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likeachild08

July 25, 2025

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Hi Everybody

Today was a lazzy day. After lunch I lay down but I didn't sleep. Then that I started to check this page. Three people had corrected me my entry.
Today I didn't to write on my book but it's ok, perhaps tomorrow I'll cheer up.
Is amazing that in english there were a lot of phrasal verbs and I wanna to learn as many as I can.
On the other hand is great to see that there were a lot of people studying Spanish, but most of them have very good level. So sometimes I don't find entrys to correct but it's ok, I'm happy for they.
Oki that was all. Thanks


Hola a todos
Hoy fue un dia de pereza. Despues del almuerzo me acoste pero no dormí. luego empece a revisar esta pagina. Tres personas habian corregido mi escrito.
Hoy no escribi en mi libro pero esta bien, quizas mañana me animaré.
Es asombrosa la cantidad de phrasal verbs que hay en ingles i yo quiero aprender tantos como pueda.
Por otro lado es genial ver que hay muchas personas estudiando español, pero la mayoria de ellos tienen un muy buen nivel asi que a veces yo no encuentro escritos para corregir pero esta bien, estoy feliz por ellos.
Bien, eso fue todo. Gracias.

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Today was a lazzy day.

Then that I started to check this page.

Three people had corrected me my entry.

Today I didn't to write oin my book but it'that’s ok, p. Perhaps tomorrow I'll cheer up. will

It’s amazing that in english there weare a lot of phrasal verbs and I wannat to learn as many as I can.

On the other hand, it’s great to see that there weare a lot of people studying Spanish, butand most of them have verya good level.

So sometimes I don't find entrys to correct but it's ok, I'm happy for theym.

Oki that was all.

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likeachild08

July 28, 2025

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thanks a lot

Hi Everybody

Today was a lazzy day.

After lunch, I laywent to lie down but I didn't sleep.

What you wrote is actually 100% correct, but using the simple past "lay" in English sounds kind of literary nowadays.

Then that I started to check this page.

Three people had corrected me my entry.

Today I didn't to write oin my book today, but ithat's ok, p. Perhaps tomorrow I'll cheer upfeel like it.

It's amazing that in english there were a lot of phrasal verbse number of phrasal verbs there are in English, and I wanna to learn as many as I can.

This is closer to your original wording in Spanish and sounds much more natural.

On the other hand, it's great to see that there weare a lot of people studying Spanish, but most of them (already) have very a good level.

So sometimes I docan't find any entryies to correct, but ithat's ok,. I'm happy for theym.

OkiWell, that was all.

Thanks.

Feedback

You're doing great!

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likeachild08

July 28, 2025

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thanks a lot

Today was a lazzy day.

After lunch, I lay down but I didn't sleep.

NOTE: The 2nd "I" can be deleted.

Then that I started to checking this pagwebsite.

Three people had corrected me myy previous entry.

Today I didn't to write on my bookanything on this site, but ithat's ok, pay. Perhaps tomorrow I'll feel more cheer upful.

Is amazing that in english tThere were a lot of English phrasal verbs and I wannat to learn as many as I can.

On the other hand, it is great to see that there were a lot of people studying Spanish, but. Moreover, most of them have a very good levelcommand of Spanish.

So sometimes I don't find any entryies to correct, but ithat's ok,ay. I'm happy for theym.

Oki tThat wais all for now.

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likeachild08

July 28, 2025

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thank you so much

Today was a lazzy day.

After lunch, I layhad a lie down but I didn't sleep.

Then thatat's when I started to check this page.

Three people had corrected me on my entry.

Today, I didn't to write oin my book but ithat's ok, p. Perhaps tomorrow I'll cheer up tomorrow.

Isn't it amazing that in eEnglish there weare a lot ofso many phrasal verbs and I wanna to learn as many as I can.

Technically, "want to" would be more correct here as "wanna" is colloquial and slang

On the other hand, it's great to see that there were a lot of people studying Spanish, but. However, most of them have very goodare at quite a high level.

So sometimes, I don't find entryies to correct but ithat's ok, I'm happy for theym.

Oki that was all.

"Oki" is written by some people as a text speak thing but "ok" or "okay" is the technically correct spelling

Feedback

Your English is so good! I only had some minor corrections to make as it was really well put together. Keep up the good word!

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likeachild08

July 28, 2025

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I really appreciate it.

Hi Everybody


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Today was a lazzy day.


Today was a lazzy day.

Today was a lazzy day.

Today was a lazzy day.

Today was a lazzy day.

After lunch I lay down but I didn't sleep.


After lunch, I layhad a lie down but I didn't sleep.

After lunch, I lay down but I didn't sleep.

NOTE: The 2nd "I" can be deleted.

After lunch, I laywent to lie down but I didn't sleep.

What you wrote is actually 100% correct, but using the simple past "lay" in English sounds kind of literary nowadays.

Then that I started to check this page.


Then thatat's when I started to check this page.

Then that I started to checking this pagwebsite.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Then that I started to check this page.

Three people had corrected me my entry.


Three people had corrected me on my entry.

Three people had corrected me myy previous entry.

Three people had corrected me my entry.

Three people had corrected me my entry.

Today I didn't to write on my book but it's ok, perhaps tomorrow I'll cheer up.


Today, I didn't to write oin my book but ithat's ok, p. Perhaps tomorrow I'll cheer up tomorrow.

Today I didn't to write on my bookanything on this site, but ithat's ok, pay. Perhaps tomorrow I'll feel more cheer upful.

Today I didn't to write oin my book today, but ithat's ok, p. Perhaps tomorrow I'll cheer upfeel like it.

Today I didn't to write oin my book but it'that’s ok, p. Perhaps tomorrow I'll cheer up. will

Is amazing that in english there were a lot of phrasal verbs and I wanna to learn as many as I can.


Isn't it amazing that in eEnglish there weare a lot ofso many phrasal verbs and I wanna to learn as many as I can.

Technically, "want to" would be more correct here as "wanna" is colloquial and slang

Is amazing that in english tThere were a lot of English phrasal verbs and I wannat to learn as many as I can.

It's amazing that in english there were a lot of phrasal verbse number of phrasal verbs there are in English, and I wanna to learn as many as I can.

This is closer to your original wording in Spanish and sounds much more natural.

It’s amazing that in english there weare a lot of phrasal verbs and I wannat to learn as many as I can.

On the other hand is great to see that there were a lot of people studying Spanish, but most of them have very good level.


On the other hand, it's great to see that there were a lot of people studying Spanish, but. However, most of them have very goodare at quite a high level.

On the other hand, it is great to see that there were a lot of people studying Spanish, but. Moreover, most of them have a very good levelcommand of Spanish.

On the other hand, it's great to see that there weare a lot of people studying Spanish, but most of them (already) have very a good level.

On the other hand, it’s great to see that there weare a lot of people studying Spanish, butand most of them have verya good level.

So sometimes I don't find entrys to correct but it's ok, I'm happy for they.


So sometimes, I don't find entryies to correct but ithat's ok, I'm happy for theym.

So sometimes I don't find any entryies to correct, but ithat's ok,ay. I'm happy for theym.

So sometimes I docan't find any entryies to correct, but ithat's ok,. I'm happy for theym.

So sometimes I don't find entrys to correct but it's ok, I'm happy for theym.

Oki that was all.


Oki that was all.

"Oki" is written by some people as a text speak thing but "ok" or "okay" is the technically correct spelling

Oki tThat wais all for now.

OkiWell, that was all.

Oki that was all.

Thanks


Thanks.

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