High Risk Sports: Is ItAre They Worth It?

"Sports" is plural so it requires a plural verb.

Believe it or not there are many people in the world thatwho enjoy putting their lifeves in danger.

It's "people who" because "people" always takes the question pronoun "who." "That" is for concepts or inanimate objects.

Every weekend many colleagues (note: I use colleagues here because this is an article for my school magazine. Am I right?) go to climb a mountain, jump off a bridge or surf enormous waves.

Who in his right mind would want to do such a things for free?

or

Who in his right mind would want to do such things for free?

or even for paying for it!

Thatose people argue that they feel an adrenaline boost that helps them to be more active all the week long at school.

I agree with you. They're nuts.

Besides, they keep fit doing amusingextreme sports and meet a lot of very interesting people with their samesimilar interests.

The downisadvantages are clear.

You could die or be severely damaginjured.

"Damage" is more for inanimate objects.

Statistics show there aren't more injuries in high risk sports than in conventional sports such as football.

Nonetheless, almost everyone is accordingagrees that the main drawback is the price of the equipment price.

Most of these activities require expensive tools which goal isin order to increase the securisafety, so it's not always a good idea to look for the lowest price.

Believe it or not, there are many people in the world thatwho enjoy putting their lifeves in danger.

Every weekend many colleagues (note: I use colleagues here because this is an article for my school magazine. Am I right?)lassmates go to climb a mountain, jump off a bridge or surf enormous waves.

colleagues = people from work

Who in his right mind would want to do such a things for free?

oOr even paying for it!

That peoplSome argue they feel an adrenaline boost that helps them to be more active all the week long at school.

Besides, they keep fit doing amusing sports and meet a lot of very interesting people with their samesimilar interests.

The downsides of this lifestyle are clear.

You could die or be severely damaginjured.

Yet, broadly that'the risk of death or severe injury is far from a common issue.

Statistics show that there aren't more fewer injuries in risk sports than in conventional sports such as football.

Nonetheless almost everyone is accordingin agreement that the main drawback is the equipment price.

Most of these activities require expensive tools whichose goal is to increase the securione's safety, so it's not always a good idea to look for the lowest price.

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Believe it or not, there are many people in the world that enjoy putting their life in danger.

Who in his right mind would want to do such a things for free?

or even paying for it!

Thatose people argue they feel an adrenaline boost that helps them to be more active all the week longweek at school.

Besides, they keep fit doing amusingfun sports and meet a lot of very interesting people with their same interests.

I think by amusing you meant fun? Like enjoyable? Let me know if i'm wrong

The downsides are clear.

You could die or be severely damaged yourself.

Yet, broadly that's far from a common issue.

Statistics show that there aren't more injuries in risk sports than in conventional sports such as football.

Nonetheless, almost everyone is accorconcluding that the main drawback is the equipment price.

Most of these activities require expensive tools of which the goal is to increase the security, so it's not always a good idea to look for the lowest price.

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Every weekend many colleagues (note: I use colleagues here because this is an article for my school magazine. Am I right?) go to climb a mountain, jump off a bridge or surf enormous waves.

Use 'colleagues' for work, and 'classmates' for school.

Who in his right mind would want to do such a things for free?

oOr even paying for it!

Make sure to match your verbs to the previous sentence:
*would want*
*would pay*

ThatSome people argue they feel an adrenaline boost that helps them to be more active all the week long at school.

Besides, they keep fit doing amusing sports and meet a lot of very interesting people with their same interests.

THowever, the downsides are clear.

You are beginning the next section of your article, so try using a connecting word or phrase to show contrast.
E.g.
> On the other hand, ...
> In contrast, ...
> However, ...

You could die or be severely damaginjured.

We often talk about "injury" for people or animals, and "damage" for plants or non-living things.
E.g. "The building sustained a lot of damage due to recent floods."

Statistics show that there aren't more injuries in risk sports than in conventional sports such as football than in risk sports.

To make the sentence more easily understandble, I have just changed the order around a little.

Nonetheless almost everyone is accordingin agreement that the main drawback is the equipment price.

= everybody agrees that the main drawback is...

Most of these activities require expensive tools whichose goal is to increase the securisafety, so it's not always a good idea to look for the lowest price.

We use "whose" for possession, even for non-living things like 'goals'.

High -Risk Sports: Is It Worth It?

Believe it or not, there are many people in the world thatwho enjoy putting their life in danger.

Every weekend, many colleaguestudents (note: I use colleagues here because this is an article for my school magazine. Am I right?) go to climb a mountain, jump off a bridge or surf enormous waves.

I would use "students" or "fellow students" if it is for school. Colleagues is usually used for people who work in the same company as you.

Who in histheir right mind would want to do such a things for free?

It is more gender-neutral to use the word "they" instead of "his"

Thatese people argue that they feel an adrenaline boost that helps them to be more active all the week long at school.

Besides, they keep fit doing amusing sports and meet a lot of very interesting people withho share their same interests.

The downsides are clear.

You could die or be severely damaginjured.

Yet, broadlyin general that's far from a common issue.

Statistics show there aren't more injuries in high-risk sports than in conventional sports such as football.

Nonetheless, according to almost everyone is according thatdoing such sports, the main drawback is the equipment price.

Most of these activities require expensive tools which goalose purpose is to increase the securisafety, so it's not always a good idea to look for the lowest price.

A purpose is the reason for something, such as the reason for using the tool is to be more safe. A goal is something you want to achieve, but a tool does not have desires to achieve something. I prefer safety rather than security here (although it's not totally incorrect) because security is often related to things like security guards, etc.

Or you might want to become one after reading this article.