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b230tri

May 29, 2022

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Her who is caring

She has a sewing machine. Most useful things she had made were the sanitary pads. A year ago, she made them. In the past, she used to use the disposable sanitary pads or the menstrual cup. But she didn't seem to like both of them. So she decided to make them by herself. She bought some cotton fabric and made it. It's stunning. She was a beginner of the sewing machine. She gifted them to her friends. I know it's not easy to use because you have to wash them by yourself. You should soak them into the cold water first and then you wash it with hot water.
She also made the dishcloths and gifted them to others. She's very caring. Today, there was a friend on the street working. He is doing election promotion works holding a sign. The sun has been getting hotter recently. She found him accidently and ran to him. She bought a cold drink and gave it to him. He was my friend too but I didn't think of giving him a drink. She really made her thought to real. It's a generous caring skill that I don't have.


Please tell me various expressions

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Most useful things she had made were the sanitary pads.

The superlative requires adefinite article "THE most useful things"

But she didn't seem to like both of them.

In this situation, "either" works better than both

She was a beginner of the sewing machine.

In this sentence "with" works better than "of", as it is a machine that is being used by someone

You should soak them into the cold water first and then you wash it with hot water.

The double subject "you..you" is not necessary. Because we already know "you" is the subject, we can leave it out of the second part of the sentence, saying "and then wash it with hot water"

She really made her thought to real.

This sentence seems strange...
"to" is not an adjective, in this case the word "too" would be used instead

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beepilicious

May 29, 2022

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Regarding the title, in English it would be more commonly said "SHE who is caring" rather than "HER who is caring". Her is the objective case which is not common in titles that are in the nominative

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b230tri

May 29, 2022

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Regarding the title, in English it would be more commonly said "SHE who is caring" rather than "HER who is caring". Her is the objective case which is not common in titles that are in the nominative

Thank you for explaining this clearly.

Her who is caring


She has a sewing machine.


Most useful things she had made were the sanitary pads.


Most useful things she had made were the sanitary pads.

The superlative requires adefinite article "THE most useful things"

A year ago, she made them.


In the past, she used to use the disposable sanitary pads or the menstrual cup.


But she didn't seem to like both of them.


But she didn't seem to like both of them.

In this situation, "either" works better than both

So she decided to make them by herself.


She bought some cotton fabric and made it.


It's stunning.


She was a beginner of the sewing machine.


She was a beginner of the sewing machine.

In this sentence "with" works better than "of", as it is a machine that is being used by someone

She gifted them to her friends.


I know it's not easy to use because you have to wash them by yourself.


You should soak them into the cold water first and then you wash it with hot water.


You should soak them into the cold water first and then you wash it with hot water.

The double subject "you..you" is not necessary. Because we already know "you" is the subject, we can leave it out of the second part of the sentence, saying "and then wash it with hot water"

She also made the dishcloths and gifted them to others.


She's very caring.


Today, there was a friend on the street working.


He is doing election promotion works holding a sign.


The sun has been getting hotter recently.


She found him accidently and ran to him.


She bought a cold drink and gave it to him.


He was my friend too but I didn't think of giving him a drink.


She really made her thought to real.


She really made her thought to real.

This sentence seems strange... "to" is not an adjective, in this case the word "too" would be used instead

It's a generous caring skill that I don't have.


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