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Secchan

Feb. 25, 2024

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Hinamatsuri

When it comes to March third coming, it's time to celebrate Hinamatsuri, dolls festival in English. Usually, when a girl was born, the parents would purchase a set of Hina dolls for make a wish to the healthy growth of the girl's life.

My daughter grew up enough and already lelt our house. Even though she isn't here, I decided to display them for myself because they're so beautiful.

However, it's very hard work to take out a lot of boxes from strage room. In the end, the
number of completed set of dolls are fifteen but I displayed seven of them. If I displayed seven-tiered set of dolls, it must need whole one room.

I cleaned the space of the top of the bookshelf and set a red carpet. Then I put on the emperor and the empress. After that the room dramatically beautiful. I felt like I did something good because I omitted the decorations but I thought I'm keeping to protect the Japan's good tradition now.

I might display them every year.


ひな祭り

3月3日といえばひな祭りです。普通は女の子が生まれると、親は子供が健康に育つように願いをこめて、お雛様を買います。

私の娘は大きくなって家を出ていきました。娘はいないのですが、今回自分のためにお雛様を飾ってみました。

でも、納戸からたくさんの箱を取り出して飾り付けるのは大変な仕事です。結局、全部で15体のうち7体を取り出しました。もし全部出していたら、一部屋使ってしまいます。

そこで、本棚の上をきれいにして、赤い布を敷いてお雛様を飾りました。部屋はパッと明るくきれいになりました。少々お人形を減らしましたが、私は日本の伝統を守ったと、とても良い事をした気分になりました。

来年も飾ろうと思います。

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Hinamatsuri

When it comes to March third coming, it'sMarch third arrives, it will be time to celebrate Hinamatsuri, dthe Dolls fFestival in English.

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I cleaned the space of then top of the bookshelf and set a red carpet on it.

Then I put on the emperor and the empress on it.

After that the room dramatically beautiful.

I felt like I did something good becauseeven though I omitted the decorations, but I thought I'm keeping to protect the Japan's gooda good Japanese tradition now.

I might display them every year.

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Very nice description.

When it comes to March third coming, it'sMarch third arrives, it will be time to celebrate Hinamatsuri, dor the Doll's fFestival in English.

Usually, when a girl wais born, the parents would purchase a set of Hina dolls for make a wish to theand pray for healthy growth ofin the girl's life.

My daughter grew up enough and already lelhas already grown up and left our house.

Even though she isn't here, I decided to display them for myself because they're so beautiful.

However, it's verya lot of hard work to take out a lot ofll of the boxes from the storage room.

In the endotal, the
number of completed set of dolls areis fifteen, but I displayed seven of them.

If I displayed the seven-tiered set of dolls, it mustwould need a whole one room.

I cleaned the space of theon top of the bookshelf and seput a red carpeloth on it.

Then I put on the emperor and the empress on it.

After that the room dramaticallyInstantly, the room looked so beautiful.

I felt like I did something good because, even though I omitted some of the decorations but I thought I'm keeping to protect the Japan's good, I'm continuing a good Japanese tradition now.

I might display them every year.

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Secchan

Feb. 26, 2024

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Thank you so much!

When it comes to March third comingarrives, it's time to celebrate Hinamatsuri, or the dolls festival in English.

Usually, when a girl wais born, the parents would purchase a set of Hina dolls for make a wish to the healthy growth of the girl'sand wish her a healthy life.

My daughter grew up enough and alreadyand has now lelft our house.

Even though she isn't here, I decided to display them for myself because dolls as they're so beautiful.

However, it's verya lot of hard work to take out a lot ofll the boxes from storage room.

In the end, the
number of completed set of dolls
awere fifteen butand I displayed seven of them.

If I displayed seven-tiered set of dolls, it mustwould need a whole one room.

I cleaned the space of then top of the bookshelf and setplaced a red carpet.

Then I put on the emperor and the empress.

After that the room dramatically beautiful.

I felt like I did something good becauseeven though I omitted the decorations butand I thought I'm keepcontinuing to protect the Japan's good tradition now.s.

I might display them every year.

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Secchan

Feb. 25, 2024

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ありがとうございます!

When it comes to March third is coming, so it's time to celebrate Hinamatsuri, dDoll's festival in English.

While some people may call it that, I most people actually we just use the Japanese name as well (similar to words like Sumo it's better than trying to translate it) https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hinamatsuri

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it's a little hard to explain the reason for this "the" but "left the house" is kind of almost 慣用語 levels of natural for when kid's grow up and leave home.

However, it's very hard work to take out a lot of boxes from the storage room.

In the endtotal, the
number of completed sets of dolls areis fifteen but I only displayed seven of them.

If I displayed seven-tiered set of dolls, it mustwould need a whole one room.

I'm not 100% sure what you mean here

I cleaned the space ofn the top of the bookshelf and setpread a red carpet on top.

After that the room dramaticallyInstantly, the room felt brighter and more beautiful.

This is a little closer to what you wrote in Japanese.

I felt like I did something good because although I omitted some of the decorations but I thought I'm keeping to protect thefelt like I'm protecting one of Japan's good tradition now.

