Aug. 2, 2020
Day 4
Hello again!
Offtopic: I want to thank the people who corrected my last entries. I really appreciate your corrections and feedback, they are very helpful.
This year I did a master's degree, but because of COVID-19 I couldn't finish my final project in time, so I worked on it during the morning. Thankfully, they gave me more time to finish it.
After lunch, I took a nap on my sofa under the air conditioning. Later, I went to the optical shop to buy sunglasses and take a walk around the city center. Me and my parents met there and we drunk a cocktail in a rooftop bar. It was nice and cool but a bit expensive.
At 20.20 I saw the live from NASA where the astronauts who did the first SpaceX fly with humans came back to earth from the International Space Station. I love space related stuff and, whenever I can, I like to see rockets launch and that kind of things. Maybe in the future I might talk more about space.
That's it for today.
Thanks and see you tomorrow!
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Me and my parents and I met there and we druank a cocktail in a rooftop bar.
My parents and I met there and we drank a cocktail in a rooftop bar.
At 20.208:20 p.m. I saw the live stream from NASA where the astronauts who did the first SpaceX flyight with humans came back to earth from the International Space Station.
At 8:20 p.m. I saw the live stream from NASA where the astronauts who did the first SpaceX flight with humans came back to earth from the International Space Station.
I love space related stuff and, whenever I can, I like to see rockets launch and that kind of things.
I love space related stuff and whenever I can, I like to see rockets launch and that kind of thing.
Day 4
Hello again!
Off topic: I want to thank the people who corrected my last entries. Off topic: I want to thank the people who corrected my last entries.
I really appreciate your corrections and feedback, they are very helpful.
This year I did a master's degree, but because of COVID-19 I couldn't finish my final project in time, so I worked on it during thethis morning.
This year I did a master's degree, but because of COVID-19 I couldn't finish my final project in time, so I worked on it this morning.
sounds a little more native this way
Thankfully, they gave me more time to finish it.
After lunch, I took a nap on my sofa under the air conditioning.
Later, I went to the optical shop to buy sunglasses and take a walk around the city center.
Me and my parents met there and we had a druink a cocktail int a rooftop bar.
Me and my parents met there and we had a drink at a rooftop bar.
"had a drink" is more colloquial/native
It was nice and cool but a bit expensive.
At 20.20 I saw the livestream from NASA where the astronauts who did the first SpaceX flyight with humans came back to earth from the International Space Station.
At 20.20 I saw the livestream from NASA where the astronauts who did the first SpaceX flight with humans came back to earth from the International Space Station.
I love space related stuff and, whenever I can, I like to see rockets launch and thatose kinds of things.
I love space related stuff and, whenever I can, I like to see rockets launch and those kinds of things.
Maybe in the future I might talk more about space.
That's it for today.
Thanks and see you tomorrow!
Feedback
Your English is really strong!
Day 4
Hello again!
Offtopic: I want to thank the people who corrected my last entries.
I really appreciate your corrections and feedback, they are very helpful.
This year I did a master's degree, but because of COVID-19 I couldn't finish my final project in time, so I worked on it during the morning.
Thankfully, they gave me more time to finish it.
After lunch, I took a nap on my sofa under the air conditioning.
Later, I went to the optical shop to buy sunglasses and take a walk around the city center.
Me and my parents met there and we drunk a cocktail in a rooftop bar.
It was nice and cool but a bit expensive.
At 20.20 I saw the live stream from NASA where the astronauts who did the first SpaceX flyight with humans came back to earth from the International Space Station.
At 20.20 I saw the live stream from NASA where the astronauts who did the first SpaceX flight with humans came back to earth from the International Space Station.
I love space related stuff and, whenever I can, I like to see rockets launch and that kind of things.
I love space related stuff and, whenever I can, I like to see rockets launch and that kind of thing.
Maybe in the future I might talk more about space.
That's it for today.
Thanks and see you tomorrow!
Feedback
Nice! I hope you get your master's degree!
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