field they truly have passion for, we can make a different to the world.

Admittedly, some people might say that students should take history courses no matter what their field of study is. It either helps them gain knowledge of world history or wider their perspectives. For example, suppose students had made friends with foreigners, they may share some history opinions, so that they are able to make closer with each others. Yet, I still believe that students do not have to take history lessons as curriculum, since they can take courses they are extremely interested to help them decide career, and focus on the filed which they can be contributors in the future. Hence, let students take courses they like is more benefit to them in their lives, after all.

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History Classes

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.

When asked about whether or not students should take history courses no matter whatever they are majoring in, some people completely support that students have to take history lessonsproposal while others oppose it.

While others oppose that the history courses are not required.

There are some advantages and disadvantages to both sides, but, I am more in favor of students should not being required to take history classes.

To begin with, if students are able to take courses they have a passion for, it will increase their career options.

More to the point, sStudents explore their interests by taking courses they like, not arewhich can broaden their horizons, unlike being forced to take lessons they dislike, which can broaden their horizons.

They will have somedevelop distinct viewpoints which are able to enrich their integrated abilities, meanwhile, augment the opportunity of career that will enrich their skill-sets and augment their potential career opportunities.

For instance, students who are in the field of English, they are also greatly interested in Sscience field.

They take several related courses in order to enhance their knowledge and self-abilitykills.

After, graduateding, they will have higher chances of workingbeing hired oversea,s since they will have strong fundamentals in both English and Sscience.

In addition, what if students can focus on the field in which they are major ing, they can putfocus all of their whole energy on ithat field and make an efforts to become experts.

To be more concise, iIf students have to take some courses in which they are not interested, it is a wastinge of time.

Students can sparave their time to study the field they chose and sdo their best oin ithat field.

In the future, they will probably become experts who are able to contribute our society.

Case in point, most students who are excellent atwith computer, but nots are not well-versed in history.

If they can usespend their time on computer studies, no without taking history classes, they will have more knowledge and concept about computer, sos.

thatSo, those students arwill be able to invent something which iss that benefit to our society,. By focusing on the fields they truly have passion for, westudents can make a different toce in the world.

Admittedly, some people might say that students should take history courses no matter what their field of study is.

It either helps them gain knowledge of world history or widern their perspectives.

For example, suppose some students had made friends with foreigners, t. They mayight share some history opinions, so that they arknowledge of history, and so they might be able to makbecome closer with each others.

YetHowever, I still believe that students shouldo not have to take history lessons as curriculum, since they canpart of their curriculum because takeing courses they are extremely interested toin can help them decide on a career, and on focus on the fileda field to which they can be contributorse in the future.

HencTherefore, letting students take courses they like is more benefitcial to them in their lives, after all.

History Classes


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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When asked abut whether or not students should take history courses whatever they are major in, some people completely support that students have to take history lessons.


When asked about whether or not students should take history courses no matter whatever they are majoring in, some people completely support that students have to take history lessonsproposal while others oppose it.

While others oppose that the history courses are not required.


While others oppose that the history courses are not required.

There are some advantages and disadvantages, but, I am more in favor of students should not be required to take history classes.


There are some advantages and disadvantages to both sides, but, I am more in favor of students should not being required to take history classes.

To begin with, if students are able to take courses they have a passion for, it will increase their career options.


To begin with, if students are able to take courses they have a passion for, it will increase their career options.

More to the point, students explore their interests by taking courses they like, not are forced to take lessons they dislike, which can broaden their horizons.


More to the point, sStudents explore their interests by taking courses they like, not arewhich can broaden their horizons, unlike being forced to take lessons they dislike, which can broaden their horizons.

They will have some distinct viewpoints which are able to enrich their integrated abilities, meanwhile, augment the opportunity of career .


They will have somedevelop distinct viewpoints which are able to enrich their integrated abilities, meanwhile, augment the opportunity of career that will enrich their skill-sets and augment their potential career opportunities.

For instance, students who are in the field of English, they are also greatly interested in Science field.


For instance, students who are in the field of English, they are also greatly interested in Sscience field.

They take several related courses in order to enhance their knowledge and self-ability.


They take several related courses in order to enhance their knowledge and self-abilitykills.

After, graduated, they will have higher chance of working oversea, since they have strong fundamental in both English and Science.


After, graduateding, they will have higher chances of workingbeing hired oversea,s since they will have strong fundamentals in both English and Sscience.

In addition, what if students can focus on the field they are major in, they can put their whole energy on it and make efforts to become experts.


In addition, what if students can focus on the field in which they are major ing, they can putfocus all of their whole energy on ithat field and make an efforts to become experts.

To be more concise, if students have to take some courses which they are not interested, it is wasting time.


To be more concise, iIf students have to take some courses in which they are not interested, it is a wastinge of time.

Students can spare their time to study the field they chose and so their best on it.


Students can sparave their time to study the field they chose and sdo their best oin ithat field.

In the future, they probably become experts who are able to contribute our society.


In the future, they will probably become experts who are able to contribute our society.

Case in point, most students who are excellent at computer, but not history.


Case in point, most students who are excellent atwith computer, but nots are not well-versed in history.

If they can use their time on computer studies, not taking history classes, they will have more knowledge and concept about computer, so.


If they can usespend their time on computer studies, no without taking history classes, they will have more knowledge and concept about computer, sos.

that students are able to invent something which is benefit to our society, By focusing on the field they truly have passion for, we can make a different to the world.


thatSo, those students arwill be able to invent something which iss that benefit to our society,. By focusing on the fields they truly have passion for, westudents can make a different toce in the world.

Admittedly, some people might say that students should take history courses no matter what their field of study is.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It either helps them gain knowledge of world history or wider their perspectives.


It either helps them gain knowledge of world history or widern their perspectives.

For example, suppose students had made friends with foreigners, they may share some history opinions, so that they are able to make closer with each others.


For example, suppose some students had made friends with foreigners, t. They mayight share some history opinions, so that they arknowledge of history, and so they might be able to makbecome closer with each others.

Yet, I still believe that students do not have to take history lessons as curriculum, since they can take courses they are extremely interested to help them decide career, and focus on the filed which they can be contributors in the future.


YetHowever, I still believe that students shouldo not have to take history lessons as curriculum, since they canpart of their curriculum because takeing courses they are extremely interested toin can help them decide on a career, and on focus on the fileda field to which they can be contributorse in the future.

Hence, let students take courses they like is more benefit to them in their lives, after all.


HencTherefore, letting students take courses they like is more benefitcial to them in their lives, after all.

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