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The current Colombian’s president gives a proposal about reduce of external debt, in exchange for governments make an inversion of care and environmental recovery.He is arguing that institutions like IDB, and others, do not do effective investments in this kind of problematic. Moreover, the governments can use their resource for environmental recovery in the way that they know is the best for their territories, and next get a discount in external debt.

ONG's, communities, organizations agree with the proposal, due to the increased global warming effects. Forest fires, desertification, high temperatures, are our reality, and we need to affront the problematic as soon as possible, before it is too late.

Even, if this idea sounds good, is difficult to make this possible, because to bureaucracy and interest of governments and big organizations to keep economics priorities, over lives needs.

In conclusion. We can not agree, even if We are up against time, for keeping our lives.

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The current Colombian’s president gives a proposal about reduce of external debt, in exchange for governments make an inversion of care and environmental recovery.He is arguing that institutions like IDB, and others, do not do effective investments in this kind of problematic.


The current Colombian’s president gives a proposal about the reducetion of external debt, in exchange for other governments make aning inversions of care and helping environmental recovery. He is arguing that institutions like IDB, and others, do not domake effective investments in this kind of problematic. The current Colombian president gives a proposal about the reduction of external debt in exchange for other governments making inversions of care and helping environmental recovery. He is arguing that institutions like IDB and others do not make effective investments in this kind of problem.

I had to switch the first sentence around a bit due to the use of the word inversion here.

The current Colombian’s president givesis giving a proposal abouto reduce ofur external debt, in exchange for governments makeing an inversion of stment in healthcare and environmental recovery. He is arguing that institutions like IDB, and others, do not do effective investments in this kind of problematic. The current Colombian president is giving a proposal to reduce our external debt in exchange for governments making an investment in healthcare and environmental recovery. He is arguing that institutions like IDB, and others, do not do effective investments in this kind of problematic.

I'm not sure if I understood, is this right? Inversión / Investment

The current Colombian’s president gives a proposal aboutPresident of Colombia proposed to reduce of external debt, in exchange for governments make an inversion ofinverting local government spending on care and environmental recovery. He is arguinges that institutions like IDB, and others, do not doinvest effective investmentsly in this kind of problemsituaticon. The current President of Colombia proposed to reduce external debt in exchange for inverting local government spending on care and environmental recovery. He argues that institutions like IDB and others, do not invest effectively in this kind of situation.

Moreover, the governments can use their resource for environmental recovery in the way that they know is the best for their territories, and next get a discount in external debt.


Moreover, the governments can use their resource for environmental recovery in the way that they know isconsider the best for their territories, and nextin return get a discount in external debt. Moreover, the governments can use their resource for environmental recovery in the way that they consider the best for their territories, and in return get a discount in external debt.

Next doesn't work well in this context

Moreover, the governments can use their resources for environmental recovery in the way that they know is the best for their territories, and nextthen get a discount ion external debt. Moreover governments can use their resources for environmental recovery in the way that they know is the best for their territories, and then get a discount on external debt.

Cuando hablas de una idea general y inespecífico, no debes incluir un artículo: The car is red. (Specific) Cars have four wheels. (General) The government of Colombia is working on a proposal. (Specific) Governments can use their resources how they see fit. (General)

Moreover, the governmentlocal municipalities can use their resources for environmental recovery in the ways that they know is thare best for their territories, and next get, additionally, receive a discount in external debt. Moreover, the local municipalities can use their resources for environmental recovery in ways that they know are best for their territories and, additionally, receive a discount in external debt.

ONG's, communities, organizations agree with the proposal, due to the increased global warming effects.


ONG's, communities, and organizations agree with the proposal, due to the increased global warming effects. ONG's communities and organizations agree with the proposal, due to the increased global warming effects.

ONG'Os, communities, organizations agree with the proposal, due to the increased global warming effects. NGOs, communities, organizations agree with the proposal, due to the increased global warming effects.

ONG en inglés: Non-Government Organizations (NGO)

ONGO's, communities, and organizations agree with theis proposal, due to the increased in order to reduce global warming effects. NGO's, communities, and organizations agree with this proposal in order to reduce global warming effects.

NGO = Non Government Agency

Forest fires, desertification, high temperatures, are our reality, and we need to affront the problematic as soon as possible, before it is too late.


Forest fires, desertification, high temperatures, are our reality, and we need to affrontddress the problematic as soon as possible, before it is too late. Forest fires, desertification, high temperatures are our reality, and we need to address the problem as soon as possible, before it is too late.

Forest fires, desertification, and high temperatures, are our reality, andso we need to afconfront the problematic as soon as possible, before it is too late. Forest fires, desertification, and high temperatures are our reality, so we need to confront the problem as soon as possible before it is too late.

Forest fires, desertification, and high temperatures, are our current reality, and we need to afconfront the problematic as soon as possible, before it is too late. Forest fires, desertification, and high temperatures are our current reality and we need to confront the problem as soon as possible before it is too late.

Even, if this idea sounds good, is difficult to make this possible, because to bureaucracy and interest of governments and big organizations to keep economics priorities, over lives needs.


Even, if this idea sounds good, it is difficult to make this possible, because tof bureaucracy and interest of governments and big organizations to keep economics priorities, over livesthe needs. of the people Even if this idea sounds good, it is difficult to make this possible, because of bureaucracy and interest of governments and big organizations to keep economic priorities over the needs of the people

Even, if this idea sounds good, is difficult to make this possible,it happen because to bureaucracy and interest of governments, government interests, and big organizations to keephold economics priorities, over the lives needsof the people. Even if this idea sounds good, is difficult to make it happen because bureaucracy, government interests, and big organizations hold economic priorities over the lives of the people.

Even, if this idea sounds good, it is difficult to make ithis possible, because tohe bureaucracy and interest of local governments and big organizations to keep economics priorities,continue to prioritize economics over livesthe needs of people. Even if this idea sounds good, it is difficult to make it possible because the bureaucracy and interest of local governments and big organizations continue to prioritize economics over the needs of people.

In conclusion.


In conclusion., In conclusion,

This is not a complete sentence, but a starter to a sentence. Combine it with the next sentence :)

In conclusion., In conclusion,

In conclusion.

This is a sentence fragment so I deleted it and appended it to the next sentence.

We can not agree, even if We are up against time, for keeping our lives.


We can not agree, even if Wthough we are up against time, foron keeping our lives. We can not agree, even though we are up against time, on keeping our lives.

Wwe can not agree, even if Wwe are up against time, for keepingto save our lives. we can not agree even if we are up against time, to save our lives.

I combined these two sentences.

We can notIn conclusion, we won't be able to agree, even if Wwe are up against time, for keeping our lives. In conclusion, we won't be able to agree even if we are up against time.

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