Nov. 8, 2024
Hiking Plans for Tomorrow
I’m going on a hike again tomorrow.
This time we will go to a forest in Siming Mountain, which is one of the most famous places for enjoying autumn in Eastern China.
It’s so exciting!
That’s all for today. I need to pack my hiking stuff now.
I hope I can share some pictures and videos with you the day after tomorrow.
明天又要去徒步了。
这次我们将去四明山的森林，这是中国东部最著名的赏秋地之一。
太令人兴奋了！
今天就到这里。我现在得收拾我的登山用品了。
希望后天可以和大家分享一些图片和视频。
Hiking Plans for Tomorrow
I’m going on a hike again tomorrow.
This time we will go to a forest in Siming Mountain, which is one of the most famous places for enjoying autumn in Eastern China.
It’s so exciting!
That’s all for today.
I need to pack my hiking stuff now.
I hope I can share some pictures and videos with you the day after tomorrow.
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All correct, but your apostrophes are weird, it's supposed to be like this: That's.
Not like this: That’s
I don't know why your apostrophes are full-width.
Nov. 14, 2024
Thanks a lot!
I found that too!
Whenever I posted an entry from my iPhone, this kind of situation occurred.
Hiking Plans for Tomorrow
I’m going on a hike again tomorrow.
This time we will go to a forest in Siming Mountain, which is one of the most famous places for enjoying autumn in Eastern China.
It’s'm so excitinged!
"It's so exciting" isn't incorrect, and grammatically it's fine, but it doesn't sound totally right.
That’s all for today.
I need to pack my hiking stuff now.
I hope I can share some pictures and videos with you the day after tomorrow.
Feedback
I hope you enjoyed your hike.
Nov. 14, 2024
Yes, I did enjoy the hike on Saturday.
Thanks again!
Hiking Plans for Tomorrow
I’m going on a hike again tomorrow.
This time we will go to a forest in Siming Mountain, which is one of the most famous places for enjoying autumn in Eastern China.
It’s so exciting!
That’s all for today.
I need to pack my hiking stuff now.
I hope I can share some pictures and videos with you the day after tomorrow.
Nov. 11, 2024
Thank you so much!
Have a nice day!
Hiking Plans for Tomorrow也可能： Tomorrow's Hiking Plans
I’m注意：句子中使用了“我”。但是，下一句使用了“我们”这个词。英语段落通常需要叙述者的统一。MY GUESS: My friend and I are going on a hike again tomorrow.
This time we will go to a forest in Siming Mountain, which is one of the most famous places for enjoying autumn in Eeastern China.
AMERICAN ENGLISH: ... in eastern China. BRITISH ENGLISH: in the east of China.
It’s也可能： We are so exciting!ed!
That’s all for today.
I need to pack my hiking stuff now.
I hope I can share some pictures and videos with you the day after tomorrow.
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Hope you have a wonderful trip, Tammy!
Nov. 10, 2024
Thank you so much!
We did indeed.
Have a nice day!
This time we will go to a forest ion Siming Mountain, which is one of the most famous places for enjoying autumn in Eeastern China.
When describing the region of a country/state/etc., you generally use a lowercase letter. The exception is when the region is especially well known by the geographical description. Eg: “Southern California” and “western Ohio.”
I need to pack (up) my hiking stuff now.
Nov. 9, 2024
Thanks a lot!
Have a nice weekend!
This time we will go to a forest ion Siming Mountain, which is one of the most famous places for enjoying autumn in Eastern China.
It’s so exciting!
That’s all for today.
I need to pack my hiking stuff now.
I hope I can share some pictures and videos with you the day after tomorrow.
Nov. 8, 2024
Thank you so much!
Have a nice weekend!
Hiking Plans for Tomorrow
I’m going on a hike again tomorrow.
It’s so exciting!
That’s all for today.
I need to pack my hiking stuff now.
I hope I can share some pictures and videos with you the day after tomorrow.
Feedback
I hope you have a great time 😃.
Hiking Plans for Tomorrow
I’m going on a hike again tomorrow.
This time we will go to {a forest inon Siming Mountain | a Siming Mountain forest}, which is one of the most famous places for enjoying {autumn | autumn leaves | fall foliage} in Eeastern China.
In your original wording, “which” seems to modify the mountain. In my alternate wording, it modifies the forest.
If people go there for the colorful leaves, you could change “enjoying autumn” to “enjoying autumn leaves” or “enjoying fall foliage.”
It’s so exciting!
alternative: I’m so excited.
That’s all for today.
I need to pack my hiking stuff now.
I hope I can share some pictures and videos with you the day after tomorrow.
Feedback
I hope you have a nice journey and hike!
Nov. 8, 2024
Thank you!
Have a nice weekend!
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