Dec. 9, 2024
Hiking in a Nature Reserve
Last Saturday, I went on a hike in a nature reserve on a mountain called West Tianmushan.
Many old trees were along the trail up to the top of the mountain. Some of them have been standing on the mountain for over 1000 years. It's also a very cultural place. In history, many famous people have been there. For example, Lu Yu, "the saint of tea", once picked tea leaves there and said that it was as good as the tea in Longjing.
This mountain has a high attitude. The highest is above 1500 meters, but the place I went was just 1000 meters. Still, I can feel it because when we started hiking below the mountain, it was like autumn, and when we got to the end of the trail, it felt like winter.
I think I froze a little bit so I didn't feel well when I got home.
I uploaded a short video to record this hike: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/DCJPlWpRYk8
上周六，我去西天目山自然保护区徒步了。
许多古树沿着小路一直延伸到山顶。有些已经在山上矗立了1000多年。那里也是一个非常有文化的地方。历史上，许多名人都去过那里。比如，“茶圣”陆羽曾在那里采摘茶叶，并评价说与龙井的茶一样好。
这座山海拔很高。最高的是1500米以上，但我去的地方只有1000米。我还是能感觉到，因为我们在山下开始徒步时，还像秋天；当我们走到路线终点时，感觉就像冬天一样了。
我觉得我有点冻住了，以至于回家的时候感觉不太舒服。
我上传了一个简短的视频来记录这次远足：https://www.youtube.com/shorts/DCJPlWpRYk8
Hiking in a Nature Reserve
Last Saturday, I went on a hike in a nature reserve on a mountain called West Tianmushan.
Many old trees were along the trail up to the top of the mountain.
Some of them have been standing on the mountain for over 1000 years.
It's also a very cultural place.
In history, many famous people have been there.
For example, Lu Yu, "the saint of tea", once picked tea leaves there and said that it was as good as the tea in Longjing.
This mountain has a high attitude.
The highest is above 1500 meters, but the place I went was just 1000 meters.
I uploaded a short video to recordabout this hike: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/DCJPlWpRYk8
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It has really been cold 🥶 recently. Take care of yourself
Last Saturday, I went on a hike in a nature reserve on a mountain called West Tianmushan.
MThere were many old trees were along the trail up to the top of the mountain.
Some of them have been standing on the mountain for over 1000 years.
It's also a very cultural place.
In history, many famous people have beenvisited there.
For example, Lu Yu, "the saint of tea", once picked tea leaves there and said that it was as good as the tea in Longjing.
This mountain has a high attitude.
The highest is above 1500 meters, but the place I went was just 1000 meters.
Still, I can feel it because when we started hiking below the mountain, it wasfelt like autumn, and when we got to the end of the trail, it felt like winter.
Was isn't incorrect, but I think using the same verb helps make it flow better
I think I froze a little bit so I didn't feel well when I got home.
I uploaded a short video to record this hike: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/DCJPlWpRYk8
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Nice text! Sounds like a great hike!
Dec. 10, 2024
Thank you so much!
Have a nice day!
Hiking in a Nature Reserve
Last Saturday, I went on a hike in a nature reserve on a mountain called West Tianmushan.
Many old trees were along the trail up to the top of the mountain.
Some of them have been standing on the mountain for over 1000 years.
It's also a very culturhistorical place.
In history, mMany famous people in history have been there.
For example, Lu Yu, "the saint of tea", once picked tea leaves there and said that it was as good as the tea in Longjing.
This mountain has a high attitude.
The highest part is above 1500 meters, but the place where I went was just 1000 meters high.
Still, I can feel it because when we started hiking below the mountain, it was like autumn, and when we got to the end of the trail, it felt like winter.
I think I froze a little bit so I didn't feel well when I got home.
I uploaded a short video to record this hike: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/DCJPlWpRYk8
Dec. 10, 2024
Thank you so much!
Have a nice day!
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