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Sept. 10, 2023

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Hiking practice

Yesterday I climbed Mt.Daimonji with my friends near my town to practice climbing. I’m going to go Yakushima island and climb the mountain there in 1 month. So I wanted to improve my physical skills.
Though I heard we can clime it about 4 hours, we couldn’t do easily. We chose wrong way so spent at least 5 hours and totally exhausted. I keenly aware that I need much more training.

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I’m going to go Yakushima iIsland and will climb the mountain there in 1one month.

In formal writing, numbers zero to nine are written out. Any numbers after that can be written in numerals (e.g., 10, 111).

So I wanted to improve my physical skills.

Though I heard we canthat we could climeb it in about 4 hours, we couldn’t do it easily.

We chose the wrong way, so we spent at least 5 hours and were totally exhausted.

I am keenly aware that I need much more training.

Hiking practice

Yesterday I climbed Mt.Daimonji with my friends near my town to practice climbing.

I’m going to go to Yakushima island and climb the mountain there in 1 month.

So I wanted to improve my physical skills.

TAlthough I heard we can climeb it in about 4 hours, we couldn’t do it easily.

We chose the wrong way so we spent at least 5 hours and were totally exhausted.

I am keenly aware that I need much more training.

Hiking practice


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Yesterday I climbed Mt.Daimonji with my friends near my town to practice climbing.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I’m going to go Yakushima island and climb the mountain there in 1 month.


I’m going to go to Yakushima island and climb the mountain there in 1 month.

I’m going to go Yakushima iIsland and will climb the mountain there in 1one month.

In formal writing, numbers zero to nine are written out. Any numbers after that can be written in numerals (e.g., 10, 111).

So I wanted to improve my physical skills.


So I wanted to improve my physical skills.

So I wanted to improve my physical skills.

Though I heard we can clime it about 4 hours, we couldn’t do easily.


TAlthough I heard we can climeb it in about 4 hours, we couldn’t do it easily.

Though I heard we canthat we could climeb it in about 4 hours, we couldn’t do it easily.

We chose wrong way so spent at least 5 hours and totally exhausted.


We chose the wrong way so we spent at least 5 hours and were totally exhausted.

We chose the wrong way, so we spent at least 5 hours and were totally exhausted.

I keenly aware that I need much more training.


I am keenly aware that I need much more training.

I am keenly aware that I need much more training.

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