July 20, 2020
Research phase of the project
Aiming to learn more about the problem of “digital boundaries” as well as to inform personas and future ideas, we decided to conduct a couple of user interviews. Our interview goal was to find out users' experience of working from home. In particular, whether they’re able to distinguish between private and work, and where they feel there’re challenges and opportunities. Our target group was people living in Germany who are able to work from home.
In the course of interview preparation, we developed the list of questions divided into the following categories: working from home preference; boundaries between work and private life; distraction factors.
As a result, we conducted ten interviews with people of different ages, who have different professions, working situations. After that, we analyzed their answers using affinity-diagramming techniques.
Based on our interview and desk research we created two personas with various needs, experiences, behaviors, and goals. Then we used these personas for our next step — design thinking workshop.
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Research phase of the project
AimingIn order to learn more about the problem of “digital boundaries” as well as to inform personas and future ideasorient our future research, we decided to conduct a couple of user interviews.
In order to learn more about the problem of “digital boundaries” as well as to orient our future research, we decided to conduct a couple of user interviews.
"aiming to" is not wrong, just sounds a bit unusual. I don't understand what you mean by "inform personas."
Our interview goal was to find out about our product users' experience ofwith working from home.
Our interview goal was to find out about our product users' experience with working from home.
I wasn't sure whether "users" would be the right word. Users of what? If there is a product or service involved, it should perhaps be mentioned.
In particular, whether they’re able to distinguish between private life and work, and where they feel there’ are challenges and opportunities.
In particular, whether they’re able to distinguish between private life and work, and where they feel there are challenges and opportunities.
Our target group was people living in Germany who are able to work from home.
In the course of interview preparation, we developed thea list of questions divided into the following categories: working from home preference; boundaries between work and private life; distraction factors.
In the course of interview preparation, we developed a list of questions divided into the following categories: working from home preference; boundaries between work and private life; distraction factors.
As a result, we conducted ten interviews with people of different ages, who have different professions, and working situations.
As a result, we conducted ten interviews with people of different ages, who have different professions and working situations.
Based on our interviews and desk researchreview of the literature, we created two personas with various needs, experiences, behaviors, and goals.
Based on our interviews and review of the literature, we created two personas with various needs, experiences, behaviors, and goals.
Then we used these personas for our next step —: a design thinking workshop.
Then we used these personas for our next step: a design thinking workshop.
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Unfortunately I know nothing about this field, so I can't tell whether I'm correcting specialized vocabulary that was actually correct. But I must say it is somewhat opaque to the layperson. Good writing though!
July 21, 2020
Thank you for such detailed comments!
July 21, 2020
I don’t want to correct the corrections (sic) already made but as has been said - this is really good writing! I work from home and i can see very well what you’re trying to determine :-)
It really pleased me to see your use of ":", ";" and "." - to the best of my knowledge you have used them perfectly. I once wrote a report for my manager and it included a list of items in much the same way as your text does. My manager edited the report and removed the semicolons at the end of each list item... I wasn't pleased!
This is great work!
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Research phase of the project This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Aiming to learn more about the problem of “digital boundaries” as well as to inform personas and future ideas, we decided to conduct a couple of user interviews.
"aiming to" is not wrong, just sounds a bit unusual. I don't understand what you mean by "inform personas." |
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Our interview goal was to find out users' experience of working from home.
Our interview goal was to find out about our product users' experience I wasn't sure whether "users" would be the right word. Users of what? If there is a product or service involved, it should perhaps be mentioned. |
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In particular, whether they’re able to distinguish between private and work, and where they feel there’re challenges and opportunities.
In particular, whether they’re able to distinguish between private life and work, and where they feel there |
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Our target group was people living in Germany who are able to work from home. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In the course of interview preparation, we developed the list of questions divided into the following categories: working from home preference; boundaries between work and private life; distraction factors.
In the course of interview preparation, we developed |
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As a result, we conducted ten interviews with people of different ages, who have different professions, working situations.
As a result, we conducted ten interviews with people of different ages, who have different professions |
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After that, we analyzed their answers using affinity-diagramming techniques. |
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Based on our interview and desk research we created two personas with various needs, experiences, behaviors, and goals.
Based on our interviews and |
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Then we used these personas for our next step — design thinking workshop.
Then we used these personas for our next step |
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