March 10, 2024
Hi, I'm Running Hot Dog Again!
Hello,
I'm Hot Dog.
Today is Sunday and the 10k Trail Run Race is just around the corner, the next Sunday, I mean 7 days later.
When I woke up and looked at my left knee, the surface of the skin became purple.
It still ached when I touched the knee. I didn't feel worse, but the purple knee looked as though the injury was rather severe.
Therefore, I first thought that I should not run because of my knee condition.
If I trained today, my left knee might be going to ache.
I had another problem. The nearest JR (Japan Railway) station is 6.7 kilometers away from the starting point.
There is no bus available. So I need to take a taxi, which would cost about 2,500 yen.
I have to use the Shinkansen train as well, which would cost about 7,000 yen.
I wondered if I should give up and default the race.
After thinking about it for a while, I made up my mind that I would run 10k today as practice.
And in case my knee starts to ache, I will decide to default.
This is a very good idea, I think.
I ran the uphill and downhill trail practice course in my neighborhood for 10k in 1:26:26.
I felt a little pain for the first 1k, but the pain ceased after that.
Of course, I was very careful not to fall by the edge of the lawn/turf block.
There is a park in that course, or it would be better to say that that course includes a park, where a festival is being held today.
There are many people there. I felt even more energetic because I might be seen by the public eyes.
There are several stalls too.
I ate takoyaki and karaage after running. They were yummy, although a little expensive.
I drank water from the facet in the park for free, to save money.
It was yummy too.
やあ、ランナーのホットドッグです。
ハイ！
ホットドッグです。
今日は日曜日で、10キロのトレイルランレースが間近に迫ってきました。次の日曜日、つまり7日後に。
朝起きて、左膝を見ると青あざになっていました。さわるとまだ痛みますが、痛みが増えたわけではないけれど、青あざになっているのをみると重症そうに見えてしまいます。
まだ走り始めない方が良いかな、無理して走ると痛み出すんじゃないだろうか、と思いました。
もう一つ問題が持ち上がりました。会場までのアクセスが悪く、最寄のＪＲ駅から6.7キロ離れているけど、バスがないので、タクシーを使わなければならないのですが、約2500円かかりそうです。ただでさえ会場に行くのに新幹線で行かねばならず、片道7000円かかるというのに。
体調も悪いしお金もかかるので、エントリー代は無駄になるけど、出場を辞退しようかとも考えました。
しばらく考えて、名案を思い付きました。今日練習してみよう。今日練習してみて、足が悪くなったなら辞退しよう。痛くならないかもしれないし。と。
で、うちの近所の上り坂と下り坂のあるトレイルランコースを走り、10キロ、1時間26分26秒で完走できました。
最初の1キロでなんとなく左膝が痛いと思ったけど、その後は痛みませんでした。
当然ですが、前に転んだ芝生のブロックの端で転ばないように十分注意しました。
そのコースの途中に公園があります。てゆうか、公園を含んだコースにしています。
今日はお祭りがあっていて、沢山の人が来ていました。人がたくさんいると見れれている気がしてモチベーションがあがります。
屋台も５，６台来ていました。
走り終わったあと、そこでたこ焼きと鳥のからあげ（『韓国風チキン』という名だった）を買って食べました。とても美味しかったです。
でもどうしてもお値段が高めです。
で、お金を浮かすために、水は公園の水道の蛇口の水を飲みました。
水も美味しかった。
Hi, I'm Running Hot Dog Again!
Hello, I'm Hot Dog.
Today is Sunday and the 10k Trail Run Race is just around the corner, the next Sunday, I mean 7 days later.
When I woke up and looked at my left knee, the surface of the skin became purple.
It still ached when I touched the knee.
I didn't feel worse, but the purple knee looked as though the injury was rather severe.
Therefore, I first thought that I should not run because of my knee condition.
If I trained today, my left knee might be going to ache.
I had another problem.
The nearest JR (Japan Railway) station is 6.7 kilometers away from the starting point.
There is no bus available.
So I need to take a taxi, which would cost about 2,500 yen.
I have to use the Shinkansen train as well, which would cost about 7,000 yen.
I wondered if I should give up and default the race.
After thinking about it for a while, I made up my mind that I would run 10k today as practice.
And in case my knee starts to ache, I will decide to default.
TI think this is a very good idea, I think.
I ran the uphill and downhill part of the trail practice course in my neighborhood for 10k in 1:26:26.
I felt a little pain for the first 1k, but the pain ceased after that.
Of course, I was very careful not to fall by the edge of the lawn/turf block.
There is a park in that course, or it would be better to say that that course includes a park, wherein which a festival is being held today.
There are many people there.
I felt even more energetic because I might be seen by the public eyes.
There are several stalls too.
I ate takoyaki and karaage after running.
They were yummy, although a little expensive.
I drank water from the facet in the park for free, to save money.
It was yummy too.
You can also say that "The water was tasty" or that "The water was delicious".
Hi, I'm Running Hot Dog Again!
Hello, I'm Hot Dog.
Today is Sunday and the 10k Trail Run Race is just around the corner, the. To be precise, it is next Sunday, I mean 7seven days later.
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It didn't feel w not hurt more than beforse, but the purple knee looked as thoughbruise made the injury was ratherseem severe.
