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1. All words at the beginning of a sentence must be capitalized.
2. “In the beginning” sounds odd here, putting “first” after “when you” sounds better.
3. “You were excited” does not work here and sounds off, “you’re/you are excited” works.
4. I changed a lot of the phrasing here, while it works and I can understand what you’re trying to say, it sounds very unnatural.
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This is a good start, it was a bit confusing and I had to think for a moment on what you were trying to say, but I think I mostly understood. There are quite a few spelling and grammar errors though, so I recommend that you try and focus on your spelling. English spelling can be a bit weird and sometimes a bit stupid, but with enough practice you can get the hang of it!
wWhen you learn something new
in the begining when you star toWhen you learn something you were exisited sofor the first time, you don't see thefind it difficulte for it ,then on the time the feeling will be encrease in this time you since it's exciting. But as time goes on, the difficulty may increase. In times like this, you may feel you needwant to stop. I ewould advicse you to still learn don't stopcontinue learning!
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Good attempt! I understand what you're trying to say, but the text had some grammatical issues. Keep going!
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in the begining when you star to learn somthing you were exisited so you don't see the dificulte for it ,then on the time the feeling will be encrease in this time you feel you need to stop I edvice you to still learn don't stop
1. All words at the beginning of a sentence must be capitalized. 2. “In the beginning” sounds odd here, putting “first” after “when you” sounds better. 3. “You were excited” does not work here and sounds off, “you’re/you are excited” works. 4. I changed a lot of the phrasing here, while it works and I can understand what you’re trying to say, it sounds very unnatural.
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when you learn somthing new
All words of a title should be capitalized, minus a few exceptions like words like “of” and “and”.
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