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Mathi

Nov. 29, 2020

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Hi Diary

Day 2

Yesterday I Started my personal diary and received much help of same users for check my notes and for it I'm happy, thanks for help me, I hope can improve more my writing :) without help of translator, thanks again.

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Yesterday I Sstarted my personal diary and received much help of samea lot of help from users for checking my notes and for i, For that I' am happy, t. Thanks for helping me, I hope can improve more my writing :)more :). I could not have done it without the help of translator,s, so thanks again.

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Very nice message! I think the most important thing to fix right now is to use more sentences, instead of just one long sentence.

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Mathi

Nov. 29, 2020

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thanks for the review :")

Hi Diary

Day 2

Yesterday I Sstarted my personal diary and received much help of samefrom users for checking my notes, and for ithat I'm happy, t. Thanks for helping me, I hope can improve more my writing :) withoutmore, and not require the help of a translator, t. Thanks again.

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Yesterday I Started my personal diary and received much help of same users for check my notes and for it I'm happy, thanks for help me, I hope can improve more my writing :) without help of translator, thanks again.


Yesterday I Sstarted my personal diary and received much help of samefrom users for checking my notes, and for ithat I'm happy, t. Thanks for helping me, I hope can improve more my writing :) withoutmore, and not require the help of a translator, t. Thanks again.

Yesterday I Sstarted my personal diary and received much help of samea lot of help from users for checking my notes and for i, For that I' am happy, t. Thanks for helping me, I hope can improve more my writing :)more :). I could not have done it without the help of translator,s, so thanks again.

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