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courageuse19

Jan. 6, 2022

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Hi every one!

I want to share with you about this video.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m3MuLYO6wQk

I found this video a coindence! I just listened to it. I found is interesting for all people want to improve thier language skill. Yes, he right what he said. We must write more and variant of topics. I will take her advice.

NB/ I would like to thank every one who help me and correct me. May God protect everyone.

Courageuse19.

Corrections

Hi every one!

I want to share with you about this video with you.

'I would like to share this video with you', also works.

I found this video aby coincidence!

'I stumbled upon this video by accident'

I justhave just finished listeneding to it.

'I have just finished watching it'

I found is interestingt to be relevant for all people wanting to improve thieir language skills.

I found it to be interesting as I'm trying to improve my language skills, others might feel the same way!

Yes, he right what he said is correct.

We must write more and variant ofcover many different topics.

I will take heris advice.

I'll take his advice to heart.
I took his advice to heart.

NB/ I would like to thank every one who help mes and corrects me.

May God protect everyoneyou.

God bless you.
God bless.
May the Lord bless you and protect you.
May the Lord smile on you and be gracious to you.
The Universe smiles upon you.
:)

Feedback

Well done :) Keep it up. I added alternative phrases that can also work.

Hi every one!


Hi every one!

I want to share with you about this video.


I want to share with you about this video with you.

'I would like to share this video with you', also works.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m3MuLYO6wQk


I found this video a coindence!


I found this video aby coincidence!

'I stumbled upon this video by accident'

I just listened to it.


I justhave just finished listeneding to it.

'I have just finished watching it'

I found is interesting for all people want to improve thier language skill.


I found is interestingt to be relevant for all people wanting to improve thieir language skills.

I found it to be interesting as I'm trying to improve my language skills, others might feel the same way!

Yes, he right what he said.


Yes, he right what he said is correct.

We must write more and variant of topics.


We must write more and variant ofcover many different topics.

I will take her advice.


I will take heris advice.

I'll take his advice to heart. I took his advice to heart.

NB/ I would like to thank every one who help me and correct me.


NB/ I would like to thank every one who help mes and corrects me.

May God protect everyone.


May God protect everyoneyou.

God bless you. God bless. May the Lord bless you and protect you. May the Lord smile on you and be gracious to you. The Universe smiles upon you. :)

Courageuse19.


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