I might displaydo themis every year.

This is a different sentence but it fits the feeling a little bit better! Sometimes simpler is better.

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Secchan

Feb. 25, 2024

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ありがとうございます!

Hinamatsuri


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When it comes to March third coming, it's time to celebrate Hinamatsuri, dolls festival in English.


When it comes to March third is coming, so it's time to celebrate Hinamatsuri, dDoll's festival in English.

While some people may call it that, I most people actually we just use the Japanese name as well (similar to words like Sumo it's better than trying to translate it) https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hinamatsuri

When it comes to March third comingarrives, it's time to celebrate Hinamatsuri, or the dolls festival in English.

When it comes to March third coming, it'sMarch third arrives, it will be time to celebrate Hinamatsuri, dor the Doll's fFestival in English.

When it comes to March third coming, it'sMarch third arrives, it will be time to celebrate Hinamatsuri, dthe Dolls fFestival in English.

Usually, when a girl was born, the parents would purchase a set of Hina dolls for make a wish to the healthy growth of the girl's life.


UsuTraditionally, when a girl was born, the parents would purchase a set of Hina dolls forto make a wish tofor the healthy growth of the girl's lifegirl to grow up healthy.

Usually, when a girl wais born, the parents would purchase a set of Hina dolls for make a wish to the healthy growth of the girl'sand wish her a healthy life.

Usually, when a girl wais born, the parents would purchase a set of Hina dolls for make a wish to theand pray for healthy growth ofin the girl's life.

Usually, when a girl wais born, the parents would purchase a set of Hina dolls for make a wish to the healthy growth of the girl'sto wish her a healthy life.

My daughter grew up enough and already lelt our house.


My daughter grewhas grown up enough and already lelt our houseleft the house already.

it's a little hard to explain the reason for this "the" but "left the house" is kind of almost 慣用語 levels of natural for when kid's grow up and leave home.

My daughter grew up enough and alreadyand has now lelft our house.

My daughter grew up enough and already lelhas already grown up and left our house.

My daughter grew up enough and already lelhas already grown up and left our house.

Even though she isn't here, I decided to display them for myself because they're so beautiful.


Even though she isn't here, I decided to display them for myself because dolls as they're so beautiful.

Even though she isn't here, I decided to display them for myself because they're so beautiful.

Even though she isn't no longer here, I decided to display them for myself dolls because they' are so beautiful.

However, it's very hard work to take out a lot of boxes from strage room.


However, it's very hard work to take out a lot of boxes from the storage room.

However, it's verya lot of hard work to take out a lot ofll the boxes from storage room.

However, it's verya lot of hard work to take out a lot ofll of the boxes from the storage room.

However, it's verya lot of hard work to take out a lot ofthe boxes from the storage room.

In the end, the number of completed set of dolls are fifteen but I displayed seven of them.


In the endtotal, the
number of completed sets of dolls areis fifteen but I only displayed seven of them.

In the end, the
number of completed set of dolls
awere fifteen butand I displayed seven of them.

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number of completed set of dolls areis fifteen, but I displayed seven of them.

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number of
otal, the completed set of dolls arehas fifteen dolls but I displayed seven of them.

Then I put on the emperor and the empress.


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Then I put on the emperor and the empress on it.

Then I put on the emperor and the empress on it.

After that the room dramatically beautiful.


After that the room dramaticallyInstantly, the room felt brighter and more beautiful.

This is a little closer to what you wrote in Japanese.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

After that the room dramaticallyInstantly, the room looked so beautiful.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I felt like I did something good because I omitted the decorations but I thought I'm keeping to protect the Japan's good tradition now.


I felt like I did something good because although I omitted some of the decorations but I thought I'm keeping to protect thefelt like I'm protecting one of Japan's good tradition now.

I felt like I did something good becauseeven though I omitted the decorations butand I thought I'm keepcontinuing to protect the Japan's good tradition now.s.

I felt like I did something good because, even though I omitted some of the decorations but I thought I'm keeping to protect the Japan's good, I'm continuing a good Japanese tradition now.

I felt like I did something good becauseeven though I omitted the decorations, but I thought I'm keeping to protect the Japan's gooda good Japanese tradition now.

I might display them every year.


I might displaydo themis every year.

This is a different sentence but it fits the feeling a little bit better! Sometimes simpler is better.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If I displayed seven-tiered set of dolls, it must need whole one room.


If I displayed seven-tiered set of dolls, it mustwould need a whole one room.

I'm not 100% sure what you mean here

If I displayed seven-tiered set of dolls, it mustwould need a whole one room.

If I displayed the seven-tiered set of dolls, it mustwould need a whole one room.

If I displayed the seven-tiered set of dolls, it mustI would need a whole onew room.

I cleaned the space of the top of the bookshelf and set a red carpet.


I cleaned the space ofn the top of the bookshelf and setpread a red carpet on top.

I cleaned the space of then top of the bookshelf and setplaced a red carpet.

I cleaned the space of theon top of the bookshelf and seput a red carpeloth on it.

I cleaned the space of then top of the bookshelf and set a red carpet on it.

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