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yamamomo

July 13, 2024

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Hi! I'm yamamomo.

I'm yamamomo.

I come to this site because I want to write diary in English.
My friend told me about this site.

I live in Kansai ,Japan.
Nice to meet you!


私はやまももです。

私は英語で日記が書きたくて、
このサイトに来ました。
このサイトは友人に教わりました。

私は日本の関西に住んでいます。
よろしくお願いします。

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Hi! I'm yYamamomo.

I'm yYamamomo.

proper nouns (like people's names) are capitalized.

I come toam on this site because I want to write diaryies in English.

My friend told me about this site.

I live in Kansai , Japan.

The space is after and not before the comma

Nice to meet you!

Feedback

Welcome!

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yamamomo

July 25, 2024

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Thanks a lot (^o^)

Hi! I'm yMY GUESS: Hi! My nickname is Yamamomo.

My guess is your actual name is different. Or is it a surname?

I coame to this site because I want to write diary in Englishto improve my English writing skills.

My friend told me about this site.

I live in the Kansai , region of Japan.

Nice to meetI look forward to exchanging ideas with you!

Feedback

Hope you enjoy this site!

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yamamomo

July 25, 2024

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Thank you (⁠◍⁠•⁠ᴗ⁠•⁠◍⁠)

Hi! I'm yamamomo.

I'm yamamomo.

I coame to this site because I want to write a diary in English.

My friend told me about this site.

I live in Kansai ,Japan.

Nice to meet you!

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yamamomo

July 25, 2024

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\(^o^)/

Hi! I'm yYamamomo.

I'm yYamamomo.

I coame to this site because I wanted to write diaryentries in English.

My friend told me about this site.

I live in Kansai , Japan.

Nice to meet you!

Feedback

よろしくお願いします!
Nice to meet you :)

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yamamomo

July 25, 2024

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よろしくお願いします!!

I have come to this site because I want to write a diary in English.¶

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I came this site because i want to write a
diary in English.

You can write it in 2 different ways for the same meaning, but the original version is in the incorrect tense.

I live in Kansai , Japan.

Comma placement

Nice to meet you!

It is good to meet you!

Feedback

Great start! Keep learning and practicing and you'll be at native level some day!

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yamamomo

July 25, 2024

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ありがとう!

I coame to this site because I want to write a diary in English.

My friend told me about this site.

Nice to meet you!

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yamamomo

July 25, 2024

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Thank U (*^_^*)

My friend told me about this site.


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I live in Kansai ,Japan.


I live in Kansai , Japan.

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I live in Kansai , Japan.

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I live in the Kansai , region of Japan.

I live in Kansai , Japan.

The space is after and not before the comma

Nice to meet you!


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Nice to meet you!

It is good to meet you!

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Nice to meetI look forward to exchanging ideas with you!

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Hi! I'm yamamomo.


Hi! I'm yYamamomo.

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Hi! I'm yMY GUESS: Hi! My nickname is Yamamomo.

My guess is your actual name is different. Or is it a surname?

Hi! I'm yYamamomo.

I'm yamamomo.


I'm yYamamomo.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm yYamamomo.

proper nouns (like people's names) are capitalized.

I come to this site because I want to write diary in English.


I coame to this site because I want to write a diary in English.

I have come to this site because I want to write a diary in English.¶

or ¶

I came this site because i want to write a
diary in English.

You can write it in 2 different ways for the same meaning, but the original version is in the incorrect tense.

I coame to this site because I wanted to write diaryentries in English.

I coame to this site because I want to write a diary in English.

I coame to this site because I want to write diary in Englishto improve my English writing skills.

I come toam on this site because I want to write diaryies in English.

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