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Information Technology and How it Affects Democracy

Democracy, used to be said, was a reliable system, and able to confront any obstacle. However, recently events around the world have exposure the weaknessess of this system of government, and the problems that this system carries with.

Throughout the world, masive manifestations have taken place. Besides, there is a constantly tendences towards making democracy a face to face battle, where two polarized ideas wrestle for power. The current situation has its origin in the rise of the modern "information technology."

Let us take a look at social media. Although innofesive at first glance, has divided society in two parts, not only in political issues, but in almost all the things related to social life. In the same way, news have been also a means of dividing society, mainly because the people who use mobile phones tend to search only the things which are related with their own ideas. Thus, they only receive what they want to hear, therefore ignoring the other´s ideas. As a result, people prefer to hear populist politicians than to hear reliable and factual information. Undoubtedly, this is a big threat to democracy.

To sum up, technology is, has been, and will be a menace to democracy, but resides on the capacity of democracy to get used to this new "fellow" and to establish constraints when it is necessary his own survival. Only with this approach, democracy will be guaranteed to the future generations, so freedom will be safe.

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Information Technology and How it Affects Democracy


Democracy, used to be said, was a reliable system, and able to confront any obstacle.


Democracy, used to be said, wasviewed as being a reliable system, and able to confront that can face any obstacle. Democracy used to be viewed as being a reliable system that can face any obstacle.

Democracy,It used to be said, that democracy was a reliable system, and able to confront any obstacle. It used to be said that democracy was a reliable system, and able to confront any obstacle.

However, recently events around the world have exposure the weakness of this system of government, and the problems that this system carries with.


Throughout the world, masive manifestations have taken place.


Throughout the world, masive manifestations have taken place. Throughout the world, masive manifestations have taken place.

you could also use the word "protests"

Throughout the world, massive manifedemonstrations have taken place. Throughout the world, massive demonstrations have taken place.

Besides, there is a constantly tendences towards making the democracy a face to face battle, where two polarized ideas wrestle for power.


The current situation has its origin in the rise of the modern "information technology.


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Let us take a look at social media.


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Although innofesive at first glance, has divided society in two parts, not only in political issues, but in almost all the things related to social life.


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In the same way, news have been also a means of dividing society, mainly because the people who use mobile phones tend to search only the things which are related with their own ideas.


In the same way, news have been also a means ofs also played a role in dividing the society, mainly because the people who use mobile phones tend to search only for the things which are related withthat support their own ideas. In the same way, news has also played a role in dividing the society, mainly because people who use mobile phones tend to search only for the things that support their own ideas.

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Thus, they only receive what they want to hear, therefore ignoring the other´s ideas.


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As a result, people prefer to hear to populist politicians than to hear reliable and factual information.


Undoubtedly, this is a big threat to democracy.


Undoubtedly, this ishas been and will continue to be a big threat to democracy. Undoubtedly, this has been and will continue to be a big threat to democracy.

To sum up, technology is, has been, and will be a menace to democracy, but resides on the capacity of democracy to get used to this new "fellow" and to establish constraints when it is necessary his survival.


Only with this approach, democracy will be guaranteed to the future generations, so freedom will be safe.


Only with this approach, could democracy willand freedom be guaranteed to thefor future generations, so freedom will be safe. Only with this approach could democracy and freedom be guaranteed for future generations.

Only with this approach, will democracy will be guaranteed to the future generations, so freedom will be safeand freedom will be safe for future generations. Only with this approach, will democracy and freedom will be safe for future generations.

However, recently events around the world have exposure the weakness of this system of government, and the problems that this system carries with.


However, recently events around the world have exposure the weaknessess of this system of government, and the problems that this system carries with.


However, recently events around the world have exposured the weaknessess of this system of government, and the problems thatof this system carries with. However, recently events around the world have exposed the weaknessess and the problems of this system.

However, recently events around the world have exposured the weaknessess of this system of government, and the problems that this system carries withits inherent problems. However, recently events around the world have exposed the weakness of this system of government, and its inherent problems.

Besides, there is a constantly tendences towards making democracy a face to face battle, where two polarized ideas wrestle for power.


BesidesIn a democracy, there is a constantly tendences towards making democracy a face to face battle, whery to have two polarizeding ideaologies wrestle each other for power. In a democracy, there is a constant tendency to have two polarizing ideologies wrestle each other for power.

BesidesAlso, there is a constantly tendencesy towards making democracy a face to face imply that democracy is a battle, where two polarized ideacamps wrestle for power. Also, there is a constantly tendency to imply that democracy is a battle, where two polarized camps wrestle for power.

The ideas are not battling, the people are battling

As a result, people prefer to hear populist politicians than to hear reliable and factual information.


As a result, people prefer to hear populist politicians than to hearrather than reliable and factual information. As a result, people prefer to hear populist politicians rather than reliable and factual information.

As a result, people prefer to hearlisten to populist politicians than to hear reliable and factual information. As a result, people prefer to listen to populist politicians than to hear reliable and factual information.

To sum up, technology is, has been, and will be a menace to democracy, but resides on the capacity of democracy to get used to this new "fellow" and to establish constraints when it is necessary his own survival.


To sum up, technology is, has been, and will continue to be a menace to democracy, but resides on the capacity of democracy to get used to this new "fellow" and to establish constraints when it is necessary his own survival. To sum up, technology has been and will continue to be a menace to democracy, but resides on the capacity of democracy to get used to this new "fellow" and to establish constraints when it is necessary his own survival.

I'm not sure I understand the second part of your sentence. Whose survival? who is the "new fellow? technology or new media?

To sum up, technology is, has been, and will be a menace to democracy, but. The future of democracy resides oin the capacity of democracy to get used to this new "fellow" and to establish the constraints when it isich are necessary hifor its own survival. To sum up, technology is, has been, and will be a menace to democracy. The future of democracy resides in the capacity of democracy to get used to this new "fellow" and to establish the constraints which are necessary for its own survival.

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