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Thank goodness it is possible to write my journal.

Today is my 305th journal writing every day, so I was worried if I couldn't write my today's journal.

In the notification message, I wasn't the minimum correction ratio (1.0) to write a new journal.

When I saw the notification for the first time, I was shocked because I should help others' sentences more than 1300 comments.

For increasing the ratio, I tried to write comments on old sentences in Korean which were written more than 1 years ago.

Fortunately, there were 25 sentences which were no correction comment.

With more than 370 corrections, I finished writing all of them, then it is possible to write a new journal now.

Writing journals on this site is one of my pleasures these days, so I am finally relaxed.

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Jan. 20, 2022

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Thank goodness it is possible to write my journal.

Writing journals on this site is one of my pleasures these days, so I am finally relaxed.

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Jan. 20, 2022

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Writing journals on this site is one of my pleasures these days, so I am finally relaxed.

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Thank goodness it is possible to write my journal.


Thank goodness it is possible toI could write my journal. Thank goodness I could write my journal.

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Today is my 305th journal writing every day, so I was worried if I couldn't write my today's journal.


Today is my 305th day of daily journal writing every day, so I was a little worried ifthat I couldn't write my today's journal. Today is my 305th day of daily journal writing, so I was a little worried that I couldn't write today.

Just reworded a bit to sound more natural and less clunky.

Today is my 305th journalday writing a journal every day, so I was worried if I cwouldn't be able to write my today's journal. Today is my 305th day writing a journal every day, so I was worried I wouldn't be able to write today's journal.

Today is my 305th journal writing(time, or day) writing in my journal every day, so I was worried ifthat I couldn't write my today's journal. Today is my 305th (time, or day) writing in my journal every day, so I was worried that I couldn't write today's journal.

1. In the first part, you can say "writing journals every day", "journaling every day"...There are many ways to say this part :) "journal writing" is also okay (if you mean it like journal-writing), but in that case you can just say "journaling". 2. "write my today's journal" (X) sounds a bit unusual. You can say: "write today's journal", "write my journal for the day", or "write my journal today" ("today" in the last one is an adverb, not an adjective)

In the notification message, I wasn't the minimum correction ratio (1.0) to write a new journal.


In tThe notification message, I wasn't said that I didn't have the minimum correction ratio (1.0) to write a new journal. The notification message said that I didn't have the minimum correction ratio (1.0) to write a new journal.

In the notification message, I wasn't at the minimum correction ratio (1.0) needed to write a new journal. In the notification message, I wasn't at the minimum correction ratio (1.0) needed to write a new journal.

In the notification message, it said I wasn't at the minimum correction ratio (1.0) to write a new journal. In the notification message, it said I wasn't at the minimum correction ratio (1.0) to write a new journal.

When I saw the notification for the first time, I was shocked because I should help others' sentences more than 1300 comments.


When I saw the notification for the first time, I was shocked because I shouldhave helped others' sentences more than 1300 commenttimes. I was shocked because I have helped others' sentences more than 1300 times.

You mentioned in the previous sentence that you just saw the notification, so you don't have to state it again in this sentence.

When I saw the notification for the first time, I was shocked because I should helphave corrected others' sentences more than 1,300 commenttimes. When I saw the notification for the first time, I was shocked because I have corrected others' sentences more than 1,300 times.

When I saw the notification for the first time, I was shocked because I shwould have to help others' sentences through more than 1300 comments. When I saw the notification for the first time, I was shocked because I would have to help others' sentences through more than 1300 comments.

I think you mean that to reach that ratio, you must make 1300 comments, right? I changed "should" to "would have to" because it makes that more clear in my opinion.

For increasing the ratio, I tried to write comments on old sentences in Korean which were written more than 1 years ago.


ForTo increasinge the ratio, I tried to write comments on older sentences in Korean which were written more than 1 years ago. To increase the ratio, I tried to write comments on older sentences in Korean which were written more than 1 year ago.

"In order to increase the ratio" can also work here.

ForTo increasinge the ratio, I tried to write comments on old sentences in Korean which were written more than 1a years ago. To increase the ratio, I tried to write comments on old sentences in Korean which were written more than a year ago.

For increasing the ratio, I tried to write comments on old sentences in Korean which were written more than 1 years ago. For increasing the ratio, I tried to write comments on old sentences in Korean which were written more than 1 year ago.

Fortunately, there were 25 sentences which were no correction comment.


Fortunately, there were 25 sentences which were no correction commenthat have not been corrected yet. Fortunately, there were 25 sentences that have not been corrected yet.

Fortunately, there were 25 sentences which were nothat didn't have any correction comments. Fortunately, there were 25 sentences that didn't have any corrections.

Fortunately, there were 25 sentences which werehad no correction comment. Fortunately, there were 25 sentences which had no correction comment.

With more than 370 corrections, I finished writing all of them, then it is possible to write a new journal now.


With more than 370 corrections, I finished writing all of them, thenand it is possible to write a new journal now. With more than 370 corrections, I finished writing all of them, and it is possible to write a new journal now.

WithAfter writing/finishing more than 370 corrections, I finished writing all of them, then it is possible for me to write a new journal now. After writing/finishing more than 370 corrections, it is possible for me to write a new journal now.

With more than 370 corrections, I finished writing all of them, thenso it is possible for me to write a new journal now. With more than 370 corrections, I finished writing all of them, so it is possible for me to write a new journal now.

I added "for me" because I think it sounds better, but it is okay to omit it.

Writing journals on this site is one of my pleasures these days, so I am finally relaxed.


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