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Hiking Views in the Late Autumn
I uploaded a video to show you some hiking views from my last Saturday hike. You can watch it here: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/ARabvoAco1Q
Please continue to be my English teacher, and tell me all the things that I need to do better in the dubbing!
Thanks in advance!
Oh, I will not go hiking this weekend. It's cloudy these two days, and I have something to do tomorrow.
Hiking Views in the Late Autumn
I uploaded a video to show you some hiking views from my hike last Saturday hike.
You can watch it here: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/ARabvoAco1Q
Please continue to be my English teacher, and tell me all the things that I need to do better in the dubbing!
Thanks in advance!
Oh, I will not go hiking this weekend.
It's going to be cloudy these two days, and I have something (else) to do tomorrow.
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Very nice video! The sceneries are very beautiful. As for the dubbing, I would recommend shadowing some native speaker to become more familiar with their intonation and rhythm so that you can sound more native like.
today
Thanks a lot!
Have a nice weekend!
Hiking Views in the Late Autumn
I uploaded a video to show you some hiking views from my hike last Saturday hike.
On this way, it sounds more natural.
You can watch it here: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/ARabvoAco1Q
Please continue to bekeep beeing my English teacher, and tell me all the things that I need to do better in the dubbing!
Thanks in advance!
It's cloudy these two days, and I have something to do tomorrow.
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Great job!
Love the views, thank you for sharing this moments with us!
today
Thank you!
Have a nice weekend!
Hiking Views in the Late Autumn
I uploaded a video to show you some hiking views from my hike last Saturday hike.
You can watch it here: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/ARabvoAco1Q
Please continue to be my English teacher, and tell me all the things that I need to do better in the dubbing!
Thanks in advance!
Oh, I will not go hiking this weekend.
It's will be cloudy these two daysis weekend, and I have something else to do tomorrow.
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Very good! Just a few small corrections to make things a bit more natural. Beautiful views from your hike! Thanks for sharing!
yesterday
Thank you so much!
Have a nice weekend!
Hiking Views in (the) Late Autumn
“The” isn’t necessary, but it’s also not wrong.
I uploaded a video to show you some hiking views from my hike last Saturday hike.
You can watch it here: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/ARabvoAco1Q
Please continue to be my English teacher, (,) and tell me all the things that I need to do better in the dubbing!
Thanks in advance!
Oh, I will not go hiking this weekend.
It's going to be cloudy these two days, and I have something to do tomorrow.
Feedback
Nice video. Your expression and intonation are good.
yesterday
Thanks again!
Have a nice weekend!
Hiking Views in the Late Autumn
I uploaded a video to show you some hiking views from my hike last Saturday hike.
Putting "hike" before "last Saturday" sounds more natural.
You can watch it here: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/ARabvoAco1Q
Please continue to bekeep being my English teacher, and tell me all the things that I need to do to get better in theat dubbing!
Thanks in advance!
Oh, I will not goalso won't be going hiking this weekend.
Rewording the sentence to sound more natural, but the original sentence is correct.
It's been cloudy these past two days, and I have something to do tomorrow.
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I watched your dub and it was good! There was just one typo where the text said "dreams" instead of "streams".
yesterday
Thank you so much!
Yes, I just found it! But I can't correct it because the text was added to the video by the editing app.
Have a nice weekend!
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