Oct. 8, 2021
Best friend will immigrant
When I say “Best friend” only means in definition.
For example, when he was stumble in his career.
I didn’t look down at him and treat him still like a normal person.
When I go to Japan alone, he is the only person come to airport say goodbye.
When I return from Japan, he is the only person come to airport and welcome me!
However, because we are so different in our style.
We never talk about our truth feeling.
Man-man friend relationship is different to man-woman friend.
Anyway, he will going disappear in my life.
Good luck to him and his family in a new life.
I hope I can move to Japan soon.
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I have attempted to rewrite your text so that it flows a little better. I couldn't quite understand your first sentence, so I haven't been able to give a full suggestion for that (I've just left it with some dots ... !). I would like to emphasise the following points, however:
1. What you have written, with the exception of the first sentence, is fully understandable.
2. Your writing has communicated very well indeed your feelings. As a reader of your text, I can feel your sadness at losing your friend. Language is about communicating ideas and feelings, and you have done that very well.
3. My advice to you is that you should now try to avoid writing your journals as single-line sentences. It is perhaps time to start making your sentences flow better and to try joining them up. This will be more interesting for your reader, and will help you over time.
4. What I've written below is only a suggestion. You alone are the "master" of your texts. Only you can fully express your own ideas and feelings. If I have written anything that does not agree with your ideas, then your text takes first place over mine.
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Best Friend Will Emigrate
When I say, "Best Friend", I mean that only ... . For example, when he took a stumble in his career, I didn't look down on him, but still treated him like a normal person.
When I go to Japan alone, he is the only person who comes to the airport to say goodbye. Similarly, when I return from Japan, he is the only person who comes to the airport to welcome me! However, because we are so different in our personalities, we never talk about our true feelings. In this respect, man-to-man relationships are quite different from man-to-woman relationships.
Anyway, he is soon to disappear from my life, as he will be emigrating. I wish him and his family good luck in their new lives. I hope that I too can move to Japan soon.
Oct. 18, 2021
Very good effort
I want to pay you
Oct. 18, 2021
No payment required, Alex!! I'm always happy to help!
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Best friend will immigrant Best friend will immigrant Best friend will immigrant See below for all comments. |
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When I say “Best friend” only means in definition. |
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For example, when he was stumble in his career. |
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I didn’t look down at him and treat him still like a normal person. |
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When I go to Japan alone, he is the only person come to airport say goodbye. |
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When I return from Japan, he is the only person come to airport and welcome me! |
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However, because we are so different in our style. |
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We never talk about our truth feeling. |
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Man-man friend relationship is different to man-woman friend. |
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Anyway, he will going disappear in my life. |
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Good luck to him and his family in a new life. |
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I hope I can move to Japan soon. |
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