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Hiking in a Nature Reserve

Last Saturday, I went on a hike in a nature reserve on a mountain called West Tianmushan.

Many old trees were along the trail up to the top of the mountain. Some of them have been standing on the mountain for over 1000 years. It's also a very cultural place. In history, many famous people have been there. For example, Lu Yu, "the saint of tea", once picked tea leaves there and said that it was as good as the tea in Longjing.

This mountain has a high attitude. The highest is above 1500 meters, but the place I went was just 1000 meters. Still, I can feel it because when we started hiking below the mountain, it was like autumn, and when we got to the end of the trail, it felt like winter.

I think I froze a little bit so I didn't feel well when I got home.

I uploaded a short video to record this hike: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/DCJPlWpRYk8


上周六,我去西天目山自然保护区徒步了。

许多古树沿着小路一直延伸到山顶。有些已经在山上矗立了1000多年。那里也是一个非常有文化的地方。历史上,许多名人都去过那里。比如,“茶圣”陆羽曾在那里采摘茶叶,并评价说与龙井的茶一样好。

这座山海拔很高。最高的是1500米以上,但我去的地方只有1000米。我还是能感觉到,因为我们在山下开始徒步时,还像秋天;当我们走到路线终点时,感觉就像冬天一样了。

我觉得我有点冻住了,以至于回家的时候感觉不太舒服。

我上传了一个简短的视频来记录这次远足:https://www.youtube.com/shorts/DCJPlWpRYk8

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Hiking in a Nature Reserve

Last Saturday, I went on a hike in a nature reserve on a mountain called West Tianmushan.

Some of them have been standing on the mountain for over 1000 years.

It's also a very cultural place.

In history, many famous people have been there.

For example, Lu Yu, "the saint of tea", once picked tea leaves there and said that it was as good as the tea in Longjing.

This mountain has a high attitude.

The highest is above 1500 meters, but the place I went was just 1000 meters.

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Last Saturday, I went on a hike in a nature reserve on a mountain called West Tianmushan.

Some of them have been standing on the mountain for over 1000 years.

It's also a very cultural place.

For example, Lu Yu, "the saint of tea", once picked tea leaves there and said that it was as good as the tea in Longjing.

This mountain has a high attitude.

The highest is above 1500 meters, but the place I went was just 1000 meters.

I think I froze a little bit so I didn't feel well when I got home.

I uploaded a short video to record this hike: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/DCJPlWpRYk8

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Tammy

Dec. 10, 2024

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Hiking in a Nature Reserve

Last Saturday, I went on a hike in a nature reserve on a mountain called West Tianmushan.

Many old trees were along the trail up to the top of the mountain.

Some of them have been standing on the mountain for over 1000 years.

For example, Lu Yu, "the saint of tea", once picked tea leaves there and said that it was as good as the tea in Longjing.

This mountain has a high attitude.

Still, I can feel it because when we started hiking below the mountain, it was like autumn, and when we got to the end of the trail, it felt like winter.

I think I froze a little bit so I didn't feel well when I got home.

I uploaded a short video to record this hike: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/DCJPlWpRYk8

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Tammy

Dec. 10, 2024

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Hiking in a Nature Reserve


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Still, I can feel it because when we started hiking below the mountain, it was like autumn, and when we got to the end of the trail, it felt like winter.


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I uploaded a short video to record this hike: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/DCJPlWpRYk8


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