July 2, 2024
High temperature on the way
High temperature is on the way to Shanghai.
If you're in this city, you can feel it.
The endless rainy days finally ended, but the temperature was up.
Today's highest temperature will be 35℃. And if you've lived in this city for many years, you might know that it's just the beginning. It will be up to over 40℃ and will last more than two months.
I feel myself getting lazy and impatient. I want to have a vacation!
高温在来上海的路上了。
如果你在这个城市，你能感觉到。
连绵不断的雨天终于结束了，但气温却上升了。
今天的最高气温将达到35℃。如果你在这个城市住了很多年，你可能知道这只是个开始。气温将高达40℃以上，持续两个多月。
感觉自己变得慵懒和不耐烦。我想去度假!
High temperatures on the way in Shanghai
LOGIC: In the southern hemisphere, winter is approaching. (In the northern hemisphere, heat is approaching.)
High temperature iss are on the way to Shanghai.
If you're in this city, you can feel it.
The endless rainy days finally ended, but the temperature wass have gone up.
Today's expected highest temperature will be 35℃.
And if you've lived in this city for many years, you might know that it's just the beginning.
It will be up to over 40℃ and this will last more than two months.
I feel myself getting lazy and impatient.
I want to have a vacation!
Feedback
Shanghai is famous for extreme weather: hot in summers and cold in winters.
July 3, 2024
Thank you！
Yes, we call this type of weather 四季分明.
High temperatures on the way
High temperatures are | Heat is | Hot weather is on the way to Shanghai.
If you're in this city, you can feel it.
The endless rainy days finally ended, but the temperature wasent up.
Alternative: The endless rainy days have finally ended, but the temperature is up.
Today's highest temperature will be 35℃.
And if you've lived in this city for many years, you might know that it's just the beginning.
ItThe highest temperatures will be up to over 40℃ and this hot weather will last more than two months.
Your original sentence sounds like the temperature will remain at or above 40°C for more than two months, but I don’t think this is what you mean.
I feel myself getting lazy and impatient.
I want to have a vacation!
Feedback
It’s getting hot here, too. Now I have to go out to exercise at 5:00 am to avoid the heat. 🥵
High temperatures are on the way
"High temperature" (singular) makes me think of a fever
High temperature iss are on their way to Shanghai.
If you're in thise city, you can already feel it.
The endlesslong, rainy days finally ended, but the temperatures wasent up.
Today's highest temperature will be 35℃.
And if you've lived in this city for many years, you might know that it's just the beginning.
It will be up to over 40℃ and will last more than two months.
I feel myself getting lazy and impatient.
I want to have ago on vacation!
Feedback
I completely understand. Good luck :(
July 2, 2024
Thanks for your corrections and feedback!
I see you've suffered in the heat once upon a time.
Have a nice day!
High temperatures are on the way
High temperature iss are on the way to Shanghai. (a heat wave is on the way)
If you're in this city, you canwould be able to feel it.
The endless rainy days havefinally ended, but the temperature was up.
Today's highest temperature will be 35℃.
And if you've lived in this city for many years, you might know that it's just the beginning.
It will be up to over 40℃ and will last more than two months.
I feel myself getting lazy and impatient.
I want to have a vacation!
July 2, 2024
I got it! Thank you so much!
Have a nice day!
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