(This is closer to what you wrote in Japanese)
Therefore, I first thought that I should not run because of my knee condition.
If I trained today, my left knee might be going to achhurt more.
I had another problem.
The nearest JR (Japan Railway) station is 6.7 kilometers away from the starting point.
There is no bus available.
So I need to take a taxi, which would cost about 2,500 yen.
I have to use the Shinkansen train as well, which would cost about 7,000 yen.
I wondered if I should give up and default the race.
After thinking about it for a while, I made up my mind that I would run 10k today as practice.
And in casef my knee starts to achehurt, I will decide to defaultfault the race.
This iought it was a very good idea, I think.
I ran the uphill and downhill trail practice course in my neighborhood for 10k in 1:26:26.
I felt a little pain for the first 1k, but the pain ceased after that.
Of course, I was very careful not to fall by the edge of the lawn/turf block.
There is a park in that course, or it would be better to say that that course includes a park, where a festival iwas being held today.
There awere many people there.
I felt even more energetic because I might be seen by the public eyeswas conscious that people may notice me.
There awere several stalls too.
I ate takoyaki and karaage after running.
They were yummy, although a little expensive.
I drank water from the facet in the park for free, to save money.
It was yummy too.
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Sounds like a good run, but I hope your knee won't hurt tomorrow!
Hi, I'm Running Hot Dog Again!
Hello, I'm Hot Dog.
Today is Sunday and the 10k Trail Run Race is just around the corner, th. It will take place next Sunday, I mean in 7 days later.
The correct expression is "next Sunday"(not "the next Sunday")
today + 7 days = in 7 days. Ex: The 10k Trail Race will take place in just 7 days. I must get ready for it!!!
When telling a story in the past tense: last month + 7 days = 7 days later
Ex: Last month I hurt my knee, but 7 days later my knee was completely healed!
When I woke up and looked at my left knee, I noticed that the surface of the skin had becaome purple.
I agree with the previous correction. Your original text sounded weird.
It still ached when I touched the knee.
It didn't feel worse, but the purple knee looked as though the injury was rather severe.
Therefore, I first thought that I should not run because of my knee condition.
If I trained today, my left knee might be going tostart acheing.
Alternative:
... might ache again.
I had another problem.
The nearest JR (Japan Railway) station is 6.7 kilometers away from the starting point.
There is no bus available.
So I need to take a taxi, which would cost about 2,500 yen.
I have to use the Shinkansen train as well, which would cost about 7,000 yen.
I wondered if I should give up and defaulforfeit the race.
After thinking about it for a while, I made up my mind that I would run 10k today as practice.
And iIn case my knee starts to ache, I will decide to defaultmake the decision to forfeit (the race).
This is a very good idea, I think.
I ran the uphill and downhill trail practice course in my neighborhood for 10k in 1:26:26.
I felt a little pain for the first 1k, but the pain ceased after that.
Of course, I was very careful not to fall by the uneven edge of the lawn/turf block.
this is a bit difficult to understand, but when I translated your Japanese text, it seems that "turf" is correct.
There is a park in thate course, or it would be better to say that thate course includes a park, where a festival is/was being held today.
There awere many people there.
I felt even more energetic because I might be seen by the public eyes.have an audience!
There awere several stalls too.
I ate takoyaki and karaage after running.
They were yummy/delicious/tasty, although a little expensive.
I drank water from the faucet in the park for free, to save money.
It was yummy toovery refreshing.
I've never heard of delicious/yummy water before. :-)
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The adventures of Hot Dog are very interesting. I'm glad that you continue to write about them!
Hi, I'm Running Hot Dog Again!
Hello, I'm Hot Dog.
Today is Sunday, and the 10k Trail Run Race is just around the corner, the next Sunday, I meaas in 7 days later.
When I woke up and looked at my left knee, the surface of the skin became purple.
Using "when" suggests that your leg became purple because you looked at it.
It still ached when I touched ithe knee.
It didn't feel worse, but the purple knee looked as though the injury was rather severe.
Therefore, I first thought that I should not run because of my knee condition.
If I trained today, my left knee might be going to achache more.
I had another problem.
The nearest JR (Japan Railway) station is 6.7 kilometers away from the starting point.
There is no bus available.
So I need to take a taxi, which would cost about 2,500 yen.
I have to use the Shinkansen train as well, which would (already) cost about 7,000 yen.
I wondered if I should give up and defaulforfeit the race.
After thinking about it for a while, I made up my mind that I would run 10k today as practice.
And in the case my knee starts to ache, I will decide to defaulforfeit.
This is a very good idea, I think.
I ran the uphill and downhill trail practice course in my neighborhood for 10k in 1:26:26.
I felt a little pain for the first 1k, but the pain ceased after that.
Of course, I was very careful not to fall by the edge of the lawn/turf block.
Do you mean "trail" instead of "lawn/turf block."
There is a park in thate course, or it would be better to say that thate course includehas a park, where a festival iwas being held today.
There awere many people there.
I felt even more energetic because I might be seen byin the public eyes.
There awere several stalls too.
I think it sounds better keeping everything in past-tense
I ate takoyaki and karaage after running.
They were yummy, although a little expensive.
I drank water from the facet in the park for free, to save money.
It was yummy too.
Feedback
Sounded like a very fun day. 👍
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